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SWARON SHORT STORY KYUN ADHOORI YEH FAIRYTALE(SS)(UPDATED ON PAGE 5) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Rey's monologue and realisation was good. The best part was clearing of misunderstanding between Swaron. Just hope Sharon gets fine soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was wonderful and amazing... omg how much swayan had to think about it...
and in confused state whether to do this or not ... and go for dance institute but a call
from rey made all the situation worse for swayan and he had to do a lot of to just get
out from the airport... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful work. Nice.
love swaron
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Posted: 9 years ago
I had read 2 chap before but still read them again..
1st part was amazing...loved swayam's pov...it was emotional...
2nd part was also really good ...loved sheron and rey too..
3rd part was also good ..filmy tha..but good ..really liked rey's pov and guilt ...one more thing i liked was rey calling swayam 'bro bro..'
I am a big reyam fan...will love to read their patch-up too...
Exited for swaron broke-down and ak ki band bajne wali hai...
Update soon...its have been long time now..
P.S thank you so much for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
plz continue soon and pm me