Kriyaansh and Swaron ff "LOVE CHANGES LIFE" - Page 6

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Part 2

Party

Swayam enters and bumps to Sharon.

Swayam: hosh! Tum dekhkar nahi chal sakti?

Sharon: tum dekhkar nahi chal sakte?

Swayam: tum...

Sharon: kria! (She goes and swayam too leaves)

Kria: hi Sharon..

Sharon: kya hua?

Kria: main thik toh lag rahi hun na??

Sharon: u r perfect! Chal come in.

After some times

Kria was going with two glasses of drink and she suddenly bumps to a lady.

Lady: oh my god! What have u done!

Kria: I m really sorry ma'am galti se... maine dekha nahi.

Lady: andhi ho jo dikhta nahi?

Sharon: usne kaha na galti se hua... aap itni choti si baat ka itna bada issue kyun bana rahi hai?

Lady: aapko shouk hoga naukron ko sar pe chadhane ka, mujhe nahi hai.

Sharon: excuse me!

Lady: bura mat manna, par in logon se aise hi baat karni chahiye warna inki bartameezi badh zati hai.

Rey: enough! Enough is enough! Aap badi hain, issliye aunty main aapse request kar raha hun, jane dijiye. Pehli baat, kis angle se kria aapko servant lagti hai? wo b aphi k tarah hamari mehmaan hai. aur dusri  baat, agar aap meri party main insult nahi hona chahti toh yahn se chale jayiye. she leaves angrily followed by othrs.

Sharon: I m sorry Kria, meri wajah se tujhe kitna kuch sunna pada...

Kria: Sharon! Isme teri kya galti? Paglon jaise baat mat kar.

Sharon: maine hi toh kaha tha tumse drink lane ko. Anjane me hi ssahi, par mujhse galti hui hai kria!

Rey: yes! U r right! Galti tumsse hui hai. tumhe itni b akal nahi Sharon k mehmanon ki khatirdaari karni chahiye, naa ki unse kaam krwana chahiye?

Sharon: sorry Rey...

Rey: sorry? Sharon tumhari wajah se hamare party me kria ki inslt hui, verma aunty ne use servant kaha, and u r sorry???

Swayam: calm down rey, usne jaan baajh kar thodi kiya?

Rey: exactly! Soch samajhkar karti toh yeh sab nahi hota. I can't believe k tum itni irresponsible ho sakti ho!

Sharon's eyes fill with tears and she runs away.

Kria: Sharon...!

Reyam looks. Rey becomes tense and keeps his hands on his hips. Swayam looks at kria and leaves.

Kria: reyaansh!

He turns.

Kria: yeh aapne thik nahi kiya.

Rey: kria...

Kria: apko Sharon se aise baat nahi karni chahiiye thi.

Rey: par main...

Kria: wo apki behen hai, kamse kam is baat ka toh khayal karte.

Rey: haan lekin...

Kria: kya bit rahi hogi uspar jo bewajah apne use daant dia, aura b aap...

Rey: stop! Meri baat suno!

Kria: reyaansh...

Rey; main gusse me tha iss liye control nahi hua aur Sharon par chilla diya.

Kria: par main...

Rey: I know mujhe use iss tarah baat nahi karni chahiye thi par main kya karta?

Kria: haan lekin...

Rey: use zaroor baht boora laga hoga par sirf wahi toh meri apni hai, issliye sara gussa uspar utaar dia. Lekin tum ho ki meri koi baat hi sunna nahi chati... tumhara naam Kria nahi "Baat Cutter" hona chahiye tha!

She looks at him widening her eyes.

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Sharon was sitting in the garden, crying. Swayam comes. He requests his hanky to her. She looks up and takes it.

Sharon: tum yahan kyun aye ho?

Swayam: (sits beside) tumhara dukh baantne.

She looks at him he smiles.

Swayam: mazzak kar raha hun... Sharon, main rey ka dost hun, use baht achi tarah janta hun aur yeh b k uski baton ka tumhe bur laga hoga par...

Sharon: par?? Par kya? Tumne dekha nahi usne mujhe kaise daanta?

Swayam: wo tumhara bada bhai hai, tumhe daantna fatkarna, uska haq hai..

Sharon: han.. wo mera bada bhai hai, mujhe daantna fatkarna, uska haq hai... par mere dil ko chot pahunchana, kya yeh b uska haq hai?

Swayam: rey ka apna kehne ko tumhare alawa aur koi nahi hai, apna samajhkar dil ki bhadaas usne tum par utaar di, aur jinse hum pyar karte hain, unhise toh ladhte hain.. agar tum use nahi samjhogi toh kaun samjhega?

Sharon stands up and swayam too.

Sharon: sayad tum thik keh rahe ho... kabhi kabhi samajhdaari ki baatien kar lete ho...

Swayam looks her widening his eyes. Sharon turns to go. Then again turns.

Sharon: swayam... thank you!

She leaves. Swayam smiles and leaves too.

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Kriyaansh standing facing each other. Kria widening her eyes.

Rey(in mind): yeh tu kya bol gaya rey! Tu aise hi kria ko koi b nickname kaise de sakta hai? pata nahi wo kya soch rahi hogi...

Sharon comes.

Sharon: rey!

Kriayaansh looks. Sharon comes and hugs rey. Swayam comes.

Sharey: I m sorry!!

Sharon: tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho

Rey: main bewajah tum par chillaya, bhai behen k riste ka lihaaz tak nahi kiya.

Sharon; tumhari koi galti nahi, aur phir jinse hum pyar karte hai, unhise toh ladte hai..

Swayam smiles hearing this.

Rey: sayad meri Barbie doll sach much badi ho rahi hai...

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Night

Rey: yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Lakh koshis karne par b kyun nahi chipa pata main kria k liye apni feeling s ko? Agar use mera saath nahi chahiye, toh mujhe use force nahi karna chahiye.. par kaise chupayun main apna pyar?

Kria: Yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Jitna main rey se dur jane ki koshis karti hun, wo utna hi close aa jaate hain... main chahkar b unke kareeb nahi jaa sakti. Wo samajhte kyun nahi? Unhe kisi b tarah apni feeling dabani hogi,,, meri tarah!!

Swayam: Sharon! Choti Choti baat per o leti hai, ghamand me toh sabki maa hai! aur akad! Akar sirf mere samne hai... par kuch toh hai, jo bahut sweet hai... yeh tu kya soch rha hai swayam? Mat bhool wo opposition hai! tujhe usse jitna hai!

Sharon: Swayam! Hamesha ladta hai, par kabhi kabhi samajhdaari ki baat b kar leta hai.. Sweet hai, par idiot b! hamesha ladta hai, but ab toh uske fight ki adat ho gqayi hai!!! shut up Sharon! Tu yeh soch rahi hai? mat bhul, wo kabhi b attack kar sakta hai!

 

Kya yeh badalte riste layenge inki life me koi naya twist??????

 

Love

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago