Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Anklets Maaneet SS Romantic passionate 3rd climax pg101

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Posted: 10 years ago
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When I was in school I came to know the tragic story of Othello'.I was very sad.I wished Othello had'nt killed Desdemona.I wished Lago had got exposed before Othello killed her.From that thought this story took birth.Though this is inspired by Othello it is no way similar to Othello or the movies made from Othello like Omkara and Kaliyattam.Remember...this story will not have a tragic ending.It is my attempt to change the ending of Othello'.



Character Sketch




Savitri Devi Khurana:Grand mother of Maan,Dev and Vikram.Maan Singh Khurana:Savitri's late son Mahendar's and his late wife Indira's eldest son.2 years back he met with an accident and after the urgent surgery he was reported to be sterile.Because of this defect Maan had huge inferiority complex.But Geet who fell in love with Maan's character removed the inferiority complex from his heart and he also fell for her





Dev Singh Khurana: Savitri's late son Mahendar's and his late wife Indira's youngest son.A loving brother.





Vikram Singh Khurana:Though he is named as Khurana he is actually Mahendar Khurana's second wife late Kokila's son from her first marriage.Maan and Dev consider him as their own brother.Savitri also loves him.Though Vikram seems to be loving to them inside his mind he has only hatred for them.He is jealous of Maan and Dev,because before death Mahendar entrusted Maan to take care of the whole Khurana constructions as he found Maan the best one to do so.And because of Dev's capability Maan made Dev his partner recently.Vikram was only made the manager because of his slack nature.



Rakshak:He was Geet's friend before.Now he is Geet's fiance.He loves her madly.




Mohindar Handa:The rich father of Geet who brought her up single handedly



Geet Handa:Motherless daughter of Mohindar Handa. She loves Maan very much.






Meera Sinha:Dev's secret girl friend.Accidently Vikram found out their affair and kept it a secret as per Dev's request.




Naintara:Vikram's wife who believes him blindly and she can do anything for him



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Posted: 10 years ago
congo for new story
othello is one of my fav novel
awesome concept

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congrats 4 new ss...πŸ‘...loved the character sketch...πŸ‘πŸΌ...looking forward to the story......thank u 4 pm...πŸ˜ƒ...pls continue soon...😊...
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Ahhh don't tell me Othello 
That sure made me sad
If he loved her that much why couldn't he trust her
Like the sound of this
I can tell who is what
Let's see how you change it all
It shall befun reading it
Cheer fr pm

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awesomee cs😊
continue soon😊
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nice...
i haven't read othello
so looking forward to ur story
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congrats for new ss

nice cs looking different


continue soon
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Congrats for new storyπŸ‘
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first i didn't read othello
So i think i will get to know by this what it hold
CS awesome
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Loved the character sketch.
Eagerly waiting for the update