Phir Subah Hogi


Phir Subah Hogi
Phir Subah Hogi


Vinnie79 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 5:36pm | IP Logged




"$20,000. - Sold! Congratulations Thakur Vijay Singh She is yours!"  Bumsukiya said...lifting Sugni's hand as though she was a prized item instead of the girl she was.

Sugni stared straight ahead stonily as she tried not to think about what just happened.  She was just sold to the  highest  bidder, her body   or she should say  her  virginity  auctioned off to Thakur  Vijay  Singh,  one of the most  heartless Thakurs   who made a  habit of  harassing every  bedni  that comes into his   sight...and the  spoilt  son of one of the riches Thakurs and Vickram's sworn  enemy in the area.

That should have brought her some satisfaction, but oddly, all she felt at the moment was numbness...maybe that was a good thing.

"Come on Sugni...let's get you ready to leave..." Her aunt said cheerfully.  As she lead Sugni inside, they   were escorted into the house by a few of the other bedni women, with a tray of money, ornaments clothes and other goodies.  She herd people behind her celebrating as though her  life  was not just auctioned off but as though it was a wedding...

But  that  is to be  expected as  around here  all these  girls virginity  had a price and they  would most likely  be sold one day.  She was the one who was foolish enough to think she was any different. She was not.

She tried hard to  ignore  him standing there, but her eyes  sort him out as if they had a mind of her own...he stood as though  shell shocked again she was waiting for that  feeling of satisfaction  she thought  she would  find seeing the Mighty  Vickram Singh broken but again all she felt was numbness.

As Sugni entered her room, where she was told to change in to some red lehenga Vijay requested she wore. Mechanically she did as she was told Sugni looked at the girl in the mirror ...trying to recognize the person standing in front of her.

"Thank God got back into your senses...and agreed to do this Sardakhi your MAMA organized. You know I never thought so many Thakurs would show up!"  Naganiya said happily, she still could not believe he paid $ 20,000 for her. 

 For a moment, she was afraid when HE showed up, that it was all lost, that he would convince her to change he mind about the auction...or worse   when he started bidding. She did not bet on Sugni, who saved the day saying she would go to the next Thakur who bid after him even if it was 1 cent more.

Naganiya smiled...when people were hurt in love they would do anything she guessed. Besides it was good  he broke her heart, after all Sugni was a hot commodity, and with Vickram  filling her head with all that marriage nonsense...they  were all worried  she would not follow her calling and  join  the bedni's.

After  Sugni's  mother  died,  she was left in the care of  her  Uncle and Aunt who were waiting for the day  when she  would be of age  and start earning a living like her mother did.  All was going well and she was following in the footsteps they thought, dancing and providing for them, until last year when Vickram Singh moved back into town and for some God-awful reason he became smitten with Sugni and she with him.

At first they  were happy  after all he was one of the most richest of Thakurs  around here and they  were sure  he would pay  top dollar  for the girl.  So after  dangling the carrot  for a while  Hukum  went to Vickram  and  offered  Sugni  to him if he would do her  Sardakhi.

The tradition these bedni   women have of going to the Thakurs.  Instead of accepting the offer, Vickram exploded with claims that he loved her and wanted to marry her. Which was laughable because   love was not a word in the Thakur's dictionary, and marry well that was reserved for women of their kind high class and old money.

The bedni's were just their playthings ...that is how is was and that was how it would be in the future. Everyone was shocked at the relationship these  two  shared...but then  Luck was on their  said as in the midist  of all Sugni's wedding dreams and  preparation...Thakurine Reva  Singh  shows  up, the estranged wife  of Vickram wanting  to  get back with her husband.

The fact that he conveniently failed to mention a wife to any one was the deal breaker and the reason that Sugni finally agreed when her uncle told her he had offers for her and she should accept them.

"Hey you can't  go in there!' Hukum exclaimed...breaking Naganiya out of her thoughts. She and Sugni both turned to see Vickram standing in the small house at the bedroom door.'

"Sugni...Please...don't do this...Sugni...)

"Thakur Saab!"  Naganiya  cut in..."You can't do is already  done...Please...Sugni made up her mind this was her  would you..."

"Maami!"  Sugni said from behind her. "can you give us a few  minutes..."

" ...he..."

"Maami I won't change my  mind...I just want to talk to him please..." she said.

Naganiya looked at Sugni then at Vickram she did not like this one bit. She looked to her Husband who had followed them inside, by the looks of it trying to  keep it quite that Vickram had somehow snuck into the house.  They  both knew if Vijai  found out  he was in here  hell would break loose. There was no love lost between the two.

"Ok five minutes and  I am staying in the Hall...and can't back out now!" She warned , as she  reluctantly  left them alone.


"What do you want Thakur Saab, you lost the auction"  Sugni said  as she looked at him stoneyly.

"Sugni...please...don't do this I am begging you...I are mad at me you have every  right to be...fine  you wanted to  get back at me I understand.  I am sorry  ...don't do this to yourself...your worth more than..."

"Wha..Thakur Vickram Singh wah!...and It's all about you are are begging? Really?...You did not seem sorry  when you...were planning my  ...wait was it our wedding...that  YOUR WIFE  was not invited to ...or were you  just sorry  that you got  caught..." she said she looked at him

Sugni I..."

"Don't... Don't  tell me you were afraid...don't tell me wanted a divorce...or she left you...I don't want to hear any  more of your excuses.  I had enough of them!" She said.  "Thakur Vickram Singh  a man who prides himself  in being honest ,boy you had me fooled . Then why not? I  am nothing but a poor bedni who you  fancied but  coming out  like the other Thakurs and making  your intensions  clear would not suit you. Oh no! you had to take it a step further and make the stupid girl  think you actually cared about her,like she was worth  the  effort.  No. let's just for fun pretend  to get married to her...she would be grateful...why  not  I mean it's not like she would care if she was humiliated  in front of  the entire community when your  wife returned and  she was  seen as nothing more than a FREE bedni  right?

"Sugni no ,it was not like that...I love you ...I was never playing with you. Reva and I were over a long time ago.  She moved out to concentrate on her modeling career...our marriage never worked...I was never expecting her to come back ...I was looking  for her to get her to sign the divorce papers...I  thought she would ..."

"ohh Please save it...I  saw her...crying her eyes  out for you to take her back...that does not look like a woman who does not care about her marriage...stop lying...I  don't want to hear it..."

"Fine ...then don't hear it...But Sugni this is not are not a bedni...You want me to stay  away from you...I  will...but don't do this to yourself please...It's not to late..." He begged looking at her desperately...

Sugni looked at him at his pleading and she could feel something in her stirring. No! She had to be strong...taking a deep breath she said   softly...

"You know something Thakur Saab...when I was fifteen I was sent on my  first Raai dance and every time I went there would be offers and every time  there was always the fare that this time  they  would make me do my  Sardakhi. I always knew that someday they would get an offer to good to hold back on. Then I would have no choice but to do what my mother did no matter how much I hated it. After all it is what we were born for. And it would take nothing short of a miracle for that not to happen. Somehow I foolishly  thought...I found that miracle,  that in this  place of vultures and leeches there was one Human...who saw me for more  than just an object, who cared about my  feelings and my  fears  and me. But that was just a dream for a while a beautiful one...but then it turned into a nightmare. And I had no choice but to wake up. If not him someone else..."she said   in a voice that became devoid of emotion.  "This is  Mawhari , the land  of bedni's, and Thakurs...the land where  we are nothing but objects  I forgot that...we have no business having feelings or being emotional ...thank you for reminding me..."

"'s time!"  Nagaiya said as she walked into the room.

Vickram   watched as she walked out the house, moving like a shell of a person. A far cry from the laughing happy girl he knew her to be.

He knew the only person responsible for this was himself.  He was the one who did this to her. He broke her. The one precious thing in his life and he destroyed it, because of his one omission. He watched helplessly as she sat in the car with that smirking man.

His hand clenched in helpless frustration. Her path of self-destruction was all because of him!

Vickram walked into his house and wondered how things could have gone so wrong. How could he have been so dumb? He sat on his rocking chair in the den, as he closed his eyes, wondering where it went all wrong.

A year after he got married his marriage fell apart at the seams, his wife, Reva, a city bread girl had dreams of becoming an actress, model.  Since he and his family had objections to that career choice, it became a topic of contention.

Then one day Reva got an offer she could not refuse, and she left, in the middle of the night  wit a note saying  she could not pass it up.  Days turned into weeks, weeks into months, months into years but he heard nothing from her.

Then his family moved back to Mawhari to see about the lands. It was here he met  Sugni.  He met her on his first day back when she came to pick him up from the train station. , on a cycle rickshaw as she needed money   for some reason.  She was the time passed in the short ride he couldn't tell.

Since  then they  kept bumping into each other as the village was small , Sugni was always  doing  odd jobs around.

The bedni tradition  was  one well known, so it came as no surprise to him when he saw her at the one of the Thakurs  house dancing with the group of women.  Later that night he saw her being accosted by  two very  drunk Thakurs and got her out of it. She  could not thank him enough,  and ever since  if she saw him at a function she would somehow end up sticking close to him. Until the  group was  ready  to leave. He  did not mind as  he began feeling protective of her.

It was not long  before they  struck a friendship.  She had an innocents about her despite her harsh  reality. She was bubbly   and she made him   laugh a lot.  Soon Vickram   found  that his feelings  were deeper than that.  He fell in love  with her.

And to his amazement  instead of running from him when he told her, she reciprocated.  Vickram  wanted nothing more than to  make her his  bride, and spend his life  with her. She was his world, so much so that he didn't even  think about  the fact that he was already  married to Reva until he declared to his mother he wanted to marry  her.

It was a cold  shock when she reminded him that  although Reva  left him they  were still married in the  eyes of the law. Vickram decided that he was going  to  have to find Reva and get his divorce  finalized , and he  knew he had to tell her, but before he could she came running to him crying  that her uncle wanted to  do her Sardakhi... they  told her to  tell him either make an offer or step out of the way, as people were  beginning to talk about the relationship.

Hukum came  to Vickram's house  with other Thakurs saying Vickram was  trying  to  get the bedni with out paying the price.  Watching Sugni be humiliated by  these  men , and talked about as though she was a piece of furniture  set his blood boiling and he declared in front all of them that he Loved her and  was going to marry  her.

Before  he  knew it  a date was set and  preparations were being made, he tried to tell her after that, but she was so happy and  and relived to be getting out of th e cycle Vickram  did not want to burst her bubble, instead deciding to  find  Reva before the date.

No luck it was as though she fell off the  face of the earth, until she walked into the house one day  shocking every  one.  Reva being the drama queen  she was started crying that she  made a mistake and wanted to give their marriage another go.  She was begging him  not to divorce her, which  Sugni   became witness too.

Sugni felt  that he was just like the others, that he was just playing with her. she closed her self off  from everyone and everything from that day. Going so far as to agree to this Sardakhi.

"OH God  ! Why did you do this Sugni...why" He  cried.  Vickram never felt this helpless and heart broken in  his life. The worst part was looking at her, it was like watching a lifeless body just moving around. He broke her heart he knew  but in the process his own  got  smashed to pieces as well.

"'re back.!!  You  rushed out of here so everything alright?" Reva asked.

Vickram looked at her. as he sighed  tiredly.

"No is not alright...It's all over"

"What is?'  She asked

"'s reason for living is gone...pack your bags we are done!"  He said softly as he closed his eyes...effectively shutting her out.

Edited by Vinnie79 - 08 July 2014 at 8:51pm

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ronshaan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Hi vinnie
I guess em the 1st to read the new FF.. the beginning of it was awesome.. really u amended all the mistakes PSH cv did and wrote it in such a way that u will feel sorry for vikram and feel sorry for sugni as well. !! so hats off for that Clap 
sadly sugni left with the other thakur .. let's see I hope she finds a way out of it or he wont be able to come closer to her !!

Let's see waiting for chapter 2 !!
keep it up nice story i liked Clap

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payal7 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
OMG Vinnie
I have often wondered how the story could have gone from when Reva came back. You have picked it up from Sardhakai but thats great.
I am looking forward to this tory.
I promise to read it if you promise to provide a chapter every 2 days please?

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ronshaan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
@payal - what about reading our drama tvs vs rohit and dev
and dropping your comments about that topic too at least tell us how u feel as a reader :) Wink

Edited by ronshaan - 28 January 2014 at 3:32pm

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Vinnie79 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
hehehe  Yes Ron you are  the 1st ...thank you  ... I  hope you  enjoy  the  rest... I  am  trying to  look at  the story   a bit from  Sugni's point of View of being hurt by  the man she  loved and trusted.
  Yes  she left  with the other  thakur...
 the  two things   that I can  never see  eye to eye with or find any  justification for  1.  Adi coming here and  sticking his nose in his  uncle's busniess and  betraying him.
 2. Sugni   running from breaking a marriage  but willing to  break her friends engagement...
  But  if Adi  did not win she would have gone with some one else   I think!!!

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Vinnie79 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by payal7

OMG Vinnie
I have often wondered how the story could have gone from when Reva came back. You have picked it up from Sardhakai but thats great.
I am looking forward to this tory.
I promise to read it if you promise to provide a chapter every 2 days please?

Hello about 2  chapters  a week. ... Monday  and   Thursday  you will get  new chapters. As I will give the people  time to read it... We only  have  5-6 of your comments  are really  my 
 I hope you   enjoy  this  journey !!!

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JulieD IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Great start Vinnie. I love it and I am looking forward to seeing how the story should have gone.
Great job.

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Sandy66 Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
SmileVinnie, you certainly have a knock for writing FAN FICTION. The Title 'UNBREAKABLE BONDS' seems very appropriate for Sugni and Vickram relationship. Their connection is unwavering and indestructible.
Beautiful beginning. Brings back a lot of memory when Aditiya did Sugni's Sardhakai, and Vickram had to remain a mute spectator. 
Vickram's remorse is evident, and he ruefully regrets about not notify Sugni's about his marriage to Reva. 
Reva was always a selfish and self centered person, so ruining Vickram's happiness is no big deal to her.
Thank you for keeping PSH FORUM active and entertaining.Thumbs Up Looking forward to reading the next chapter. 
These gorgeous flowers are my gift to you, for keeping all of us entertained.Hug

Edited by Sandy66 - 28 January 2014 at 7:06pm

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