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Posted: 07 March 2014 at 2:22am | IP Logged
hey frnds n di
after so many days back on forum ,exam k chakkar me aa nahi pai
miss u all
so once again im trying a story this time its ff actually ff ya ss decide nahi kiya badme edit kar dungi so here is the inrto of story-
Roshni katariya(rosh)- she is sweet n chirrpy girl lives in nagpur with her grandpa bt jaldi hi higher studies ke liye mumbai jan e vali hai,rosh ke life me sirf 2 chije imortant hai 1st her grandpa n 2nd her neha di


Neha katariya-same as show ,living in mumbai due to studies ,loves her grandpa n chotu rosh



Gautam Lada(gauti)-sweet n caring ,living in mumbai for studies ,best frnd of neha n nikhil


Nikhil shukla-cute,flirty ,bindas ,living in mumbai with his dad lost his mom early,best frnd of gauti,he is like a small bro for gauti ,ready to go for clg 

neha ,gauti n nikhil all are living in same colony   ,all are frnds,gauti n neha both have crush on eachother bt didnt tell eachother 
so here is the intro story in charo pe depend hai
next part will b updated soon
plz commnt n like
sorry for typing mistake
shreya




Edited by shreyatode1 - 24 March 2014 at 8:13am

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Posted: 07 March 2014 at 2:34am | IP Logged
very nice start dear update soon waiting for it Smile

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Nice...
Update soon.

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Lovely CS sisu

Jaldi update kariyo..wanna read eagerly.

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thanks sara di,nash di n tasrins
glad u like it
evening tak pakka update kar dungiSmileSmileSmile
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sorry kal update nahi kar pai so here is the 1st part-
In nagpur-
we saw a huge bungalow there is a man in his 70 going towards a room ,he opened  door n there is a girl sleeping cutely ,the man goes near her n say-
Man-chotu,uthja,8 baj gaye
(this is our rosh)
Ro-dadu bas 5 min
Da-kuch 5 min nahi jaldi uth bhul gai aaj tera result hai
hearing result rosh get up with a jerk
Ro-kya dadu subah subah result ka nam kyu liya ,muze pahle hi to tension hoti hai aur aapne muze aur dara diya
Da-are isme darne ki kya bat hai har sal hi to aata hai result chal ja jaldi tayar hoke niche aa mai breakfast ke liye waith kar raha hu
Ro-ok
n both leaves
On dining
Ro-dadu mera result accha aaega na?
Da-ha beta aur agar nahi bhi aaye to maine kabhi tuze data hai kya?
Ro-nahi dadu ,aapko to pata hai na muze bhi di ki tarah reagents jana hai
hearing this dadu gets sad
Da-pahle neha gai aur ab tu bhi jaegi to mera kya hoga?CryCry
Ro-kya dadu aap aisa bologe to fir nahi jana muze
Da-chal abhi drama mat kar muze pata hai tera dream hai vo,vaise neha ka call aaya kya?
Ro-nahi
Da-jarur so rahi hogi dono behene is mamle me ek jaise hi hai,chal jaldi khatam kar fir hum bappa ke mandir jaenge
Ro-aapko office nahi jana?
Da-mere chotu ka result hai aur me office jau not fair na,chal jaldi khtam kar ,mai ready hoke aata hu
 In mumbai-
a guy is sleeping with a pellow on his head n the room is all mess ,alarm is snoozing 3rd time ,finally he remembered something n get up  n frensh up n fastly goes to hall.pick his breakfast  plate n sit infront of tv n started watching his fav show tom n jerry ,suddenly we heard someone's voice
nikhil baba aapko aur kuch chahiye aur ye kya aap fir subah subah apna ye cartoon dekhne lag gaye
Ni-gogo..
she is nikhil's maid,she is working here since nik is 5years old ,her name is marry bt nik n all his frnd called her gogo means  gorgeous 
Ni-gogo wah kya sandwich banaye hai ,maza aa gaya
Ma-rahne do baba hamesha ka hi hai aapka jab bhi mai aapko datati hu aap maska lagana start kar deto ho,vaise aaj to aapka result aane vala hai na?
Ni-ha
Ma-maine jesus se aapke liye pray ki hai dekhna result accha hi aaega
Ni-of ho gogo ,aapne mere result ke liye manga ,agar mangana hi tha to koi ladki tapkane ke liye mangte mere liye
Ma-kya fayda aap kisi ek ke sath rahte kaha hu aaj iske sath to kal uske sath
Ni-ha lekin meri pakki vali n sabse beautiful gf to ek hi hai
Ma-kaun?
Ni-aap ,he kissed her on cheeks n ran to his room
mary smiles at his childish behaviour,he is like a son for her

in same clony bt in another house
a girl is sleeping n  sun rays hetting her face n then she gets up n look at watch n said-omg 8 baj gaye ,ami clg ke liye late ho gai ,bt then she pat her head n say-are bhuddu aaj to clg 10 baje hai mai bhi na bhul jati hu,aaj to chotu ka result hai bechari tension me hogi use call karti hu
she is neha
Ne-hello chotu,kaisi hai?
Ro-di aaj result aane vala hai ,aapko to pata hai na muze kitna dar lagta hai
Ne-are yar tu bhi na,vaise bata tu dekhegi ya mai dekhu lu result?
Ro-nai di muzse  nai hoga aap hi dekh lo
Ne-ok aur bata kya chal raha hai?
Rosh-kuch nai mai aur dadu mandir ja rahe hai
Ne-n dadau ne hamesha ki tarah chutti li hoga haina na?
Ro-ha di,ok di mai aapse bad me bat karti hu ,bye
Ne-bye
 Ne-in mnd-aaj to nikhil ka bhi result hoga uske bhi utha deti hu ,abhi tak so hi raha hoga
n she called nik
Ne-nikhil tu uth gaya,aaj sun kahase nikla ?
Ni-kya yar neha bechara baccha kabhi kabhi jaldi uth jata hai to tu isme bhi muze chida rahi hai
Ne-ok ok ye bata ye chamtkar hua kaise?
Ni-kuch nai bas vo aaj tom n  jerry subah jaldi tha to 
Ne-tu aur tera vo cartoon..
Ni-neha mere cartoon ko kuch mat bol
Ne-ok baab ,aaj result aane vala hai to tension?
Ni-nikhil shukla aur tension no way
Ne-ha right sare log aaj tension me hoge sirf tuze chod ke,vaise gauti ko uthaya kya?
Ni-nahi abhi bas call kar hi raha tha
Ne-rahne de mai kar leti hu
Ni-ok aur vaise bhi tu call karegi to uski morning aur bhi good h jaegi
Ne-nikhil...
Ni-ok sorry chal bye bad me milte hai
Ne-bye
n then she called gauti
gauti is sleeping peacefully when suddenely his phone buzz
he look at the name n get up
Ga-hello neha hi
Ne-gauti tum so rahe the kya?
Ga-no yes I mean yes
Ne-ok fine yar vaise bhi aaj clg late hai
Ga-neha actually muze tumse kuch puchna tha
Ne-ha bolo
Ga-kya aaj hum tumhari gadi share kar sakte hai?vo kya hai na maine bike ko servicing ke liye di hai
Ne-ok fine yar n tu kabse formal ho gaya ,ek kam kar ready hoke mere yaha aa ja
Ga-ok ,chal fir milte hai ,bye
Ne-bye

so aaj ke liye itna hi 
hws it?
plz cmnt
shreya



Edited by shreyatode1 - 10 March 2014 at 8:05am

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Wow superb...loved it.

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