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chotu update...but nice one...(why you mislead me AngryAngryAngryAngryAngry,sazaa milegi..WinkWink)

so its a year after roshni left...and arjun is hallucinating ashmara in roshni's place...DeadDead

he is troubled...his state of mind could be understood...and you potrayed well..

sam found roshni...but will arjun be able to get her back??

nd what about ashmara??where is she??what happened a year back with the three??

wanna know...

cotinue soon...thanks for pm

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Lovely updateHeart

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raja_ki_rani,  Aisha1998,  Beboluvshaleen,  rinku95,  Thank you for liking it. But I guess a comment won't hurt eitherSmile


Originally posted by miss_precious

Ur right... It was a short update!

If I remember correctly one year ago was not the first time he made love to her right? Or have u changed the storyline that the first time they made love to each other... Out of guilt she left him

Thanks for the pm and please update soon x



No. That was not the first time, & That has nothing to do Roshni leaving Arjun. 

Originally posted by _lovergirl101_

Loved it! Great storyline so far! Clap
Does arjun realise he loves Roshni??
Thanks for the pm...
Please continue soon! Smile 

P.S: it's so funny how both our first ffs are completely the opposite of each other!! Wink

Thank you for reading it.
You have to wait & read to know about itWink
Yup. I noticedLOL

Originally posted by Devangana

Read all the parts in one go.  Loved it Continue soon.  Beautifully written

Thank you & welcome hereSmile

Originally posted by jayprabu

Nice update. You have taken a year leap. You have nicely expressed state of Arjun after Roshini left. Eager to res d next update. Thanks for the pm and continue soon.

Yes, I have taken a leaf. Though it was not planned before but I am changing storyline a bit.
Thankyou. I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by naina25

great...storySmile
con soonSmile

Thank you & welcome here.

Originally posted by kunchu

Chotu sa... but interesting update
he is missing her for 1 year and now lets see how he is going to keep it up

Thankyou di (Hope I can call you that) for liking it. 
Wait & Read to knowSmile

Originally posted by Shamsad1607

First, sorry for being so late to comment on this thread.
Actually I was busy and read this story from the start.
this is an wonderful writing on Arjun-Roshni's emotions, love and friendship. & you've done it beautifully.
At the beginning you started with the stormy environment and Roshni's turmoil with her married life. her thoughts was beautifully written. then came up Arjun and her mutual friendship, how she can read that man like an open book. In spite of knowing Arjun loves someone else she tried to hold onto her marriage and finally she gave up thinking she was hurting Arjun by separating him from his love. May be she also thought Arjun just doing his duty towards her as a husband, not as the man who loves her.
Arjun made a choice at the first day his love proposal misfired, instead of telling Rosh the truth, he just gave her an affirmation to her love. He chose her friendship over his love. Or may be he chose his first love over his attraction?? You know the best, I guess!! but this guy didn't hide anything from Rosh, he even tried to get rid of Ashmara's memories...but in this process, he made his wife feel insecure...when he realized that and tried to convince her, it again gave her some wrong signal & the result is, Rosh made her mind up and left him.

the whole background story gave us our rough, reckless guy. Now he gonna bring his wife back...(he will na??) but my question is, Is it gonna easy for him? Will that lady gonna understand him this time? I'll wait for my answers.

Do continue...& thanks for PM.

 
Wow. It's like I am reading a summary of my own story.
Felling good actually. Thank you for such a big comment. Means alot.
@Bold, Nope, sorry, but it is not true/fact. What he had for Roshni was just friendship wala Love, nothing else. 
I will make sure he gets his wife back, but not so easilyLOL

Originally posted by Godly_Affection

awesome update dear
loved it
dream was scary
waiting for roshni to come back
continu soon 
thankx for pm

 
Thank you.
I knowLOL
Roshni will take her time to come back.

Originally posted by rimi_invisible

chotu update...but nice one...(why you mislead meAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry ,sazaa milegi..WinkWink)

so its a year after roshni left...and arjun is hallucinating ashmara in roshni's place...DeadDead

he is troubled...his state of mind could be understood...and you potrayed well..

sam found roshni...but will arjun be able to get her back??

nd what about ashmara??where is she??what happened a year back with the three??

wanna know...

cotinue soon...thanks for pm

I didn't mislead you. How can you not hate Roshni leaving Arjun, & the broken state of our ACP.Shocked
It was not hallucinating,  it was a dream.Confused
Yes, he will get her back, but after passing some obstacles.
More about Ashmara in next or coming updates.

Originally posted by jia03

Lovely updateHeart

Thank you for liking itSmile



Edited by laila1994 - 06 March 2014 at 11:26am

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Chapter 8 "Regret? May be" 

A beautiful woman was making a painting of a family, She drew a man with long height, Black eyes, Perfect M shaped lips, and a cut on his left eyebrow.  Then she painted two kids, a girl and a boy, on the canvas, right next to the man. Then she was about to draw a woman, may be man's wife, but she stopped, she looked at the painting, she just made, for a brief time with a lost look, then she started drawing the woman's face, She didn't realize she was just  making  patterns in the air by her brush until a little girl came running to her to show the painting, she made of a rainbow.

"Mene painting banayi, Kesi hai?"  A four year old girl asked in excitement.

"Buhut achi hai, bilkul apki tarha."

"Thankyou. woh painting apne banayi hai, Rosh-di?" She asked pointing at the painting,Roshni just made.

"Haan, par abhi complete nahi hai" Roshni answered for the girl, who ran away to her friends after giving a last look at her teacher.

Roshi looked at the painting again, a tear dropped out of her eyes, she wiped it before anybody could see it. But her eyes never stopped staring at the empty place on the canvas, where she wanted to draw herself. But maybe it was not her place after all.


Rabba mere ishq kisi ko 
Aise na tadpaye... Hoy
Dil ki baat rahe is dil mein,
Hothon tak na aaye, 
Na aaye...

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee 
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee 
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna


She still loved that man as much as she had before he broke the news that he loved someone else. She still wanted him to be happy. She still cared about him. If he would be happier with someone else rather than her, that was his choice. She realized at that moment that if you truly love someone, you want them to be happy, you want the best for them even if that means not being with you.

Tujhe har khushi de di
Labon ki hansi de di
Zulfon ki ghata lehraayee
Paigaam wafa ke laayee
Tune acchhi preet nibhayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Wo chand mere ghar-aangan
Ab to aayeega
Tere soone is aanchal ko
Wo bhar jaayega
Teri kar di god bharaayee,
Teri kar di god bharaayee,

Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Roshni settled herself on the rock at the corner of the playground. She was bored. She looked around, she loved watching children playing. She always wanted to be a mother. And according to the doctors she was capable too. But maybe it was not in her luck. She used to think maybe a child would make their bond stronger as all the old lady says. But maybe it was not in her luck either.

Khata ho gayi mujhse
Kaha kuch nahin tumse
Ikrar jo tum kar paate
To door kabhi na jaate
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

She knew, She was unconditionally in love her her ex-husband, She wanted him to be happy, Even if it means leaving him forever. She had decided to leave him when she first realizes his love for Ashmara, She wanted to free him from their marriage, And when Asmara finally got back, she did what she intended to do. That was not out of guilt, that was for her unconditional love for him.
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If you want PM for updates, please like the post on first page & buddy me.
PM for next part will be sent to those who will comment. 
I will update it in two or three days, You know what you have to do.Evil Smile


Edited by laila1994 - 06 March 2014 at 12:42pm

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Lovely!! But a bit short! Clap Love Roshni's undying love for arjun. Continue soon...
by the way, did u get my pm? Smile

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Superb
Roshni is so kind
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Originally posted by laila1994

<font size="3">Chapter 8 "Regret? May be"</font>
<font size="3">
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">A beautiful woman was makinga painting of a family, She drew a man with long height, Black eyes, Perfect M shaped lips, and a cut on his left eyebrow. Then she painted two kids, a girl and a boy, on the canvas, right next to the man. Then she was about to draw a woman, may be man's wife, but she stopped, she looked at the painting, she just made, for a brief time with a lost look, then she started drawing the woman's face, She didn't realize she was just making patterns in the air by her brush until a little girl came running to her to show the painting, she made of a rainbow.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Mene painting banayi,Kesihai?" A four year old girl asked in excitement.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Buhut achi hai, bilkul apki tarha."</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">
</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Thankyou. woh painting apne banayihai,Rosh-di?"She asked pointing at the painting,Roshni just made.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">"Haan, par abhicomplete nahi hai"Roshni answered for the girl, who ran away to her friends after giving a last look at her teacher.</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">Roshi looked at the painting again, a tear dropped out of her eyes, she wiped it before anybody could see it. But her eyes never stopped staring at the empty place on the canvas, where she wanted to draw herself. But maybe it was not her place after all.</font></font>

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<font><font color="#ff0000"><font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Rabba mere </font>ishq kisi ko<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"></font>
Aise na tadpaye<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">... Hoy</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil ki baat rahe is dil mein,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Hothon tak na aaye,</font>
Na aaye<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Tujhe yaad na meri aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Tujhe yaad na meri aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil </font>roya<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"> ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Dil </font>roya<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif"> ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font face="Georgia, Helvetica, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">She still loved that man as much as she had
before he broke the news that he lovedsomeoneelse.Shestill
wanted him to be happy. She still cared about him. If he would behappierwith someone else rather than her, that was his
choice. She realized at that moment that if you truly love someone, you want
them to be happy, you want the best for them even if that means not being with
you.
</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Tujhe har khushi de di</font><font color="#ff0000">
Labon ki hansi de di
Zulfon ki ghata lehraayee
Paigaam wafa ke laayee
Tune acchhi preet nibhayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Wo chand mere ghar-aangan
Ab to aayeega
Tere soone is aanchal ko
Wo bhar jaayega
Teri kar di god bharaayee,
Teri kar di god bharaayee,</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
</font><font color="#ff0000">Kisi se ab kya kehna</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Roshnisettled herself on the rock at the corner of the playground. She was bored. She looked around, she loved watching children playing. She always wanted to be a mother. And according to the doctors she was capable too. But maybe it was not in her luck. She used to thinkmaybe a child would make their bond stronger as all the old lady says. But maybe it was not in herluckeither.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Khata ho gayi mujhse
Kaha kuch nahin tumse
Ikrar jo tum kar paate
To door kabhi na jaate
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Koi samjhe na peer parayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Tujhe yaad na meri aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee
Kisi se ab kya kehna
</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">She knew, She was unconditionally in love her her ex-husband, She wanted him to be happy, Even if it means leaving him forever. She had decided to leave him when she first realizes his love for Ashmara, She wanted to free him from their marriage, And when Asmara finally got back, she did what she intended to do. That was not out of guilt, that was for her unconditional love for him.</font></font></td></tr></table>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2" color="#993366">*************************************************************</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2" color="#993366">Read the note below</font></font>

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