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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Ria yarr kya bolun main...
I speechless dear...it ws jst
"Freaking  Awesome " dear...i jst loved itSmile
Wow kya update hai...raghu ne jb yeh kaha
K woh antu se dur chala jayega kabhi 
Nh aayega usk saamne i felt like
Cryingg.CryCryCry.bt i ws required na..he lovea
Her soo much..n antu shes so 
Depressed n broken k she cnt trust
Raghu..what an irony...Ouch
Dis ws d best update fr meClapClap
Till now yar...what an update
Take a bow...yar kaha se itne mast
Dialog n feel lek aati ho...WinkWink
Ur a genius yar ...beautiful..
Pta nh kiski tarif karun teri k chapter kLOLLOL
Anyways i jst loved it..
Hope dis brings rantara close. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Precap is scaryAngry still waiting ...
Update soon take care..love u dear
Hugggsss :) :)
Ps...full rantara chapter.. mast thaWink
Mazaa aaya..LOL 


Edited by ankusanu - 13 March 2014 at 9:31am

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 9:58am | IP Logged
very emotional update ria!!!Cry
aww poor raghu burstout all his feelings..his emotions were reflecting his condition..he was so hurt so shattered!!..and that MO ..antu too depressed..Cry
omg!! precap..raghu is here y to fearLOL
tfpm

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Amazing chapter Clap
it was really emotional Cry
antara bursted out on raghu due to her trauma Cry
poor raghu felt really bad to c her state Cry
omg he said he vil go away nd she wont c him anymore Cry
precap antu missing raghu vil search her nd save her frm all evils Smile
Things vil change Smile really excited to read next chp
plz continue soon
thnx for pm Smile

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Mindblowing and amazing update as always ria
Your a outstanding writer.
This was a really emotional update. Finally antara let out all of her hidden emotion and anger she had for raghu.
Raghu felt so much hurt hearing her poor him. Aww his a man of his word he will not come infront of antara. As soon as he left she wanted to stop him but couldn't. She knows deep down she doesn't want to loose him but she has locked her heart and isn't opening it yet. Aww the mouth organ scean was so sad when her eyes fell on it she was crushed. The precap looks interesting wonder where antara has got to what has happen to her. Our hero will surely find his princess lol he always does...
Thanks for updating..Keep on writing your a amazing writer... Keep up the hard work... Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 11:39am | IP Logged

Riaaa ...first of all congrattts for ur new thread ... balle balle  ballleee balleeeClap

coming to ur update ...

 
it was freaking  INTENSE ... take a bow INTENSE QUEEN ...!!!!!Big smile
 
hv lost my words to praise u for this ... i must say that ur story is growing so gracefully with ur each n every update ... in my heart there is only GAG now n nothing else ...
 
 
i tried to point out some lines from ur update ...but failed ...as every line was so magnificent so intense so effectively wringing my heart ...
 
i don only loved this update ...i embraced it with my soul ... ohhh Raghu and ANtara they r made for each other ...u hv written so beautifullly ...its like watching the best lovestory ever ...
 
 
again i must say u r the best one to portray our beloved Raghu ...and Yes i love Raghu more whn he is angry ...cos then only his heart comes out in front of Antara more prominantly ...i loved Raghu 's reaction ...Antara's reaction ...
 
 
i was numb  aftre reading this atleast for two hours as i was feeling lik i was in Antara's place sitting on the floor resting the back on the door facing a  Mad Raghu ...ohh what a scene dear ClapClapClapClapClap
 
 
love you Ria ...again i don know how  to praise u perfectly ...am running loss of words now ... u hv made me speechless completely Shocked
 
wd be dreaming those scenes tonight ...Embarrassed


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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 11:48am | IP Logged
unres pg 1

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 11:51am | IP Logged
While reading that part when Raghu promised he would never show his face to Antara... Bapre... I was literally crying there...
Ria... Outstanding ... Ur writing in GNG is so intense and poised... This story of urs is painfully fantastic...!
ab nafrat itni jyada hai.. age jake pyarr toh hey bhagwan...!! Embarrassed

I really want Antara to suffer thodasa... Lolz...She needs to know what Raghu actually is...
Waiting for the next part...!! Big smile

Edited by nbw16 - 13 March 2014 at 7:31pm

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Posted: 13 March 2014 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Congratulations for new thread ria...
And brilliant update yaar...tu to kammal hai...kya baat, kya baat, kya baat...
Ufff antara kuch zyada hi boll gayi but raghu ne jo kaha wo agar uss ne kar dikhaya to fir antara kya karegi...uska to dill tutt jayega...iss ladki ka bhi ajeeb hai paas aao to problem dur jao to problem...kaisa ye ishq hai...ajab sa risk hai...per precap accha hai...Please update soon yaar...

Uski justuju uska intezar or akela pan, 
Thak kar muskura deta hu jab roya nahi jata...

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