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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Lovely update...
Plz continue soon..

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 3:59am | IP Logged
nice update!Smile
antara ko "allergic reaction"LOLacc. to raghu...naughty guy..Wink
jungle scene was goodSmile...raghu concerned about herEmbarrassed
update soonSmile

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Simply awesome
Do update soon

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OMG i am loving this story too much ...kya speed hai yaar ...sabkuch so fast n so passionate Embarrassed n i want to know what is Antara's feeling for Raghu????

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Hellow guyz! I'm back with another update. .enjoy!

Part 5

Rantara finally reaced the hospital..doctors examined both of them. .after iv n medications they were
Discharged from the hospital. .antara was heading towards the exit when suddenly her head started to
Spin...she touched her temples. ..oh no I'm gonna pass out! Before she could land on the floor raghu
Scooped her in his iron like arms! Sambhalke miss kaul..he carried her to the parking lot where mm n ruksana
Were waiting for them...raghu may chal sakti hu choro mujhe..antara twisted in his powerful arms. ..
Raghu:chup..bilkul chup...he tightened his grip around her..and she winced in pain...
Antara:raghu pls dard ho raha hai...ouch..she felt her tiny soft frame crushing against his rock hard chest!
Her heart beats were Rising now.she was holding on to his shirt. .his hot breath on her neck n face was intoxicating
Her..antara was stealing glances of him every now n then ...why is he affecting me so much. .his one touch
Sends shivers down her spine! Nahi antara jo kuch bhi ho I have to stay away from him..I will keep my distance

Ruksana came running when she saw them.tum do
no theek to ho na?
Raghu nodded his head n puts antara on the back seat
Raghu:ruksana tum mm ke saath front seat pe baith ja woh kiya hai na miss kaul ko kabhi bhi meri zarorat
Par sakti hai n he looked at antara lovingly. .
Raghu:shift kar miss kaul. .
Antara:kiyu? Tum udhar nahi baith sakte? Raghu wanted to sit with antara on the same seat! Antara ko
Pareshaan jo karna tha!..antara saw him giving her mischievous look while getting up on the jeep..she knew
He can do anything. .so she shifts..he sat down rubbing antara's shoulder with his powerful ones which sent
Down shock waves through her veins! Raghu was enjoying while doing all this..he looked at her face while antara was
Looking away from him. .he saw her cheeks. .still red from his rough stubble. .her lips swollen from his kisses
Her neck was covered with his love bites. .raghu wanted to apologize for his cruel actions on her last nite..
Raghu:miss kaul mujhe tum se kuch kahena hai. .he took her soft hands into his hard ones...
Antara:raghu mujhe tum se na koi baat karni ya sunni hai..n jerks his hands away!
Raghu slides his arm around her lower back ..his rugged hands touching her bare belly
Antara turned to face him as her body was giving her goosebumps!
He pulled her more into him..her head hit his chest. .he kept her there. .
Raghu choro mujhe. .pls ..log dhekh rahe hai..mm aur ruksana kiya sochege..
Raghu:jo sochna hai soche..mujhe tum se baat karni hai bas..abhi..
Antara was wriggling in his arms. .raghu baad me abhi choro...he kissed her
Forehead. .kitne besharam ho tum...and she went all red...
Raghu:baat aaj hi hogee warna tujhe pata hai na may kiya kiya kar sakta hu..
Antara gave him an angry look and he winked! He released her as they finally
Reached the basti..
Ruksana bid good bye to everyone n headed towards her house. .
MM:bhai may bhi chala baad me milte hai..he smiled at antara n went on his way

Raghu was still sitting ..he never wanted antara to go..he glanced at her..may milne
Aonga tum se samjhi..antara didn't say anything. .he helped her down..
Raghu stood there watching her delicate figure moving towards her house. .
Raghu smiled as he ran his fingers through his hair. ..and headed towards naik
Sadan...
Mami:antara tu aagayee..kaha thi tu raat bhar...pata hai kitne pareshaan the
Hum log...ek phn to kar sakti thi na?
Antara:may baad me sab kuch batati hu..I'm very tired right now..saying this
She went upstairs to her room..mami stood there with an o face!
Kiya huwa iss larki ko..saying this she went in the kitchen. .
Antara had her shower..was feeling much better now. .she was wrapped
Around in a white towel. .and with another towel she was drying her wet hai..
She looked in the mirror. .his nishaans on her body ...she remembered last night
She felt her heart beats racing! I have to get u out of my mind! Lost in the thought
She went in the balcony not realizing she was only wrapped in a towel! She was
Busy drying her hair. .didn't notice raghu was standing in his balcony opposite
Side..stunned by her mesmerizing beauty he was frozen!
How he wanted her at this moment!.to hold her..to kiss ..to make love to her. .
Raghu:oye miss kaul! Mai aao kiya? Antara saw him..sharm se lal lal..she hugged
Herself n ran inside! Omg!.what did I just do? I was outside like this! And he saw
Me...oh gosh ab kiya hoga! She was hell embarrassed! I will avoid him..I will ignore
Him from now..I will make sure I will never cross his path again!
She changed n went down for supper...she told everything to mami except
Their intimate part..are antara. .raghu ne to teri jaan bachaai tum ne thanks kiya
Uneh? Nahi mami woh may baad me bol doongi..abhi I want to sleep..
Antara ..teri gale pe nishaan kaha se aya? Antara knew this would come..woh mami
Allergic reactions. .jungle me thi na iss liye..saying this she moved towards her room..
Pheew! That was close!..before closing her door she said good nite mami food
Was nice! She got ready for bed..she glanced at the balcony door..thank God it was
Closed..she lay down on her bed. .sleep seemed far away..scenes of last night
Were flashing in front of her eyes. .pls go away I dnt want to think about u..I dnt
Wanna think about anyone. .samjhe tum!..nafrat hai mujhe tum mardo se!..
Tum sab mard ek jayse ho! Tears started to well up in her eyes...
I hate man samjhe tum mr raghunath naik!! Nafrat hai mujhe tum ladko se...she
Broke down and cried...tears streaming down her cheeks..didu..I miss u..

Antara's flashback from Kashmir
Guyz..why does antara hates man? Kuch huwa hai unke saath?
Jaanne ki liye stay tuned! More romance n suspense on the way!!
Love ya..chal comment maro ab


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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pampz

OMG i am loving this story too much ...kya speed hai yaar ...sabkuch so fast n so passionate Embarrassedn i want to know what is Antara's feeling for Raghu????


Thnks pampz..more suspense on the way and of course more romance! By the way I'm sanjini mala
From niyaz fan club...you write so well too..I read your stories too! See u around!

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
raghu has became really naughty with her...lol
lovely update...he saw her in towel OMG..
antara hate boys... hmmm
btw all in all another gr8 chapter

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
hayeee m addicted to this story
loved the whole update
anara went out in a towel omg
last part antara crying aww what happened to her? pls cont asap eagerly waiting for the next one

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