Dekha Ek Khwaab

ll The Revenge Of Love ll Chapter 14 Updated at pg 93 on 31st May... - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: jagz11

Please continue with this. I can see it being very intense.


awww so many thnx for reading my stry...it will be a cute love stry i tell u
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW! So finally Karan, UV ko leke village aa hi gaya. Now the real story starts ( I Am so excited.)

Waiting eagerly for Manveer's meeting. Update soon..its so exiciting.

PS: Hayee, I loved that scene too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
    alt text                         sameensaeed88SunsnowAna..sweet.tashimimi.maiksanah12Nash..sweet_gargiprincessSoniafor liking my dislikeable stry
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U
V AND KARAN WAS CHATTING WID EACH OTHER IN THEIR ROOM... MEANWHILE KARAN CELL STARTEDTO BUZZING..
KARAN:HELLO...WHAT??OK OK AM COMING...YA AM COMING RIGHT NOW
KARAN LOOKS AT UDAY
KARAN:UDAY MERA KUCH ZAROORI KAAM HAI MUJHE ABHI JANA HOGA ...(UDAY,I GOT SOME IMPORTANT WORK SO I HAVE TO LEAVE NOW...)
UDAY:WHAT! THAN WHT WILL I DO IN THIS HOUSE ALONE??
KARAN:PLEASE UDAY ,GET A MAID FRM THIS VILLAGE..SHE WILL DO THE WORKS OF HOUSE
UDAY:BUT...
KARAN:(CUTS HIM BETWEEN)PLZZZ YAAR I HAVE TO GO

KARAN PACKED HIS STUFF AND LEFT THE VILLAGE..NOW UV IS ALONE IN THE HOUSE..A LOT OF WORK WAS LEFT TO DO ...SO HE WENT OUT OF THE HOUSE AND STRTED TO WATCH FOR MAID
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MANYATA WAS SOO SAD..AS TAMANNA'S MOM DOESNT WANT HER TO STAY THT HOUSE..SO SHE LEFT
THT HOUSE..AND SOMEHOW REACHED AT RIVERSIDE AND WAS SITTING THERESHE DIDNT KNEW WHERE
TO GO OR WHT TO DO...TEAR WAS FORMING IN HER EYES..
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UDAYS MISSION TO FIND A MAID WENT INTO VAIN..AFTER SEARCHING FOR 2 HOURS HE COULDNT
FIND ANY MAID TO DO WORK..HE WAS SO DEPRESSED AND WAS THINKING TO GO A PEACEFUL
PLACE..HE REACHED TO THE RIVERSIDE WHERE MANYATA WAS SITTING...SO REACHING THE
RIVERSIDE HE LOOKED HER AND THERE AND HIS EYES FELL ON MANYATA BACK AS HER BACK WAS FACING HIM...HE WAS INTENSELY GAZING HER BACK...MANYATA COULD FEEL HIS GAZE ON HER..SUDDENTLY A BOY CAME RUNNING TOWARDS UV
BOY:SAABJI SARRA GAON CHAAN MARA LEKIN KOI BHI KAAM NHI KARNA CHATI..(SIR,I HAVE
SEARCHED FOR MAID WHOLE VILLAGE BUT NO ONE WANTS TO DO WORK) {UV HIRED A BOY TO
SEARCH A MAID FOR HIM}
UDAY:OK,HERES UR PAYMENT ..NOW LEAVE THE PLACE..

MANYATA FORTUNATELY OR UNFORTUNATELY/INTENTIONALLY OR UNINTENTIONALLY HEARD THEIR
CONVERSATION...MANYATA TURNED BACK AND WAS MANAGING TO COME TOWARDS UDAY...
MANYATA:IF U DONT MIND THN CAN I DO WORK IN UR HOUSE????
PRECAP:MANVEER IN ONE HOUSE

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LESS RESPONSES...I DONT LIKE THIS...PLZZ SILENT READERS IF U HAVE A ACC ON IF PLZZ FOR APPRECIATING MY WORK LIKE THE POST PLZZZ BEG TO U GUYZZZ
FOR MANVEER FANS

                                
gr8 scene which made our heart to love the shw..after which we was interested to watch the tale further...

Edited by perfection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey the update was nice
finlly manveer meet]but y manyata is working as maid
i mean u told she is educated and lives in city
so y she came to village
plsss update sonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: angleroops

hey the update was nice thnx

finlly manveer meet]but y manyata is working as maid ..she has no other way /option
i mean u told she is educated and lives in city ..she used to live in city..
so y she came to village..thts the main stry
plsss update sonnn...will try

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Posted: 10 years ago
looks like u forgot to pm that u have update it 
but its ok becz ur story was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: -calculus-

resπŸ˜†


:P...🀒
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: perfection


:P...🀒

w
what why this sick face πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: -calculus-

w

what why this sick face πŸ˜›


wht will u do by reserving???
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read ur story...
It's grt...
Bt having boards till 10th march...
So m inactive till den...
Bt can u plz keep sending PMS...
Once in.a while
It's Nt a prblm if u dnt pm me regularly
Bt once in a while plz do it...
Will get back to u soon...

N Bdw I hve a doubt...
Manyata is half blind ya full blind????πŸ˜•