Do Dil Ek Jaan

~Happy Holi ~

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Hey Guys... Here is an OS on of course RAGHU and ANTARA on holi. 

Will update soon
No pm's. I will pm after I update my OS ðŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first!!

And its holi? I never knew that! :O

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Wow Nikki!!! That was awesome!!

Raghu toh phele se hi Antara pe latoo hai!! 😆

Manglsutra? 😲

Waiting for the next part! 😃 Edited by Wahian4lyf - 10 years ago
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K I'm second but no worries 😉

Waiting! Waiting 😆


Unres..

It was fabulous Nikki 😉

You know what while reading the description of Raghu and his clothes...I was.imagining Ayaz..Hayee 😳

Raghu tu first encounter me hi latto hogya 😆

Mangalsutra ?? 😲 Antara is married ??

Continue soon Edited by hareem27 - 10 years ago
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res m third lol
waiting happy holi!
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holi ko happy bnane baba ke taraf se OS ki pichkari!!!...😆
waiting !!!!!!f
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holi ko happy bnane baba ke taraf se OS ki pichkari!!!...😆
waiting !!!!!!f

Hahaha ofcourse yar 
Holi ka time hai ðŸ˜ƒ
Get ready pichkaris are on the way ðŸ˜†
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Part 1

He picked up the white shirt kept on his bed and wore it with his white jeans, leaving the top three buttons open. He then picked up the white vest jacket and wore it over his shirt leaving all the buttons open. He walked towards the dresser and set his hair with his fingers. He didn't apply hair gel today which he normally used to apply as it was of no use today. He looked at himself in the mirror and smirked, approving his white outfit which was perfect for the'HOLI-day'. He looked at the time and then walked out of his room. He wore his shoes and walked out of his apartment taking his car keys along and locking the door behind him.

He came out of the elevator and saw the people from his building playing holi. He didn't want to face any of them. Not that he disliked them or anything it's just that he has to go to his friend, Machmach's house for holi celebration and if he meets any of his building mates now they will surely apply color to him and he doesn't want any of it until he reaches Machmach's house as his car seats will get spoiled because of the color and he cannot even think about it.

He quietly walked away from there and wished that no one see's him walking away. He thanked the builder of his society for giving him a parking space which was just a few feet away from his building. He almost ran when he was just a couple of steps away from his car and quickly sat down on the driver's seat. He sighed of relief and grinned, patting himself "Well done Raghu Naik " He said to himself. He reversed his car and then put it in 1st gear and left for Machmach's house. He took the back door out so that nobody sees him and stops him from going.

He reached Machmach's house and parked his car at an empty parking space. He got down from the car and walked towards the garden from where the sound of loud music was coming. There was a big tub filled with colored water. Few tables were there in the centre with plates full of different colors. There were buckets besides the table with pichkaari's in it. He smiled when he saw Machmach, his wife Rukhsana, his father, his mother and his other two friends Satya and Simmi along with their friends putting colors on the other, making the other wet by putting a bucket full of colored water. They all were covered with colors from head to toe. It was difficult for him to recognize each one of them.

Whenever he used to see Machmach and his family, he used to miss his family. The family which is now separated all thanks to his 2 elder brother and their wives. Because of them his father had to divide all the property among the brothers. His father's dream, Naik Construction and the Naik Mansion was taken away from his father by his brothers. Even he was given his share but he sold it off to both his brothers as he never wished to work with his brothers. They would never let him work the way he wanted and would always rule; while Raghu didn't wish to do that. For once, the thought of leaving his Dad's business with his brothers had come up in his mind. According to him his brothers will not be able to handle the business but when he had spoken to his parents about it they had told him not to worry about it. His father even told that he doesn't really care if his brothers take care of business well or not, he doesn't expect anything from them now. His father had told him that he should do what he had always wished to do; to start his hotel chain and that both his father and mother are always there to support him. That's what Raghu did he started his hotel chain with the money he got by selling off his shares. And now at the age of 29 he is the owner of two well known 7 star hotels in Mumbai and is on its way to start the third one in Goa. After the separation he had stayed with his parents until his brothers had had a problem with it. They didn't like Raghu staying with their parents and had created some or the other problems. Getting fed up of everything his parents had left all sons on their own and went to Chandigarh and he could not do anything to keep his parents with him but let them go. The only thing he can do now is that call them up and ask them how they are.

He looked around and spotted his 2 favorite persons. He smiled and walked towards them. They were the two persons who he loved very much and also respected very much, the two persons who never let him feel that he doesn't have a family like they have by telling him that they were his family, the two persons... "Daddu...AJJi". Raghu called them as soon as he reached there."Happy Holi" he wished and bent down to take their blessing. They both kept their hands on his head and blessed him. He stood straight and hugged Daddu, the man who was like a coconut, very strict from outside but from inside he has a big heart full of love. He then hugged AJJI, the coolest and modern Dadi anyone could have.

Daddu took a pinch of red color between his thumb and forefinger and did a tilak on Raghu's forehead. Ajji took a little green color in one palm and yellow color in other palm and applied them on his cheeks. She then took a pinch of blue color and applied it on his nose making Raghu grin like a small kid. Raghu took a little color in his palm and applied on both their cheeks. This was a rule of Machmach's house that the eldest member of the family will do the tilak and apply a little color first, after that only they can play holi, the festival of colors and the colors were not any color; they were called the 'Colors of LOVE.'

He first went towards Machmach's parents and wished them taking their blessings and then walked towards his 3 best friends. They all were childhood friends, best friends; they were like brothers and were inseparable. They all went to school together, though they were separated during their college because they all had different dreams but were not actually separated. They would meet every day after their college. They were best friends then, they were now and they will always be.

"Happy Holi brother" Machmach wished hugging Raghu and applying color all over his face. Raghu wished him back the same way as he did.

"So, the hotel king Raghu Naik finally gets the time to meet his boring friends" Satya said sarcastically.

"It's not like that Satya. Actually-" Raghu tried to explain himself but was cutoff in between by Ishaan.

"It's okay Raghu, we understand. We are not angry at you are we Satya?" Ishaan asked.

"No not at all" Satya said with a mock grin.

Raghu sighed and looked at Machmach as if asking for help which Machmach did happily.

"Come on guys we are here to celebrate not to fight, we'll punish him some other day" said Machmach and saw both Satya and Ishaan agreeing to him.

"Happy Holi Raghu" both Ishaan and Satya wished together and applied color to Raghu the same way as Machmach did.

Raghu was just about to apply color to them when suddenly...

*SPLASH* *SPLASH* *SPLASH* *SPLASH*

And they were all wet and shocked. They looked at each other and then towards the side from where the water came and saw a group of girls standing there and laughing at them.

"Bura na mano HOLI hai" the girls said in unison and laughed again. The three of them were Rukhsana, Simmi and Priya.

Raghu was looking at the girls when something caught his eyes; it was a pair of dark brown eyes. It was the most beautiful pair eyes he had ever seen. And were also the most expressive eyes; her eyes told him how innocent she was; how her heart was pure. Her eyes were twinkling as she was laughing and giggling. He tilted his head a little towards his side to have a better look but the girls in front were blocking his way, all he could see were the pair of light brown eyes.

All the girls started running when the boys ran behind them. But Raghu was still standing there looking at the way he had seen the pair of beautiful eyes. He was lost in his own world, so lost that he didn't even notice that she had gone from there and he was staring into space for god knows how long. It was like he was frozen on the spot.

"OW!"Raghu yelled and rubbed his arm. He looked at his side and saw Satya, Ishaan and Machmach glaring at him. One of them had just smacked him hard bringing him back to planet earth. "What was that for?" he asked annoyed, still rubbing his arm and making a face.

"What were you staring at?" asked Satya mocking Raghu's tone.

"I-" Raghu started and looked towards the other side where he had seen her. He left the sentence there and frowned, she was gone? Where? He thought.

"What I huh? You were supposed to run behind the girls" Ishaan scolded him.

"Exactly, the girls just threw buckets full of water on us and you are standing here staring into space" Machmach said in the same tone as Ishaan.

"Sorry" was all Raghu could say, he couldn't explain anything them as he himself didn't know what had happened to him.

"Now think, how we should get the girls" said Ishaan.

"Yeah they'll have to pay for this" said Ishaan and Machmach nodded his head.

"Hmmm" Raghu said, tapping his finger on his chin, thinking of something. Finally something came up in his mind, the 4 guys along with few others formed a circle keeping their hands on the others shoulder, while Raghu told them what to do. They high-fived each other and then went to different directions after making sure that the girls were not watching them.

The girls were at the backside of the house laughing at the guys' condition. They decided that it's time to face the guys as they cannot hide for a long time. They walked towards the front garden and peeked before stepping out but there was no one. The elders had already gone inside leaving the kids, the music was still on and the guys were nowhere to be seen. The girls looked around to see if they could spot any of the guys but they could not see anyone of them.

"I think they got scared of us" Simmi said laughing, making the others laugh as well.

"I think you are right" Priya sided Simmi and they high-fived.

"But where are they?" Rukhsana asked as they reached the center of the garden.

"Looking for us" suddenly said a voice behind them.

All girls jumped getting startled and turned to see Raghu, Machmach, Satya and Ishaan surrounding them with evil grin on their faces. The other girls had already run when they had seen the guys coming from behind the tables. They shrieked as they saw the guys holding buckets full of water in their hands. The girls took a step back and looked at the guys and saw them looking at them mischievously. Machmach was looking at Rukhsana, Satya at Simmi, Ishaan at Pria and Raghu was staring again at the beautiful dark brown eyes. This was the first time he could actually see her face which was covered with color. He looked away before he could get lost in her; this girl was doing something to him.

Machmach, Satya and Ishaan threw the water in the buckets over their respective wives. Raghu angled the bucket to throw the water on 'her' but she found an escape and ran away. Raghu immediately left the bucket down and started running behind her.

She looked back while she was running and shouted when she saw Raghu running behind her. He was coming close with every step he took. He had a benefit; he was an athletic and was taking long steps. And she had this disadvantage she was very an ordinary girl when compared to him. She looked in front and ran as fast as she could but Raghu was very fast for her. He took hold of her wrist and made her stop. She turned around and tried to pull her hand out of his grip but, he was very strong for her. She tried a few more times but it didn't help. Finally annoyed, she looked up and gasped as her eyes met his, which were intense.

Raghu all the while was gazing at her, he could not move his eyes away from her, it was like she has casted some kind of spell on him. His eyes moved around her face slowly, capturing every feature of her face in his mind, in his soul, in his heart. His eyes met her beautiful ones when she looked up at him and he was lost in them again. She tried looking away but couldn't; his gaze didn't let her look away. They took hold of her eyes. He almost ripped his eyes away from hers and his eyes slowly move down. She was wearing white salwaar kameez which fit her body perfectly. His eyes were caressing her body with his eyes, taking in every feature of hers. His eyes moved back up the same way and stopped back on her face. He imprinted her in his heart.

A shiver ran down Antara's spine when she felt him devour her through his piercing gaze. Her cheeks became warm and turned crimson when his eyes paused at her natural curves. She felt like running away from there but she couldn't. Wind blew making her duppata fall from one side of her shoulder making her neck visible to his hungry eyes.

He moved his eyes to her neck, when her duppata fall off her neck, it was like a reflex; the falling off her duppata caught his eyes and made him look down at her neck. His eyes fell on the black beads necklace tied around her neck, which he recognized as 'Mangalsutra' which his worn by married women's. He looked back at her face and smirked at her evilly making her gulp.

"ANTARA" someone yelled.

She looked at her side and saw two of her friends calling her and gesturing her to come. Raghu followed her gaze and saw the same. Antara looked back at him and saw him looking towards her friends. Taking the opportunity, she jerked his hand away and ran towards her friends.

He looked at her retreating back and whispered "Antara" as if he was worshiping her name.

Antara turned and look at him as if she had heard him call her and saw him standing at the same place with an evil grin. She immediately turned back towards her friends and went away from there. But Raghu stood there at the same place.

To be Continued...
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nikkiii..its soo soo soo beautiful start...😳
yayy!! holi celebration at mm's house..
very nice intro of raghu n his family...😃
loved how the girls splashed color on guys...😆
rantara lovely eyecontact...!!!!!😳"mera mahi tu..."
loved the update a lot!!!!😃

happy holi to u n ur family...🤗




LOVE U BABA!!!...🤗😆
thanks fr updating!!!
Edited by Tsuchi - 10 years ago
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fantastic os
happy holi dear
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wowww lovely yarr..
perfect fr d occasion... waiting fr nxt part..
update sooon n
niki happy holi to u tooo frnd