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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 10:21am | IP Logged
welcome in rantara's land jasmeet!!!!!Hug
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ur idea is superb!!! i loved it..Big smile
pls continue soon...Smile

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nice cs jasmeet .waiting fr u to
update ..thanks

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Awesome character sketch! 

Looks super promising! 

Can't wait for the first part! Big smile

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Finally updated a chapter. I am sorry its a short one and totally horrible..

Read it at your own risk!!!..Dead


"Nahi maai, mujhe Delhi nahi jaana plz",Raghu pleaded. "Tumhe Delhi jaana hi hoga",answered DM. "Aai, plz Raghu ko yahin rehne do na. Bhai hai vo mera",requested Machmach. "Tum chup hi raho Machinder. Iss Raghu ne tumhara dimag khrab kr dia hai",said DM angrily. "Maai plzz...",they both started simultaneously. "Bas, Raghu parso Delhi jayega! Ye mera aakhiri faislOucha hai. Ab koi kuch ni bolega. So jao ab tum dono",DM shouted. They both went back to their rooms without speaking a word.

The next day, Raghu started packing for the journey. He held the tickets in his hands and kept staring at them. He did not want to leave his city but he had to because he could go against DM. He wanted to pursue a career in psychology. Many colleges in Kolkata offered the courses but they were not so elite class. DM could not compromise with her dignity in the society. So she decided to send Raghu to Delhi where he would study in a high-class college. Raghu was missing his mother alot that day. He remembered all the moments they had spent together. The way she used to love him; the way she treated him as her prince; the way she ignored all his mistakes; the way she used to feed him with her own hands. He always longed for her. He always missed her. Remembering all the precious moments, a tear trickled down his cheek and fell on the ticket. "Aunty ki yaad aa rahi hai?",Machmach said from behind. "Arey Machmach tu kab aaya",Raghu asked, trying to sound happier. "Abhi abhi, jab tu ro raha tha",Machmach replied. "Yeda hai kya,main nahi ro raha tha",said Raghu replied."Bhai 15 saal se tuje jaanta hu. Itna toh pehchaan hi gaya hu tuje. Chal naatak band kar ab",Machmach said. Raghu couldn't control his tears anymore. He burst out and started crying loudly. Machmach hugged him. "Bas kar Bhai. Tuje pareshan nahi dekh sakta main. Chal rona dhona chod aur apni 400 watt wali smile de jispe saari ladkiya marti hain",Machmach broke the hug and said, laughing. Raghu smiled. No one understood him better than Machmach. He was blessed to get such a brother. They hugged again. "Main tuje bohot miss karunga Bhai", Machmach said, almost in tears. "Main bhi",Raghu said,about to cry again. "Apna Dhyan rakhio aur koi item mere liye ho toh btaio",Machmach said. "Hehe, Yeda! Haan bata dunga aur tu b apna khyal rakhna",Raghu said laughing. And They spent some precious time together.

The next day Raghu left for Delhi.More adventures of Delhi to come your way..

I am sorry again for this crap. Everything you feel like throwing at me is welcomed.Ouch

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 11:58am | IP Logged
superb update

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
What a super duper start jass Clap

Oh..DM is so dominating Angry

Aww..I love Raghu and MM's brotherly bond LOL

I'm waiting for Raghu.and Antara's first encounter Embarrassed

Thankyou for the pm and continue soon Wink

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
loved it 
update soon
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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

fantastic update

i loved it
DM urghhh hate her
pls cont asap cant wait for rantara to meet

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