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A Cute Love Story of Ansh (FF) last part updated on page 69 (Page 70)

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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saragnya

came across ur FF...read it all in couple of days...its just so beautiful ...d way ur story progressed...today read d last part...its happy ending but u have finished it very soon..anyways it takes lot of efforts to right an FF
 
Hats off to uClap
 
Do PM me if u will  write another one on ANSH...

sure dear

and thanks for the comments
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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Neha__

Lovely update geet but the last update Shocked
Thanks for the wonderful FF Big smile It was a cute love story indeed Embarrassed

thanks neha thank u very muchHug
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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Geet Last part...Cry

Last 2 part are lovely. Beautiful writing on relationship Thumbs Up
So shiv's mom's name is not geet... Tongue

Geet,

As this is last part want to sum up  my feeling for u as a writer.
You are a beautiful writer. You use simple language and the story is filled with emotion and positivity.
Just loved everything about the story . It give out a very positive and good message. A feel good factor .It has everything Love,emotion,message.

I would say try to write more such FF /OS they are treat to read.

Note: Just one complain, you did not fulfill wish of your beshram freinds very bad...Wink

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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Hey, this was a beautiful end to a beautiful story
your ansh were so sweet, and also as i said I've literally fell in love with your Shiv Embarrassed. Though this was a short story it had everything in it. Love, realistic approach, and also good messages too. Overall your first ever ff has become a hit Clap Star Your writing style is very good and had a good flow about it!!!
But I've got a complaint just like our dear buddy. You didn't fulfill our besharam demands LOL . Goodluck, keep writing Thumbs Up!

PS: Shiv's mom name and Ansh gal both Poorna...!
why such a suspense in revealing her name? LOL

Edited by Sudhaiyer86 - 11 April 2014 at 4:41am

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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 3:50am | IP Logged
really beautiful story
thank you geet
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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by onlinebuddy75

Geet Last part...Cry

Last 2 part are lovely. Beautiful writing on relationship Thumbs Up
So shiv's mom's name is not geet... Tongue

Geet,

As this is last part want to sum up  my feeling for u as a writer.
You are a beautiful writer. You use simple language and the story is filled with emotion and positivity.
Just loved everything about the story . It give out a very positive and good message. A feel good factor .It has everything Love,emotion,message.

I would say try to write more such FF /OS they are treat to read.

Note: Just one complain, you did not fulfill wish of your beshram freinds very bad...Wink

Thanks buddy
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Posted: 11 April 2014 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sudhaiyer86

Hey, this was a beautiful end to a beautiful story
your ansh were so sweet, and also as i said I've literally fell in love with your Shiv Embarrassed. Though this was a short story it had everything in it. Love, realistic approach, and also good messages too. Overall your first ever ff has become a hit Clap Star Your writing style is very good and had a good flow about it!!!
But I've got a complaint just like our dear buddy. You didn't fulfill our besharam demands LOL . Goodluck, keep writing Thumbs Up!

PS: Shiv's mom name and Ansh gal both Poorna...!
why such a suspense in revealing her name? And lastly, who's that Poorna in ur life? Wink

Thanks sudha

no body yaarLOL

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Originally posted by sireesha76

really beautiful story
thank you geet

ur welcome sireesha

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