SS: Jab they Met again Page 85 26th may updated NEW NEW

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CHAPTER 1:



"Adi, dont call me mom, do i look like mom, 
" she shouted on the little Adi who is five year old...



"But, you are my mom, how can i call you by name, its a sin"

"Oh oh Adi, call me jodha i wont mind...after all i am young and beautiful girl, if you call me as mom, than i feel embrassed in front of all..."

"okie, i will call you jodha only for today..."

he was a cute notorious kid of the house...a lovely child ...

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She took little Adi for shopping as his birthday was nearing...

"Oh Adi, be careful dont run, you will 
  fall down..."
"But choti mom, i wont fall down, i am a brave boy"

"what choti mom, i said you call me jodha"

Adi started running away in the crowded mall as he wanted to reach the third floor which was for the kids...

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Jodha could not catch hold of adi on time and he escaped from her, and she knew he will be in 3rd floor...and she got on elevator to reach the third floor..

Adi rushed in to the toys shops in the third floor...and started picking up cars, helicopter, gun...
the shopkeeper saw lonely kid and came to assist him...

"hey boy is there no one with you, may i assist you in choosing the toys.."

"No thanks my mom is in mall, she will come here any minute..."

the shopkeeper laughed...

the customer who was nearby laughed listening to little adi ...

"oh your mom left a small kid all alone" the shopkeeper asked him...

"yes my mom is really jovial lady, she has given me lots of independence you know..."

"but boy what if you  get lost, and if someone kidnaps you"

"DOnt worry uncle no one can kidnap me...as i have a gun with me..."

Shopkeeper smiled at Adi, and turned to other customer who was selecting toys there...and he was smiling at the conversation of a boy and shopkeeper...

'Sir, what can we say about todays mothers, they are so modernized and so careless they left a small child alone in a mall..."

the customer looked at boy and said...

"its too dangerous for a child to have a careless mother..."
saying this he continued his shopping of toys...

"Sir, may i know what type of toy you are looking"

"I am looking for a barbie doll kitchen set, as my daughter want it for her birthday...but i am not finding it..."

"Sir just a minute i have that piece there, wait here sir i will get you"

the shop keeper moved from him to get...

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Meanwhile Jodha barged in to the shop and she was breathing heavily...

and seeing her in anger, Adi tried to escape from her...and shouted OH NO when she caught him escaping and held him tightly and lifted him up...

Adi started shouting...

"Oh, no, leave me mom, i am not small baby leave me down.."
he started beating hands and legs in air...

the shopkeeper and customers attention reached the lady and a boy...

shopkeeper handed over the barbie set to customer and reached for boys help...

"mam, why your son is shouting, you are so careless, this is not the way to handle kids,..."

"Oh, sir, he is not a child he is a monster, he is troubling me from morning, he came running here and i was searching for him from 15 minutes.."

Jodha left adi down when he calmed down...
by this time she was tiered...

the customers eyes got glued to jodha who was speaking with shopkeeper...

Jodhas eyes got stuck when she saw
that customer...she widened her eyes...and he too widened his eyes...

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"Mom, please pay the bill for these toys, let us go home soon, i am hungry too..."
Jodha came back to sense, and reached the billing counter..
the customer reached the counter too...to pay his bill...

shopkeeper asked him..

"Sir this is the new piece of barbie, your daughter will love it.."
Jodha looked at the customers side ...
he too looked at her...

"yes, my daughter will love to get this gift from me..."

"Mom, lets go now...bye uncle..."
Adi pulled jodha out of the shop...

the customer stood still seeing her...

the shopkeeper noticed it...
"sir, do you know that lady...i felt you knew her..."

he looked back at shopkeeper...

"yes, once upon a time i knew her, but i dint knew her new identity..."

Shopkeeper was confused and customer left the place...with his toy gift to his daughter...




HEYA HOPE YOU LOVE THIS STORY...


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