Originally posted by _lovergirl101_
Lovely!! But a bit short!
Love Roshni's undying love for arjun. Continue soon...
by the way, did u get my pm?
Originally posted by rinku95
Roshni is so kind
Thanks for pm
Thanks dear. Glad you commented
Originally posted by angle1shanu
u make me cry dear...superb updte...and this song is my most favourite one and ful song along with the scene was in front of me during i was reading this story...again loved it...plz continue it soon
Thank you. And welcome here.
I love this song. It is so heart touching.
Originally posted by jayprabu
Amazing update. I think nobody can better explain unconditional love with a way you have explained with Roshini's character. She loves him immensely and wants him to be happy always, such a beautiful and selfless soul. The song you chose to go with update was very apt . I loved it very much. Will be waiting for your next update. Thanks for the pm.
Thank you. It is the biggest compliment I ever got.
Thank you for liking the song.
Originally posted by miss_precious
Who are the two kids she drew? Was that her dream
Can't wait for arjun to meet rosh
Please update soon x
Yes. it was her dream.
Originally posted by rimi_invisible
awesome update laila...
a complete part on Roshni...the lady who makes me go gaga over her everytime...
the personality,the elegance she bored was depicted beautifully by you...you used the resources too well..
the painting,then her hesitance,her dream and longing...beautiful...
I have a few questions..will pm you later..
havnt checked your pm yet...but i am stalking this story big time...i am loving it...
continue soon...nd thanks for the pm..
Roshni is my favorite character too. I love her FB scenes, they are beautiful.
Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I thought it was too dramatic.
Originally posted by kunchu
Hi, sure you can call me Di
Almost everyone calls so
back to the update, it was completely on Roshni
felt bad for her
hope that painting gets complete soon
Thank you di.
I too felt bad for her.
About completing the painting. it will take some time.
Originally posted by naina25
roshni plz came back to arjun...
Originally posted by jia03
the painting part was really touching..
Originally posted by Meself Sorry I hadn't commented on the previous chapter but then again lets face the facts: I AM LAZY!!
So for chapter seven:
I so wish to get in there and smack Arjun. It is his duty to hold on to! He had decided long back that he wishes to be with Roshini so yes; he should have made a pact as to which side he wishes to stand firm to.
Roshini left him by choice and if he is still idle about the entire narration; then boy! He is guilty. He wishes to have the cake and eat it but there is rock solid attempt to it by him. Sado baith ke ab!
Thank heavens atleast Roshini is found!
For the eight chapter:
That is probably one thing being a lady...you choose and you regret and you don't do anything about it. Roshini left behind a vital part of her existence, she isn't happy and yet she is prying away hoping somewhere her husband is happy! Uff! Kya solid khichdi hai!!! Ye bhi khush nahi aur vo bhi nahi!
Ab humein khush karo aur update karo!!
I know about your laziness don't worry about it. A comment once in a while is enough for me.
Don't blame Arjun, he is the victim here. He chose his wife over every/ anything else. & she left him without a word. Poor guy.
Originally posted by Shamsad1607
now we can see Rosh lost into her thoughts of him...
now we know why she left him, but she is completely unknown of the result of her decision...
and she is not happy with it at all...she's all alone out there...
now really want to know what happened when both "Dukhi Aatmas" will meet.
Do continue...& thanks for PM.
P.S. Friendship wala love is another kind of love dear...though it's not the love wala love.
@Bold. Dukhi atma will bacome more Dukhi
I believe Friendship wala love is greater than Love wala Love
Originally posted by raja_ki_rani
sorry for not replying to the other part but I was really busy...
but both the parts were really sad and very well written. arjun's pain of losing his "best friend" and his eyes had determination... to bring roshni back or something else. Roshni' pain was so wonderfully described. another question wasnt roshni a dr y did she become a teacher?. but got my answer why children were a forbidden topic between arjun and roshni. does arjun know that roshni wanted to be a mother?
can't wait to see how arjun will bring roshni home. I hope we will get good arjun roshni scenes
sorry for asking so many questions lol
coninue as soon as possible but dont take too long lol really want to know wjat happens next..
and thanks for the pm
It's OK dear. I understand.
Thank you for liking it.
No. Roshni has not become a teacher. She just lives here and teach painting to orphans in her free time.
Yes, Arjun knew. & he tried & supported her too.
Originally posted by misakiscarlet
read all the parts in one go...
what happened in that one year...
want to read more of it..
do pm me when u update next
Thank you. and welcome her.
You will now about it in next update.
Originally posted by Godly_Affection
awesome update dear
feeling relly sad for roshni
i wanna see arjun n roshni together
nxt time plz give long update
thankx for pm
sorry for being late..these exams..
Next update will be long wala update.
It's OK. Exams are more important
Edited by laila1994 - 09 March 2014 at 6:13am