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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooow awesomee Just loveee it readed paaart 1 
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Posted: 10 years ago
BTW add in yooour pm list if yoou haveee oneee :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Anukalu


I too felt like that. Sorry! I mean you have depicted her in such a childish manner, u can't help but think that he's taking advantage of her trust in him. But will try and keep an open mind...so you better update ASAP don't let us linger in our doubts for too long...please don't be dishearten with this comment...just giving you my honest opinion. Prove us wrong. Your story is very unique from all the other FFs so please don't stop do keep ur chin up continue.

Thanx a lot for the motivation. I really need it to cont. It means a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
@sajnave...thanx a lot for loving the story.
I am glad & do buddy me for PMS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
sounds interesting and different plz do pm me for this
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: nakaja

sounds interesting and different plz do pm me for this

Thanx a lot. I will do buddy me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...its sooo interesting ðŸ˜Š
plz pm me for the next update i have added u in buddylist
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Posted: 10 years ago
it is really different one
i wanted to start a new concept on naive aastha and bold Shlok but you stole my thought i think😆
but brilliant dear😊
continue soon

and hey it is small suggestion here
please use he or  she instead of I when you write the dialogue of theirs so that the readers will not be confuse ðŸ˜Š
i am sorry if i offended you ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Swati is no more...yipeee its a good news..
Omg shlok is getting a bit bold
Looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: nakaja

wow...its sooo interesting😊

plz pm me for the next update i have added u in buddylist

Thanx a lot dear I have accepted u. Will pm u sure.