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**RaBir FF**:I love you!!Chapter 9 Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update ,continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update  continue soon
thanks 4 the pm 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vry vry nice continue soon n thnx 4 such a lovely story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dearie!! waiting for the next one...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi evry1!!!!
I knw I knw u all have 4gotten this ff...
Am so so sorry people...
Am back with an update 
Hope u all like it

***Part 7***

All r happy n excited 4 holi 2morrow...
Raj n kabir go to their room...
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Raj n Kabir's room...
Raj:wht r u planning 4 2morrow?...
Kabir is busy in his thoughts so doesn't reply...
Raj puts his hand on kabir's shoulder n moves it 
Raj:KABIR!!!!
Kabir:hunnn...wht u saying...
Raj:whts wrong with u man...where were u lost?
Kabir:nothing wht were u saying?
Raj:nothing...(N goes on the bed)
Raj:kabir may I ask u something?
Kabir:is it to something 2 ask...just ask wht do want 2 say?
Raj:r u in love?
Kabir: wht?? me no...
Raj:I knw it...I just knw it tht this gonna be your answer...(In his mind:u may lie to me but knw tht u r...in luv)
They both go to sleep...
Raj :(in his mind)I will make u say tht u r in luv...just wait n watch...n I'll also get u propose her...
Raj:do u think me as your best friend?
Kabir:wht kind of a question?
Raj:just answer in yes or no.
Kabir:okk!!!yes...bt whts wrong with u?
Raj:nothing...ok do u trust me?
Kabir:yes.
Raj:do u trust yourself?
Kabir:yes
Raj:did u enjoy in mayank n gunjan's wedding?
Kabir(remembers his moments with rachna):yes 
Raj:r u in luv?in luv with rachna?
Kabir:yes(tht whn he realised wht he said)aahh...no...
Raj:got ya...(Very happy)
Kabir:raj no...
Raj:oh mr tripati u r in luv with rachna...
The one who u disliked so much on the first encounter...
Kabir:ok now u knw it so...
Raj:tell me hw
Kabir:wht hw?
Raj:hw did fall in luv wth her?
Kabir:wht???wht kind of a question...
Raj:ohh come on kabir...
Kabir:ok...(Gets up from bed n turn his back on raj)I really don't knw hw...(Remembers rachna n his moments)I don't knw hw I fell 4 her...her smile,her simplicity,her childishness...her everything...just didn't realise hw...I really luv her dude...I can't imagine my life without her...
Raj:ohh kabir...I still can't believe u r in luv...
N tht too 2 tht person who u didn't want 2 c after 1st meeting...n now u can't live without her...wow...
Kabir:I guess thts wht is called luv...
Raj:y don't u tell her...I hv a great idea ...y don't  u propose her 2morrow on holi...
Kabir:but...
Raj:no ifs n buts...
Kabir:okk...
They both go to sleep...


Rachna n chaya in their room...they both plan something...
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MORNING!!!
Rachna,chaya n Mayan r ready n r in the living-room.
Rachna points towards chaya n they both leave 4 thr...
They get to kabir n raj's room...who r peacefully sleeping.
Both the girls giggle.
Rachna:mr kabir tripathi I'll shw u hw I play holi.
Rachna n chaya get on the 2 sides.chaya on the left n rachna on the right..n the two(kabir n raj)sleeping in the middle.
Chaya is standing down whereas rachna is standing on the stool...both r holding rope...
Rachna points 2wards chaya
Rachna:Happy holi
N both pull the rope the color water from up is poured on kabir n raj..
Both wake up in a jerk.both the girls giggle...n laugh out...
Rachna:happy holi kabir...kyun enjoyed the bath...
N start lauging...as she is lauging the stool is shaking n she falls 
Rachna:aaahhh...
Kabir quickly gets near n holds her in his arms...
Rachna has closed her eyes n holds on kabir around his neck...
Kabir is having a smile n is enjoying it.
Rachna:plz don't leave me plz plz
Kabir(in his mind):I'll never leave u...(Out):u r ok now...u can open your eyes...
She opens her eyes n sees kabir holding her...she looks at him n both share an eyelock
Background music is played "banjareey ko ghar" piano...

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Meanwhile...
Gunajn n mayank r thinking where the two girls have gone...
In the search they head towards kabir's room...they r just entering 
N rabir sharing the eyelock n rachna in kabir's arms...

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Precap:rabir n mayan dancing...
Rachna drunk...

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All likes,comments,dislikes n also critism is welcomed...

Sorry people I'll try n update the next soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
I didnt forget this ff,just read the previous part to know where u stopped,I used to be silent reader n hit like alone those times,but I liked ur ff a lot esp the additional char Raj Rohit ..Kabir n Rachna both r too naughty loved that fall,poor Kabir so mad in luv he runs to hold her n says he will never leave her even after she poured colors on him ha ha,howsweet of him. Waiting to see their confession
precap:Rachna drunk wow interesting
I must thankyou for writing t full of English
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Posted: 9 years ago
I remember reading this FF even way before actually joining IF. I just read the previous parts and remembered of it.
I really like this story and am glad you updated! Rachna and Kabir's love story is very sweet.
I wonder if Rohit would do something..
I also love Chaya and Raj's bonding, they are both very cute!!😳
You've done a nice job writing this story so I request you to update ASAP.πŸ˜ƒ
P.S: Thanks for the PM;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Cuteangel i had wiull start to read this ff from first time.So will read it one by one and give review for sure.
Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: saravathi

I didnt forget this ff,just read the previous part to know where u stopped,I used to be silent reader n hit like alone those times,but I liked ur ff a lot esp the additional char Raj Rohit ..Kabir n Rachna both r too naughty loved that fall,poor Kabir so mad in luv he runs to hold her n says he will never leave her even after she poured colors on him ha ha,howsweet of him. Waiting to see their confession

precap:Rachna drunk wow interesting
I must thankyou for writing t full of English

Aww thank u so much!!!!
Ya ws just imaging n got this idea
Your welcome,,, just saw tht most get hindi prop so decided to change in english...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Pookhi

I remember reading this FF even way before actually joining IF. I just read the previous parts and remembered of it.
I really like this story and am glad you updated! Rachna and Kabir's love story is very sweet.
I wonder if Rohit would do something..
I also love Chaya and Raj's bonding, they are both very cute!!😳
You've done a nice job writing this story so I request you to update ASAP.πŸ˜ƒ
P.S: Thanks for the PM;)

Aww thanks...
Didn't think of rohit being bad but must think nowπŸ˜†
Yup I'll try n update soon😳