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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
it ws nice dear...thank god atleast mm
is dere fr raghu..who loves n cares fr him..
waitung fr rantara frst meet...
so update soon
thanks

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Interesting CS and update
Awww my Raghu is very sad he doesn't want to leave Ouch
But that daya dayaan Angry
Thank God MM is there for him Big smile
Continue soon

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Super duper amazing start Jass! 

Loved it! 

And I hate DM!

Don't call it crap! Tongue

Thanks for the pm and update soon! 


Edited by Wahian4lyf - 14 March 2014 at 2:39pm

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Nice update Thumbs Up
poor raghu really misses his mother Cry
dm is so bad Angry
Jus loved d brothers bond Smile
do continue asap
thnx for pm

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
I loved the update so much!!!!
 It was awesome! Clap

 You write so well jass!!

 I think I would like to thank DM for the first
 Time for sending Raghu to Delhi. At least he is 
 Going to meet Antara there...and then they will fall
 In love!  Yay!! I can't wait! !Embarrassed

 Please update soon and tfpm. Big smile

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Hey jass!!!
Finally u came here!!!Tongue
Dont call it crap...Beautiful character sketch!! & a wonderful start!!!
Do continue & update ASAP!!Big smile
Coming to the update...
DM is so rudeErmm
Loved the Bonding between Raghu & MM...
Poor raghu...has no other go..& must listen to DM...eagerly waiting for Antu's entry!!

P.S: Suggestion- U can add pic's if u want :)


Edited by Josederose - 15 March 2014 at 12:43am

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Thank you everyone for appreciating it..Embarrassed
I didn't expect that anyone would like it but so many of you did..
So thanks a lot..
Will update asap.Wink

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 6:57am | IP Logged
fab update
Loved the character sketch n d 1 st update also.
Liked Antu's character vry mch.
N here Raghu n Machmach's bonding is awsum...
M eagerly waiting 4 Rantara's 1st meet.
Continue asap

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