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Heart~Welcome to the Thread 3 of The SS~Heart
 
 
 Heart~*~ Is it Hate or Love ~*~Heart
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First of all, I would like to thank all my readers from the bottom of my heart, for all the appreciation and love they have bestowed upon me in the last two threads.Big smile The love, affection and appreciation from you people mean the world to me.Big smile Had you guys not supported me so much, I would never have thought of writing a story.Embarrassed I again thank you all so much. I am so touched and overwhelmed from your love that I really go emotional at times.CryBig smile I hope that you people will continue to bless me with your love and appreciation and I also hope that I don't disappoint you. TongueBig smileThank You so very much again.Big smile
I cannot express in words, of how it feels to have completed two threads, and moving onto third thread.Big smile This simply shows how much you people love me. I really really am so happy. Big smile
I hope this thread too gets filled with your love. Big smile
 
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Bhavini Big smile


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ALL THE WAY ON THE TOP THERE IS A STOP BUTTON TO  STOP MUSIC...THANKS

Thank U so much Tani & Nanu for creating this beautiful thread. Entire UPDATE GANG for requesting update... YAAR ITNA PYAAR SABKO NAHI MILTA... I AM THE LUCKY ONE... Heart

This update I would like to delicate to Pallvi for her wonderful 3chapter Holi TS... which stole my heart... I was so stress due to lot of work this week ... even then...I have read her TS At least 5 times and every time read I laugh amazing Pallavi... hilarious Drunk Jodha ... love U Pallu...Hug

previous chapter
chapter 28 : page 137
Recap:

Behind every successful man, there is a strong, wise and hardworking woman... and which is very very true... Jodha is behind my first step towards success...What I am going to announce will became a history for tomorrow... It will be written in golden writing... With loud and confidence voice he continued, Hum yeh ellan karte hai... Hindu aur Mughals sab ek saman hai... AAj se Hindu aur Mushlim (Mughal) ke liye kayde ek saman honge...Harek Hindu ko pura haak hai ki vo kisi bhi Jagah ja sake... Aaj se sare bagiche aur madrasa (school) me Hindu bina kisi bandish ke ja sakte hai... AAj aur abhi se ye kayada sab par lagu hota hai... and with louder commending voice he further added: Aur iss hukum ki abhi is vakt se tamil ho... HIS LOUD VOICE ECHO BACK IN THE PALACE...HUKUM KI TAMIL HO... TAMIL HO...TAMIL HO. COMPLETE SILENCE... 

 

CHAPTER 29:

Dwk continue

Jodha with amusing bombshell face looked at Jalal... She never imagine even in her dream that Jalal will do something like this... ENTIRE DWK was in shock with this incredible... unexpected... astonishing... shocking... announcement... Few people's mouth opens in ample... some in shock their eyes widen... Rukaiya and Maham felt like somebody just pound hammer on their heads... All Maulvi's couldn't believe what they heard... Adham's eyes turned red in anger... Shariffudin was upset but felt happy inside since he knew politically Jalal will be in trouble with his own people... Happiest person was Hamida... She never visualizes that her ears will hear this soothing sound in her life... she felt he has fulfill his husband's wish... She felt now she can died peacefully ... First time she felt like calling him ... SHENSHAH... her lips widen with broad smile and eyes with happy tears... Her hand forward routinely to take Jalal's Bala (evil things)... Entire court was quite... hearing LOUD ROAR... HUKUM KI TAMIL HO TAMIL HO TAMIL HO... Little by little entire court filled with murmur...

Agdha sahib face had pleasant smile on it which was showing his agreement to this announcement... He got up with his hand up told everyone to be quite... Again stillness...  Agdha sahib looked at Jalal and said... Shenshah... hume appke iss  ilaan pe fakr hai... Aaj aapko bar bar Shenshah keh ne ko ji kar raha hai... Apke ye elaan se, Aap ek Muguhal ya Hindu ki Jagah ek Insaan ban gaye he... Puri riyaya ke annadata ban gaye hai... Hame aap par naaz hai... Jalal gave just little smirk to Aghdha since he was busy in observing others... 

He was watching everyone's expression, his witty eyes were judging what is coming next... He was waiting for bombshell... Maulvi got up from his sit... and Jalal said to himself... here you go... 

Maulvi with calm and respectful voice started: Hajoor gustakhi maaf par hum kuch arj  farmana chahte hai...

Jalal with serious expression... Kahiye Maulvi sahib... Kya farmana chahte hai aap...

Maulvi with complaining tone... Hajoor hum itna bada elaan sunke hum heraan reh gaye hai... Kya itna bada fesla karne se pehle hum sabki nasheehat (advice) leni uchit nahi hoti...

Jalal with very confident voice: Maulvi sahib aaj tak hum yahi karte aaye hai... aap sabki nasihat pe chalte aaye hai... hamare harek fesle ke piche kisi na kisiki soch rahi hai... bahot se logo ne humare dimag par ikhtihaar kiya hua hai... Hamare aaj tak ke Elaan... fesle... yaha tak ki hamari soch... pe kisi aur ka saya raha hai... 

Maulvi with argumative tone: par hajoor iss ellan se to Mughal logo, hamare apne log... un ke saath anyaay hoga...

Jalal with little anger but in very controlled manner he asked: Vo kese, Aap hume tafsheel (detail) se batayenge...Hamari kuch samaj me nahi aaya...

Maulvi with confusing tone: Iss fesle se Hindu aur Muslim me koi fark hi nahi rahega... Unke bachhe hamare baccho ke saath me khelenge aur padhenge... to hamare bachho ke bhavishya par bahut gehri asar hogi... Mughal Nasal Hindu se kahi guna behtar hai... vo log hamari bara bari kese kar sakte hai...

Jalal with witty tone: Maulvi Sahib, Aap hamare darbaar ki shaan hai... aur hame ye ummid nahi thi aapse... aap soch itni choti kese ho gayi... Kya aap ka khoon safed hai... aur hindu ka laal... aur ya fir aapke sir pe hire aur moti jade hue hai... Aap kese keh sakte ho ki... Mughal ki Nashal behtar hai... Kis baat me Hindu humse bara bari nahi kar sakte... Jodha begum ko hi le lijye vo hindu hai... aur bataiye kis baat me vo humari kisi bhi begum se kum ho to...

Maulvi knew he has lost in argument... He sat back to his chair with disappointed face...

Rukaiya with angry tone: Shenshah, Gushtaki ke liye mafi chahte hai... par hum Maulvi sahib ke mantavay se mutafiq (agree) karte hai... Aap ne Jo bhi bataya vo sab kitabo me hi acchal lagta hai... Kabhi hindu log Mughal ki bara bari nahi kar sakte...Ek baar gor farmaiye, Aur ye elaan ke karan aapko baad me pachtana na pade...

Jalal was really angry and shocked at Rukaiya... for the first time she was against Jalal's decision and she said in front of the court... Jodha saw Jalal's expression... he about to lose his control... She put her hand on his hand to calm him down... and make him realize he is in the court... 

Jalal looked at Jodha... Jodha with her eyes expression... told him to calm  down...

Jalal control his anger and responded: Rukaiya begum, hum aapse kuch puchna chahenge... Jalal continue... Andaja lagaiye...Aap aur Jodha begum bazar me ho aur aap dono ko ek hi zewar pasand aata hai... Aur vo dukandaar aapse dugna daam leta hai kyu ki aap Mughal ho, to aapko kesa lagega...

Rukaiya with upsetting tone: Isme to koi tark ki baat hai hi nahi Shenshah:  Hum us dukan daar ke haath katva denge...

Jalal with smile looked at Agdha sahib and asked him a question: Kya hamari saltanat me Hindu jati ko Mehsool bharna padta hai...

Agdha knew where Jalal is taking him: Ji Hajoor Hindu ko Mughal se dugna Mehsool bharna padta hai... 

He looked at Rukaiya with smirk and asked her... Kya lagta hai Rukaiya begum... dugna Mehsool bharne ke bavjud, yadi aapke bacho ko bagiche me aur madarsa me na le ja sako to aapko kesa lagega... Kya aap apne rajya ke baadshah ki izaat kar payengi? ... kya aap unhe dil se chah sakegi? ... Sochiye aap hindu ki jagah hoti to kesa mehsoos hota...?

Hum puri saltant ke badsaah he... hamare liye sab ek saman hone chahiye... and Yes I have made many mistakes in the past... but I have learned from my mistake... I will not cry for what I have done in the past but slowly and steadily, I will rectify my mistakes... I want love from all hindu and all mughles... every person who leave in my saltant... I want to be fair...

Rukaiya was shocked with this alteration in Jalal... She had nothing left to argue...

Jalal finally asked... Anyone else who has problem with my announcement... 

Adham with sarcasm: Aap Shenshah hai... aapka hi fesla aakhri hai... par hum ek baat puchna chahenge...   Achanak aaki soch me itna bada badlaav hai... uske piche koi Hindu hai ya Mughal...

Maham eyes widen, after listening to his stupid question to Jalal...

Jalal looked at him with angry look but with his calm voice asked him... What do you think Adham...? What is behind it...and who is behind it?

Maham prayed inside... hope Adham doesn't respond to this question...

Brainless Adham with angry tone back to Jalal: sabko pata hai yaha... aaj kal aap pe kiska jadoo chala hua hai... Aakhir usne apni aukat dikha hi di... AApko apne hushna ki jaal me fash hi liya... Jis din se uske kadam Agra me pade ushi din humne bata diya tha... Is NAAPAAK...

Before he says more...Jalal roared with anger... Adham...he pulled his sword out...and screamed how you dare speak to me like this... He ran towards him like angry tiger... but before his attack, Maham came in between them... She knew Jalal will kill Adham in a second... Adham had crossed all lines...

Entire court freeze seeing this scene... Everyone got up from their chair in fear... Jalal's anger was at the mountain... In extreme anger, He pushed Maham on a side... and lifts his sword to kill Adham but... Maham grab Jalal's feet...begged for his life... Seeing his badi ammi's tears and her condition... Jalal controlled his anger and said loudly aaj Akhri baar hum tumhe jinda chod rahe hai... Aaj tum yaha khade ho to sirf badi ammi ki vajah se...varna aaj tumhe koi humse bacha nahi sakta... Then he looked at Agdha sahib and said... take all subedari from Adham... I don't want to see him in DWK... He doesn't deserve to serve in my court...

Adham looked at Maham and Jalal with anger and walked out of the court...

Jalal went back to his seat and in resentment he addresses to everyone with his commending echo sound... I am a leader of this saltant... It is my responsibility to see my people are happy and feeling fair under my administration... What I see, you all don't see at this time... YES I admit that I am very ambitious... I want to acquire entire Hindustan... If my riyaya hates me than, I don't see I can fulfill my dream... Going forward every administrator of higher position will assign by me only... I want to see my darbaar equally filled with talented hindus and muslims... I am fully aware that, my decision will create antagonism by mughals... I AM READY TO FACE ANY PROBLEMS...but I want to have a fair Rule & Regulation for everyone... I want to hire most talented people to run the country... Finally with louder sound... I am requesting to everyone, who do not agree ... can give me their resignation now... No action will be taken against them... If you are working for me, than I want everyone to follow my order with their heart... I do respect each and every one's suggestion and opinion as long as it is fair and betterment for the riyaya... THIS IS MY FINAL DECISION... I WILL NOT CHANGE MY ANNOCEMENT...  I WANT EVERY ONE TO FOLLOW MY ORDERS IMMEDIATELY... He emphasis on IMMEDIATELY... he adjourned the court and walked out of there with anger and sorrow...

Jalal is in his room... heartrending... thinking about all the argument in dwk... almost entire court was against his decision... including Rukaiya... He recall Maham's helpless face,  He was in deep shock and stress... he was so excited before DWK... and all happiness vanished in stress...  today for the first time he took decision from his heart... but everyone against him... he was expecting this drama... but reality hit him hard... Adham and Ruku both added more fire into it... he was feeling upset and angry at the same time... 

Dasi walks in and said... Shenshah,  appse milne... before she finish her sentence... he said... I don't want to see any one at this time...

Dasi walked out and informed Jodha ... Jodha walked in to Jalal's room... Jalal is in deep thought... he is standing by zarokha... heard Jodha's payal... his stress started to melt just hearing sound of her payal... hearing sound of her payal he said to himself...

Har Ahaat pe baje Payal ki cham cham teri...

Jab tu chum se aaye dil se nikle aah meri

Ab to yeh aalam hai mohabbat ho gayi hai ghoogroo se teri

Ab aa bhi jao chum se baho me kahe har dhadkan meri

HA Muje mohabbat hai payal ki cham cham se teri

Without looking at her... he said hamari na ke bavjood aap yaha kyu aayi... and turned to look at her... she could clearly see line of stress on his head... 

Jodha felt his sound more clam and serious than angry... He looked at her with no expression... He suddenly recall... DWK drama... he completely forgot that he apologies to Jodha in the court and his change of behavior towards hindu ...he still doesn't know how she will react to it... his curiosity divert his mind a little.

To cheer him up... she went very close to him... encircled her hand on his neck and said in teasing sound... Hamare pati ke kaksh me aane ke liye hume kisiki anumati ki avashyakta nahi hai...with her touch and closeness  Jalal completely came out stress...and back to his full on mockery mood...  

Jalal with teasing tone... Vese hume koi masla (problem) nahi hai... aap jab chahe yaaha aa skati hai... Par Kahi hum kisi aur hamari begume khaas ke saath  aese gale lag rahe ho to... aapko sayad accha nahi lagta... 

Hearing this statement, she moved two steps back from him immediately... Jodha's Jealousy created anger... hume lagta hai aapko aekant ki hi avashayakta hai... Hum chalte hai...

Jodha turned with anger to walk away from his room... before she move further...Jalal pulled her towards him with jerk... thud... She crashed on Jalal's chest... Jalal tangled his both hands surrounding her waist and pulled her more towards him...

Jodha gave him an angry look... Shenshah hume jane dijye... Aap apni khaas begum ke saath khush rahiye... 

Jalal with smirk... To meri Junglee billi ko Jalan ho rahi hai... Hamari sari begum aap se jalti hai aur aap unse...  

Jodha looked at him with upsetting expression: Hume Jane dijye... aur haa hume koi fark nahi padta ... aap apni begum ke saath kya karte ho... 

Jalal with playful tone: Agar aapko koi fark nahi padta To apki ye choti si naak gubbare ki tarah ful kyu gayi hai...He cutely pulled her nose...  

Jodha with annoyance: Ab aapko humari naak se bhi aetraj hai... pehle to hum aapko bahot sundar dikhte the...  Jaiyena apni khass begumo ke paas...She pushes him to and tried to release herself from his grip... 

Jalal was enjoying her jalan ... with laugh he replied: Kyu Jane de aapko... abhi to kaha aapne hum aapke pati hai... to phir aake karib aane ka hamara hakk banta hai...

Jodha's anger still not cool down... Ha par shayad aap bhul rahe hai... ki aap ye haakk kho chuke hai... Aur ha aapke paas bahot begum hai... unke paas jaiye... hume pareshan mat kijye...

Jalal with little upset sound... Jodha begum soch ligye... ek baar chod diya to aap hi pastayegi...

Jodha without thinking hastily respond back... Dhamki kisi aur begum ko dena... hum kisise nahi darte... Thik he hum bhi dekhte hai... koun pastaye ga...

Jodha hurt his self-respect... Jalal with sorrowful expression... opened his grip from her waist...moved his hand towards Jodha's hand ...she was still holding his kurta...he grabbed her both hand and with jerk, he release his kurta and release her hand and said... Jaiye chod diya aapko... Gave her upset and angry look...Seeing pain in Jalal's eyes... her heart shatter in pieces...  

Jodha realized what she has done in her anger... She saw in his eyes... cold anger and sadness... before it get worst... She hugged him tight with tears and said hume maaf kar dijye...hamara irada aapko dukh pohchane ka nahi tha... Jalal surprised with sudden hug... he is still upset with her attitude... he didn't respond to her hug... she break hug and enclosed her hand towards his neck and kissed on his cheeks. Her hug and kiss completely melted Jalal... but he decided to pretend this act longer... he moved his cheeks on a side with pretending anger... she finally cupped his face with her little fingers and with tears she said,  aap hume bahut pareshan karte hai... har baar aap kyu kisi aur ko hamare bich me le aate he... kisi aur ko aap ke samip hone ke vichar se hi... hamare pure badan me aag lag jaati hai... hum aapko kisi ke karib nahi dekh sakte... aap kisi aur ke saath jo karna chahe kar sakte hai... par nahi ye hum sun sakte hai aur nahi dekh sakte hai... Jalal realized how deeply she loves him... He felt awful... both are looking at each other with immense love... she pulled herself very near to his lips... and waited for him to kiss her... Jalal was lost in his thoughts and feeling guilty for teasing her ... Jodha was waiting for him to respond ... his cold behavior she felt quake inside her heart... she swiftly back out and said in low tone with sad expression on her face...  Hume Khsma kar dijye Shenshah... hum chalte hai ... Her words...brought back Jalal ...he realized he ignore her...

 Jodha turn to go out of the room... before she move further...Jalal pulled her again and said... Jodha hume maaf kar dijye... yeh humne kabhi socha hi nahi ki hamri bato se aapko itni taklif pohchegi...Hum aapke siva kisi aur ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakte... Jabse hum aapke karib aaye hai hume kisi aur ko chuna bhi hame manjoor nahi... Jodha tumse jyada hum paresan hai... humari itni sari begum hai par hum kisi aur ke najdiki hume bardast nahi hoti... yaha tak ki jab Rukaiya begum humare karib aati hai... to hum ne koi gunah kiya ho aesa ehsaas hota hai... Hum aapse itni mohabbat karte hai ki sirf yeh zindgi nahi... Janmo Janam tak kisi aur ke bare me soch nahi sakte...  They both looked at each other with deep love...with smile she said... Shenshah hamara ye matlab nahi tha... aapki aur begum ka bhi aap par utna hi adhikar hai... aur unko kush rakhna apki jimmedari hai... Jalal with littler serious tone... kuch aur baat kare... Jodha looked at him with intense deep love and was feeling so lucky to have him...  

Jalal with grin... Ha To Jodha begum, aap abhi hame kuch karne vali this aur ruk kyu gayi... he put his finger on his lips and with signal he ask for kiss...
 
Jodha with playful tone... hmmm... hum kuch samje nahi  ... and gave him mischievous smirk...

Jalal with jerk pinned her to wall...gave her deep sensual gaze... She felt shy with his adoring glance... some of her hair came on her face was making her more beautiful... he blow air slowly on her face... that gave her goosebumps in her entire body... She moved her face in one direction with close eyes... her face was blushing and shinning in sparkling ray of sun... he put her hair behind ears...   he started to move his finger on her face sensually...

All of a sudden he stopped his finger and with little annoyance tone he said... pata hai mera sabse bada dushman koun hai... With surprised expression, she opened her eyes to look at him... then he said... ye apke zevar...har baar mere aur apke bich me diwar banke aa jate hai... She responds with giggle but in playful tone... Shenshah, App kham kha hi humare zevar ko badnam kar rahe ho... ho sakta hai aapki niyat hi kuch think na ho...He smirk at her witty answer and said in whisper ...Junglee billi, I won't spare you today... She looked at him with passionate look and said in undertone... Save yourself first Shenshah... Her sentence created intense excitement in him... He replied in sensual tone near her ears... let's see who wins...

his finger walk through her cheeks to her pink rosy soft lips...she closed her eyes... her body strain automatically towards him...she encircled her hands towards his neck ...he kissed on her eyes slowly... She felt touch of his wet lips on her cheeks which send million sparks... her heart was beating fast... She inclined herself more and more towards him... her lips were waiting desperately to touch his... he leaned his body towards hers... surrounded his hand to her open backless blouse... his touch again send shiver... He pulled her very close... slowly and sensually he licked on her ears... he lift her face up and deeply kissed on her neck and smooch a little... she hush a little... her moan create more passion... he moved his long necklace and filled her neck with trails of kisses...  They both were lost in passion... with the increasing passion their speed of movement was increasing...It's been almost more than fifteen days they been apart... Their desires for each other at the mountain... He looked at her face once again he saw a blush on her face and desire for kiss...he smirk... He moved to kiss her soft lustful rosy lips which was shivering for his touch... before he kiss he wanted to see in eyes for her approval ...he stopped his movement... and waited for her open her eyes... She slowly with shy expression opens her eyes... Their eyes communicate with smirk...  He moves his face to kiss her on lips... before he could kiss... they both of them heard noise of someone walking towards his room... She opened her eyes swiftly ... and almost pushed him away in shock...

Dasi walks in the room... Jalal gave her annoyed look and ask her Kahiye kya baat hai... She said that Vajire Aliya Maham mangaji wants to see you... Jalal gave disappointing look to Jodha and told Dasi: Badi ammi se kahiye hum kuch hi pal me unse unke ke hojre me milenge... 

Jalal looked at Jodha... Ha to Jodha begum hum kaha the... 

Jodha with giggle... Ham abhi bata te hai... she turned him back and pushed him by shoulder ... Jayiye ab... bhool gaye aap... aap ek shenshah hai...

Jalal turned back with smirk: Junglee billi... abhi to hum ja rahe har... par hum tumhe chodne vale nahi... and he kissed on her lips very swiftly and walk towards door...

He remembered something ...he stopped and said... Jodha begum, Aaj hum kam me bahot mashroof rahenge... hamne aaj mehsool ke maahir logo ki tukdi ko  mulakaat ke liye bulaya hai... baad me delhi ke subedar aa rahe hai... Aur saam ko hamne aapki Nasheehat (advice) ke anusaar ek nayi aapti dal (emergency disaster)  samiti ka nirman kiya hai... Us mamle me aaj  hum baat karne vale hai... Aaj Shyad hum der ratri tak mashroof rahenge...

Jodha with sad expression: Kya...aaj poora din aur ratri bhi... Aur aap khana kab khayenge...

Jalal seeing her sad face: Hum badi ammi se milke appke hojre me khane ke liye aa rahe hai... aap khane ki tayari karvaiye...

Jodha with excitement: Sachhi ...

Jalal smirk and Ji Jodha begum... Hum aapko aese hi chodne vale nahi hai... and he wink at her...

Her shy blush came on her face...  Jalal with smile walk out of the room...

Jalal is thinking about Jodha and their romantic quick meeting... His all stress relived... He was feeling much more energetic and cheerful... With pleasant smile he entered in Maham's room... Seeing Maham's depressing and sad face his all happiness vanished in a second...

Jalal with worried and concern... Badi ammi aap thik to hena... Kya haal bana diya he aapne apna... He went close to her and gave her warm hug... and with regretting expression... badi ammi hume maaf kar dijye... humne aaj apk bahut dil dukhaya hai...

Maham with lots of tears... hugged him tight... and with sobbing voice... Jalal hume  maaf kar dijye... hume koi hakk nahi tha aapse Adham ki zindgi mangne ka...

Jalal's heart shatters seeing her vulnerable condition... He break hug and wiped her tears... And said ... Hum jante hai hume aaj apke sine pe gaav kiya hai...

Badi Ammi, aap humari majoboori ko samjiye:  Adham ne hamare samne ab koi ikhtihar (option) nahi choda... Hamne Unhe kitni bar aagah kiya hai... bar bar Jodha begum ko niche dikhane ki kosish karte hai... Ab humare hokum ki nafarmani karna unki aadat ban chuki hai... Unho ne hamare hukum ke khilaf hare hue rajyo me loot chlayi... aurto ko beaabru kiya... Hamare hokum ke khilaf hare hue siphahi ko bandi banaya... unpe atyachar kiye... Unhone hare k gunah kiya hai jis se hame sakt nafrat hai... Allah ka shukra hai ki aaj aapki vajah se hamari talvar ruk gayi... Varna hum aapse nazre nhi mila pate...

Jalal with tuff and angry expression: Badi Ammi aap sambhaliye Adham ko... ye aakhri baar humne unhe baksha hai... agali baar hamari talvar ek baar bhi nahi sochegi...

Maham with sad and vulnerable face: Ji hum poori kosish karenge... (to buttering Jalal she added) hum aapke ellan se bahot khush hai... Aaj apka sar chumne ko man karta hai... AAJ KE ELLAN NE HAMARA SAR FAKRA SE UCHA KAR DIYA HAI... Listening that Jalal felt so cheerful and happy... that Badi Ammi is with him... and she is not upset with his ellan... 

Jalal got very sentimental hearing this from her... he said... Badi Ammi... aapki jo jagah hamre dil me hai...Koi usko chu bhi nahi sakta... Apke na hote to shayad hum jinda hi na hote... Aaj aap hi ke rehmat (blessing) se hum yaha tak pauche hai...

Jalal with senti tone: Badi Ammi aadab... humare khane ka vakt ho gaya hai...

After talking with Maham... He was feeling so much relived and fresh... His all worries gone... He couldn't wait to see Jodha... He rushed towards her room...

He entered without announcement... Jodha was busy in instructing everyone about serving food... Seeing her involve in work his lips widen with smile...

He loudly said... To Jodha begum,  kya khila rahi hai aaj hume...

Jodha looked at him and said... aa gaye aap... Jaaiye haath saaf kar lijye... khana lag gaya hai...

After cleaning hands... Jalal sat on a chair to eat... Jodha is standing next to him... with flap fan... 

Jalal looked at the food and felt so happy... and said Vow this food looks and smell so delicious ... lag raha hai... ek arse ke baad itna laziz khana khane ko milega...

Jodha with smile... Ek arsa... sirf che (six) din hue hai...

Jalal with surprise... Jodha begum aap nahi khayegi kya... Aur pankhe ki hame koi jarurat nahi hai... aaj ka mausum kafi khshnuma hai...

Jodha with shy expression Nahi shenshah aap khaiye... hum aapki avshykta ka khayal rakhenge... Ye hamara patni dharm hai...

Jalal with ordering tone: To chaliye hum aapke shohar hone ke naate aapko adesh dete hai... aap humare saath beth ke khana khaiye...

Jodha with little annoyance: aapse ko tark karna hamre bas ki baat nahi... aap har baar apni marzi ki hi karte hai... then she sat next to his chair to eat...

Jalal took piece of sweet and fed her... they both ate lunch with nok jok... After finishing their lunch they both sat on opposite sofa to relax... then Jodha: Shenshah, Hume aap se ek bahot jaruri baat karni hai...

Jalal looked at her and saw her serious expression: Jalal with serious tone... Ha kahiye Jodha begum...

Jodha with scared tone: Hame pata nahi aapko kese bataye par...  ho sakta hai is baat se aap hum par naraz ho jaye... aur hum par vishvash na kare... par ye hamara kartavya hai ki hum apko apne dil ki baat bataye...

Jalal: Jodha begum, Ab aap hume bechen kar rahi hai... Jo bhi hai khule dil se kahiye...

Jodha with serious tone; Hame lagta hai... Badi Ammi hume bilkul pasand nahi karti... Aur wo nahi chahti ki hum karib aaye... Hame poor vishwash hai ki Bhaiya ko vo khat unhone hi likha tha... Unho ne hi hume khat diya tha... hume aasani se mehel se bahar jane ka rasta kar diya tha...  Aur Shayad Unho ne hi aapko bataya tha Hamare mehel se bahar hone ki suchna... Aap ne us din baat tal di thi...  Hume to ye samaj me nahi aata... ek taraf vo aapko apne bte ki tarah chahti hai... aur dusri taraf aapko khoon ke aaso rulati hai... kis tarah ki aurat hai...

Jalal's face was turning serious to angry... he said loudly... Jodha begum ruk jaiye... ab hume ek sabd bhi nahi sunana... Allah bhi aake hume kahenge ki badi ammi ne ye itni badi sajish ki thi to bhi hum yakin nahi karenge...

Jodha: Parantu shenshah, hamari baat abhi tak khatam nahi hui... Hume pata hai.. aap unki kitni Izzat karte hai...  Par hum aaj apni baat poori karke rahenge... To Suniye... aur ek baat... Us raat Jab hum aapka intzaar kar rahe the, Us din bhi badi ammi nehi aapko... sone ki aushdhi (medicine) di thi... Pichle hafte jab Hakimji ne aapko vo aushdhi di, tab unho ne bataya ki badi ammi ne ye aushdhi  us din hi mangvai thi hakim se... Aap Yakin kare ki naa kare hame to unka dohra vyaktitav lagta hai... Hame un par bilkul vishvash nahi hai...

Jalal listened to her with controlled anger... Bahot ho gaya Jodha... Aaj apne sari sarhade paar kar di... aapki aesi soch ho sakti hai... hume yakin nahi hota...  aap badi ammi ke bare me itna gira hua soch sakti ho... bahot sharam janak baat hai... hum Jante hai unko hindu pasand nahi par uska matlab ye to nahi... vo aapko dukh phochane ke liye hume khoon aasoo rulayegi... Jodha begum... Vo meri ammi hai ... hum unpe mere janam denevali ammi se bhi jayada yakin rakhta hu... Aaj aapne mere dil pe chot pochai hai... He got up swiftly and said Khuda Haafiz and walked out quickly from her room...

Jodha was stunned hearing Jalal... She never knew that Jalal trusted her so much...

Precap: Jodha Manofying Jalal... Jodha comes to know Adham's conspiracy. 

Sorry if I have disappointed you with this update... BORING CHAPTER (THERE WAS A NEED FOR FILLER CHAPTER)... 

HELLO DOSTO... Meri itni mehntan pe  ek LIKE  to banta hai... Aur COMMENT ki avshykata hai... aapki comment hume aur likene ke liye prerit karti hai...

 

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Finally di! I unresed! As you know that Im very lazy thats why took time to unres...Finally i managed to unres it! I read the chapter way back but forgot to unres it..Sorry di!Im reviewing on the two chapters I missed reviewing..So here it goes:

wow!!! Jalal is really changing!Thankx to Jodha he is mending his ways and is proving to be a great emperor! By making all equal, he did the right thing.. That maulavi tried to object, but Jalal is Jalal! He made up his mind.. Only Jodha can calm him down in these situations,not all ,but most of the time.Three cheers for Jalal! Im happy that Ruqqaiya objected in this because after that Jalal was abit upset with her...Bravo Ruqqaiya!Adham Khan is such a brat!Angry He raised his voice in front of Jalal and that to mocking him because he is in love with Jodha?? WHY DOES JALAL FALL IN MAHAM'S TRAP???!! With her crocodile tears he always melts down! uggghhh! MahamAngry I could just imagine that scene! Maham crying begging for his son's life! Jalal's love for his Badi Ammi is out of the world!I feel bad for him because when he will get to know about her true face he will be broken.. But Im sure that Jodha will support him at that time...Silly Jodha discussed this with Jalal.. She must have known that he would react like this cauz at the end of the day she is his badi ammi.. He considers her as his mother... But i was abit surprised when Jalal suspected Maham! So the doubts are growing! The Mother-Son scene was really beautiful! It felt so peaceful! I was in awe! You wrote that part brilliantly! Im happy that Hamida and Jalal are coming close to each other...I loved this Chapter alot but Chapter 30 was the best! Loved it!!


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I almost freezed while reading this Chapter! So painful yet passionate and sensuous! The brave Jodha saved Jalal from that bratty AdhamAngry What a plan made by Adham! I must say Im impressed but he can never outsmart Jalal! Even without any help Jalal managed to protect himself and when his life was in danger, it was HIS love which saved him! I could picturise every single scene! Why that stupid Adham??!!! He grabbed Jodha and took off with her!!Angry I could feel Jalal's fear and wrath and the same time.. I felt so bad for Jodha... Jodha still tried to protect herself but that adham! How can he think such about his own brother's wife??!! So cheap of him... My heart froze when her choli fell down and he could see her cleav*ge! His lust was making me choke.. Hate him so much... How dare he slap Jodha?? How dare he kiss Jodha??? I was very much excited when Jalal made an entry and roared! Loved the way he finished Adham off! Awww poor Jo-Ja..

The best part was the SR one! Hayye!BlushingIt was so romantic and the song was a cherry on top! It is one of my favorite song..Heart I really enjoyed reading it.. The last line took my breathe away.. It was beautifully written! I give a standing ovation to you for this update. Seriously I loved it to the core... Im a fan of your writing...Ekkks! Cant wait for the next update.. Well it better come soon cauz im dying for it! Usually im on from my ipod where i cant hear the music which u posted in this thread..But when i logged in from my lappy I was likeBlushing The in aakho mei tum and Tum hi ho was awesome! Nice idea diHug


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Firstly m sooo sorryyyCry foh my late n short review as m typing from mobileEmbarrassedComing to ur update wow it was awesome di Clap take a bow foh writing dis wonderfullyClapStar loved it .Hug Dwk section was v well written Clap
Dis bloody adham how dare he talks abt jodha. AngryAngry Wish jalal has cut his head off toh khissa hi khatam hojataEmbarrassedTongueTongue
Loved his lines when he hears abt her payal n d way she entered saying with m ur wife n i can come at anytymWink 
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Wooowww... Didu... Clap loved it awesome update and jallu's witty side is awesome... And loved when jallu was about to cut adham's head... Usse maham ki bhi end ho jayegi... Aur aapne beech Mai hi rok diya... Cry maham is buttering jallu and he is accepting it too and he trusts her sooo blindly and usse is trust ka Javab acchi wali dena... Wink and totally loved ur chapter and aaj se meri exams khatam and aapki update gang Mai ek aur jud gayi and pls update fast...

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