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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Hi guys!

This GOTW is going to ask us all to get creative.

We will be writing our very own story!! We will each write a sentence and continue the story.

Whenever I get time I will update the story in the post below!!

One sentence per post please!!! And the person who makes the next post can do ANYTHING they want to the characters and people.


Hope you enjoy!


Edited by Manojie - 17 February 2014 at 4:52am

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STORY Post

Once upon a time there lived a little girl.  She loves playing with her toy cars.
Her toy cars become a part of her life. She used to carry it with her where ever she went.

One day all of her toy cars were stolen. She started crying. Tired of crying she eventually slept and she had a dream. She dreamt of a fairy good mother approaching her, with her magical wand. Fairy godmother asked the little girl what does she wants, which will make her happy. Fairy added that whatever she asks for will be with her only in her dreams. And the lil' half-heartedly agreed. She asked for a magical car

A car which only obeys her commands, takes her anywhere she wishes. The fairy agreed. The girl woke up from her sleep and screamed in fear. Alice woke up in fright. And she was very surprised to see the car for real. Alice has a crush on Aham and Aham is now in the car, smiling lovingly. But Alice's evil step mother, who also had a crush on Aham, came into her bedroom. Alice was very angry wid the evil mother as her dream had vanished and there was no car and most painfully no AHAM.

Feeling sad Alice again went to sleep expecting her fairy godmother to show up again. Fairy godmother gave Alice a magic ring in her dream. A ring with a beautiful ruby on it. The fairy Godmother asked her to rub the ring whenever she needed her help.  The fairy disappeared and Alice rubbed the ring but nothing happened. She became very sad and disapointed. And she threw the ring n it fell on the floor hard.

Suddenly she saw smoke coming out from the ring. A fairy appeared from that smoke in her white colour dress, she seemed same age as Alice was.
"The fairy godmother is evil and working for Barbara, your step mother" the new fairy said.

She stood dumbstuck for a moment or two, hearing the new fairy's words.
"Was that the reason her earlier magic did not work for me?" Asked Alice to her new Fairy friend.
 "Barbara has bribed your Fairy Godmother because she wants her to rob you of your dreams and stop you believing magic." She said.
Alice asked new fairy for a hand grenade to kill Barbara.
Alice was reminded that hand grenade will stay in dram only and can not kill barbara.
Alice asks the new fairy to help her get rid of her step mother
The fairy tells Alice that Barbara is invincible whilst her fairy godmother is on her side.
Alas, hearing this worst of news, Alice sat down crazed by the words she just heard and thought to herself "step mom - evil; fairy godmother - corrupt and evil; new random fairy - question mark ... I'll just kill all three then, muahahaha"
"Alice, what you are thinking is really bad!" said Fairy interrupting Alice thoughts as Fairy could listen to all the thoughts which were going through Alices' mind.
Alice looked up to see the fairy there.She was shocked.
Alice grabbed fairy's hair and started beating her.

Fairy got angered and cursed Alice to become a cutie white mousie
The cutie white mouse reached lakshgriha where pandavas and kunti were staying with purochan.
Alice saw Kunti's face and thought she resembled her Barbara mom
Kunti saw the mouse and thought of feeding kheer to it
Alice got to know that the Kheer was poisoned
So Alice thought of informing the same to the pandavas but they couldn't understand

She wanted to run away but Nakul was forcing her to eat the kheer..
Alice after much persuasion by Nakul finally ate the Khee
Once Alice the mouse ate the kheer, she became a horse

As Nakul can talk with horses, Alice informed them about the poisonous Kheer.
Pndavas thanked alice and saved themselves. meanwhile alice returned back home and met her evil step mom

Her evil step mom gave her 5 blue stone and tell her,"now crack what's the meaning behind this blue 5 stones...or else..."
alice joyfully took the stones and after looking at it's beauty for a moment, she threw them at her evil step mom yelling "Die Rascala Dieee"
Alice's step mom was surprised to hear her scream at her. She was dumb struck.
alice's mother banishes alice from her house and the gates of the house are closed for alice forever.
Alice leaves the house , but doesn't know where to go.
She walks all alone crying and talking to herself, when she finds a box full of chocolates lying on the road.
She goes to pick the box,but stops herself.
The new fairy (her name is Mini Missy) appears and feeds Alice the chocolates, while on the bottom of the box an inscription slowly appears "Box of Chocolates for Alice ... Aham is mine darling ... Lots of love, Barbara aka soon-to-be Mrs.aham Sharma"

Alice and Mini Missy are shocked when they hear a voice from the skies that said 'Aham is neither for Alice nor Barbara, He will marry Diala.'
Alice is very angry with the voice above but now all she wishes for is to get hold of Diala, so she goes in search of her.
Alice gets to know that Diala is an active member of India Forums so she creates an IF account for herself with the name Mrs.Aham to provoke her for a fight.
Alices' trick works good as 'Mrs Aham' user name starts irritating  Diala every time she sees it!
Diala starts reporting many posts of Alice for reasons as silly as grammatic errors
Luckily Minakshi is the mod and a friend of Diala so she doesn't get too annoyed, but this happiness doesn't last too long since Alice (Mrs. Aham) is slowly attracting the likes of every other Mahabharata IFer, INCLUDING Minakshi!
Tired of this even Alice also starts reporting without any reason
Alice realises that fatssrilanka, Rishi_, _vash_ and spatel23 dont like Diala and decides to make friends with them
Rishi advises Alice to stop wasting time in going against Diala and he will help her meet Aham.

Alice is happy but also suspects Rishi's intention as his words were too good to be true.
But Alice soon gets to know that someone has given her wrong information on they all not liking Diala, so they all in turn starts attacking Alice.
Alice is fed up and runs away from IF and is thinking what next.
but a mysterious figure with the letter "D" on the back of its jacket follows behind Alice with a knife stained with the blood of some innocent person. 
Poor Alice was deep in thoughts of Aham and her rival Diala that she did not notice the figure nearing her.
A swift movement and the victim is writhing in pain as the knife penetrated the tissues; all seemed to go well except for one thing: the victim was Mini Missy!
Just then Alice got up in shock to realize that this was just a bad nightmare and also realized that its very difficult to attack Diala since she is very strong.


Barbara enters Alice's room and tells her that until Diala is defeated, they both will stay united all through their way to win Aham's.
Alice is overwhelmed by this gesture of her step mom but somewhere in her heart thinks it's better to side with Diala and remove this oldie from their way first.
"Alice, what is running in your mind? are you with me?" asked Barbara.
 "Ah..mom I need some time to think, I can't make decision right now!" telling this Alice started planning to meet Diala personally so she could kick this old lady out of her way.
She sends a sweet PM to Diala, but gets a reply 'I wont talk to you unless you change your username'
insulted by the response from her to-be-ally-until-Barbara-is-dead "friend" Diala, Alice cooks up another wild plan involving chips, salsa, and a certain dairy product called goat's cheese!!
thinking of the plan  involving chips, salsa, and goat's cheese she gets hungry and goes to a restaurant where to her surprise sees Aham having a cup of coffee all alone
Aham is immediately attracted to Alice and they sit down, have a cup of coffee, and they proceed out to a dark ally way where Aham rips his face off!

The person behind the mask is none other than barbara who had com with the intention of killing alice and meanwhile alice gets a phonecall saying her real mother is alive.
with two shocks at the same time, Alice is stunned without knowing what to do next

barbara tries to kill alice with a knife since the house where they live is actually on alice's name  and barbara wants it to be her own
It was a spectacular plan with Barbara and her boyfriend named billy bob junior, but billy bob junior had a change of heart; he now wanted Alice only and not her house
Billy bob junior had overheard Barbara talking to Alice's real mom's kidnapper.

Billy bob junior calls his father Bob the builder to make a helicopter for him and Alice so that he can save her from Barbara, Bob the builder start working on it with his theme "bob the builder krke dikhaenge, bob the builder haan bhai haan" running in background.

Billy plans to unite Alice with her mom and ask for Alice's hand in return of favor
Billy promises alice that he'll help her find her mother.  Meanwhile Diana(Alice's mom) is actually kept as hostage in a secret underground dungeon in the same house where alice and barbara live.
Diana slowly wakes up, being splashed with water, to the screaming face of an annoying woman - Barbara.
Barbara is about to torture Diana, when she sees an old man who shouts "ADHARMA" at Barbara.







Edited by Manojie - 22 February 2014 at 9:37am

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Once upon a time there lived a little girl. 

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 4:59am | IP Logged
She loves playing with her toy cars
Nice game Manoj Clap

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Her toy cars become a part of her life
nice game Manoj..Thumbs Up

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 5:44am | IP Logged
She used to carry it with her where ever she went.

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 5:45am | IP Logged
One day all of her toy cars were stolen.

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 5:51am | IP Logged
she started crying

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