wow..dont know how i missed this work of urs...loved it..π..great four shot...you created an entire world..loved the portion where you ort of describe the mundane moments where arnav fell in luv with khushi when they were growing up...the reason why arnav said no earlier is very valid and i think he was right in rejecting the idea that time..though he couldve aked her to wait n see herself or something like that instead of saying no...and that poem by aashi12 is so nice...rhymes perfectly and goes with the whole theme of the story...great writing...π
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