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shivani.Shona

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:16am | IP Logged

NO COPY,..THIS COPYRIGHT ONLY BELONGS TO ME. REMEMBER ONE THING IF U COPY THIS.IT CAN BE CONSIDERED AS CRIME.

Thank u for the wonderful response for my previous FF I OWN YOU DEAR..M
HERE A NEW ONE...
PART 1-BELOW
PART2-PAGE 4
PART 3-PAGE 8
PART 4-page 13
Part 5-PAGE 16
PART 6-PAGE19
PART 7-PAGE 25
PART 8-PAGE 29
PART 9-PAGE 32
PART 10-PAGE 37
PART11-PAGE 41
PART12-PAGE 45
PART 13-PAGE 50
PART 14-PAGE 53
PART 15-PAGE 57

No..no..plz..plz..randhir no...u cant do this with me..plz randhir nooo...cho dho muje...'

randhir-chodu thuje??never baby..jo thumne meri family ke saath kiya hai naa..i am gone take tht revenge..

He kissed her forcefully...he kissed he kissed he kissed..until a blood dropped from her lips...

she was moning with pain...but he dint leave her...now all her blood was seen on his lips...it tasted as green apples for him.. her tainy fist fighted with his strong muscular chest..but no use...she was crying..finally he leaved her..

he went near the mirror looked himself and smiled(evil smile) he wipped off the blood with a handkerchief...he was looking her frm the mirror..

she looked broken..he was satisfied now...she was crying badly criying...

'Randhir...'

'kya hua sanyu..accha nahi laga..abh pura zindgi thume mere saath essa hi rehena padega..i will use u jzt for my plessure...thume wo kuch bhi nahi milega jo ekk biwi ko millna chahi hai..did u get it.. ?? now go and sleep...dnt even dare to kill ur self..usske baare msin sochogi naa...i am not gne leave ur family..."

'Dont do this with me randhir plz...'

'I can do anything...and i hve my rights...'

'no..u dnt have any rights to ruin my life like this..."

'oh my baby...thumne bhi meri family ke saath esa karneka koi rights nahi tha.."

'Maine essa kuch nahi ...'

'shut up...jzt shut up...go to sleep varna...puri raath sone nahi doonga..."

he slept peacefully...leaving poor soul crying,suffering...

'i hate u dad..i hate u bhai...i hate myself...

IF U GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINUE PLZ CMNT


Edited by shivani.Shona - 07 April 2014 at 5:53am

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Awosame story love it Hugplz upload next soon 

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:36am | IP Logged
i thought ur first ff was enough to drive me crazyyy...i was sooo in love wid dat...i read it two times one in sandhir cafe nd one tym here...i was feelinggg sad it ended...bt read ur post in sandhir cafe...of strtingg up wid new ff...that too dark one...i really jumped with joy...nd here uh post it...its drivinggg meee superrr crazzyyy...plzzz is baarrr kam se kam din mai 2 part post ker dena...plzzz don't tadpaooo mee dis tym...
bt dis tym i actually wanna say hattsoff...how uh get up ideas lyk dis...superbbb...
uh nd param ki diwani...are actually makingg mee diwani of ur FFs...

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rabia297

i thought ur first ff was enough to drive me crazyyy...i was sooo in love wid dat...i read it two times one in sandhir cafe nd one tym here...i was feelinggg sad it ended...bt read ur post in sandhir cafe...of strtingg up wid new ff...that too dark one...i really jumped with joy...nd here uh post it...its drivinggg meee superrr crazzyyy...plzzz is baarrr kam se kam din mai 2 part post ker dena...plzzz don't tadpaooo mee dis tym...
bt dis tym i actually wanna say hattsoff...how uh get up ideas lyk dis...superbbb...
uh nd param ki diwani...are actually makingg mee diwani of ur FFs...


Dinn main ekk de sakthi hoon...if i get more cmnt then definetly 2..


Edited by shivani.Shona - 10 March 2014 at 11:01am

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plzzz continue..plzzz...plz...plz...
will eagerly waiting for ur updates...

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:46am | IP Logged
What u waitin for?
Update soon
I wanna knw why randhir behaving like dis Confused

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Hmmm this is same as I read it in other forum...

Lets see...depend on next updates...

But stil...its different

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Posted: 10 March 2014 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

Hmmm this is same as I read it in other forum...

Lets see...depend on next updates...

But stil...its different


kaveriw dii this was jzt a trialer.. Wink


Edited by shivani.Shona - 10 March 2014 at 10:56am

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