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Read all 5 parts 
Superb updates
Plz continue soon 
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very nice FF 

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read all the parts in one go.. really nice FF... please do update soon!

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waiting for update

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Update plz

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UPDATE sweety??

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Am back!!Wink First of all thank u n sorry!thanks 4 the comments n sorry 4 the late updateCry.Won't take much of your time so here u gooo...

***Part 6***
Rachna is crying,kabir tries to console her.He puts his hand around rachna n rachna keeps her head on kabir.They both go home.
At home,the 3 r worried 4 rachna n kabir(gunjan,mayank n raj) when rabir enter.All r shocked seeing them.
Mayank:ye sab kya hai?
Gunjan takes rachna in her room.
Raj:tu thik hai?or ye kya bachpan hai tum dono kaha the.
Kabir narrates the whole story.
Mayank:tu jake kapre badale warna td lag jayegi or tm dono so jao ab.
Raj:mmm
Kabir:mayank,tum kal ka pogramme cancel kardo...
Mayank:haan me bhi kuch aisa hi soch raha tha or rachna muje thik nahi lag rahi hai...to..
Raj:ok!ab chalo kabir...
They both r going to their room.Gunjan comes out of rachna's room.kabir sees gunjan coming out n thinks to g to rachna(raj is already in his room)he takes few steps nstops
Kabir:nahi...kal mil lunga...
He turns back to go to his room then again uns fcing rachna's room
Kabir:abhi chala jata hu...
N goes in her room,he sees rachna sleeping.He ges near r n sits down.he puts his hand on rachna's hair.
Kabir:kitni innocent hai...sote huwe kitni cte lagti hai...aisa lagta hai ki koi pari zameen par utar ayi ho.
He then sees rachna's hand n gets up to get first aid box.He ties the bandage on rachna's hand. Meanwhile raj sees that kabir is not in his room.
Raj;yeh kabir bhi na...zarur rachna se milne gaya hoga.
Gunjan comes to rachna's room nis shocked seeing kbir nmostly coz he was holding rachna's hand.
Gunjan(shocked):kabir...tum yahaan...
Kabir(shocked as well):wo...me...
Raj enters n sees gunjan also there.
Raj(tries to heandle te situation):kabir,jaldi arna yaar...
Coat le liya?
Kabir(understood raj's signal):haan,bus aarah tha(n picks his coat which was lying on the table)good nighyt hhi..
N both leave.Gunjan still doesn't kabir.
Gunjan:agar coat lene aayatha to rachna k pas kya kar raha tha...akhir chakkar kya hai...???
Raj n kabir go in their room.kabir changes his clothes n is about to switch off the lights when...
Raj:kabir kyun gaya tha waha...
Kabir:yaar phirse sawaal mat shuru kar dena...sirf dekhne gaya tha ki rachna thik hai ya nahi...
Raj:achcha agar me sahi waqt par nahi ata to pata hai na...
Kabir:ok ab soja tu...
***morning***
Rachna is ready n is combing her hair,she rmembers how kabir was fighting,how he was caring for her..
Rachna:arrey wah!!!mujhe pata nahi tha ki wo itni ahchi fighting karta hai...ek thank  to banta hai.
She goes to kabir's room n knocks.
Kabir:yes...koun hai?
Rachna(enters):me hu...
Kabir:ohh come in...tum yahaan kuch kaam tha or ye choro tum ab thik ho...
Rachna:wo...
Kabir(interepts):tumhe aaram karna chahye..ab kuch to bolo..
Rachna:shhh!kitna bolte ho tum,mujhe bolne todo...
Kabir:sorryy...
Rachna:thank u kabir
Kabir:huunnn..
Rachna:wo kal jo...
Kabir:rachna kitni baar kaha hai no thank u
Rachna:ok sor...
Kabir:n no sorry...
Rachna:ok...tum ne packing kardi.
Kabir:packing???
Rachna:itne choke huwe kyun ho...hum ja rhe hi ayad nahi...
Kabir:wo..hum ne cancel kardiya..
Rachna:kyun??...meri waja se?
Kabir:han...nahi..
Rachna:tum packing karo me abhi bhayya se baat karti hu...
Rachna leaves n goes to mayank.She explains mayank that se ok n they should go.mayank agrees n all decide to go.they all r ready n leave.After few hours they reach te farmhouse.They all go to their rooms n get freshed.they all have lunch.
**Night**
From neighboor,they get invitation for holi wich is 2morrow.
Gunjan:hey!!!everyone 
All go by gunjan.
Mayank:kya baat hai!
Rachna:sab thik hai sab ko bulaya?
Gunjan:han sab thik hai,pata hai kal kya hai...
Mayank:kya hai?
Gunjan:kal holi hai!!
Rachna:wow!!
Gunjan:or humme invitation aaya hai neighboor se..
Chaya:bohot maza ayega...
Kabir:haannn
Mayank:ok guys sab sojaw...
All go to their rooms.
Precap:holi masti
Sorry once again as it short than other parts...
Do comment!!


Edited by cuteangelasya - 19 March 2014 at 7:33am

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