This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisibleek bar tum bas dc kar ke dekho...mein timhara jeena haram kar dungi...
tumhari ye dhasu story ka bakwas updates mein hi likhke post karti rahungi..fir dekhna..😡
This content was originally posted by: laila1994
Really, ab to mai DC zaroor karongi.Or tittle b change kardongi " Laila's SSV by Rimi"😆
This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisible
karo fir dekho..kya updates ate hai..
This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisible
abhi to bohot busy hu...ye story next year likhungi...abhi to OS likhne haina..😳
This content was originally posted by: laila1994Update do warna Samjhi ya samjhao
This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisible
nehi re...chalo mein hari tum jeet gayi...ab to update de do..😳
This content was originally posted by: laila1994
Mujhe pata tha tum mujhse ni jeet paogi.Agar kal time mila to update kardoongi. Promise😳
This content was originally posted by: myriad_huesfinally read the whole story...wonderful work..!!! such a nice story... and for a change, no vamps!! that is actually the best part..but what happened to ashmara?
pls do pm me the rest..waiting!beautifully written..brought out their emotions so well..waiting to see how arjun convinces her to come back...i must say that your style of writing is amazing..it has a natural flow..very lucid...and it invariably adds to the charm of your story.. :)waiting for more..continue soon!beautifully written..and the dialogues were so poignant..subtle but impactful...i loved the way you portrayed arjun's guilt and roshni's love..but my favourite was the last line!!thanks for the pm.. :)Firstly, Thankyou for reading & liking my work.All I can say is I am glad you liked it. Means alot to me.This content was originally posted by: rinku95Fantastic
Now it's arjun time to make things right
Continue soon
Thanks for pmThanks.Yes, Roshni has suffered a lot. Now it's Arjun's turn.This content was originally posted by: skraftyGreat update
loved it
Roshni's pain was nicely written
waiting for the next part
continue soonThank you for liking it😊This content was originally posted by: rimi_invisibleawesome update..very high in emotional quotient...
even simple words does wonder to the heart when its hurt..same happened here..arjun's state is difficult but roshni was right in her decisions...i respect her but now i adore her...
beautiful update laila...
about the dialogues..i wont speak a word i had already said enough..let others say..
i am ready to take all the blame...let them come first..😉You think Roshni was right? Well, I think totally opposite.Thankyou for forcing me to write the dialogues. I guess most of the readers liked it.😃This content was originally posted by: DevanganaRoshni did the right thing when she realized Arjun is in love with Asmara. And now Arjun is doing the right thing by waiting for her and trying to bring her back into his life. Update soon.
Am I the only one, who thinks what Roshni did was wrong??This content was originally posted by: Godly_AffectionAwesome update dear
loved it
dialog were nice
arjun n roshni need some time
thanks for pm
continue soonThank you😊This content was originally posted by: _lovergirl101_So sweet... yet so short. Lovely update yaar! 👏 but we need some happiness na?? 😉 thanks for da pm and cont soon!
I know it was too short. Sorry😳Don't expect happiness in their life so soon.This content was originally posted by: halima_zakawonder ful
Thank you😃This content was originally posted by: raja_ki_raniI am sorry for asking so many questions 😭 I just get really excited about stuff. I promise no more questions from side from now on. and about the update... I was really waiting for the conversation between arjun and roshni and it was bang on. very very emotional and I really liked arjun's last line and Would love to read the next part soon. hope you dont make us wait soo long like you did with this part 😆 😃
and thanks for the pmFirstly, Never be sorry for asking questions. Believe me, every writer likes it. It shows the involvement and attachment of the reader. 😉Thank you I am glad you liked it. You are one of my sincere reader.Sorry, I am late and I know it😳This content was originally posted by: kunchunice chapter at last she spoke up
now its waiting period for Arjun
continue soonThank you😊This content was originally posted by: angle1shanulovely update..u know after reading ur updates i begain to love arni...the way u describe feelings of both the arjun and roshni is too good..arjun ko pass hote hue bi seperation ka pain suffer karna hi padega...but hope arjun confess kar de apna love roshni ke liye...but again love it..continue soon and thanks for pm
Thank you very much. Awww I am flattered 😃😛Yup, I hope that tooThis content was originally posted by: misakiscarletamazingly written..
love it no words to describe this wonderfull update..
contd. soon
thnx for pmThank you. means a lot😊This content was originally posted by: ponnuzwell..that was a very poignant update...😭😭,,i just loved arjuns last dialouge👏👏 and roshni..wow...she is one rare lady...👏👏...just wonderfull..but as soon as we reach on the 7th cloud, the update gets over😕 agli baar thodi lambi update likhoge??? Pls??
thanks for the PM and pls update fast...Thank you.Well, as I said before, I try to write long updates but as I am a new writer I lack ideas and words So don't expect much from me. 😳Sorry🤢
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