Posted: 26 January 2014 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asyaforlife
When I started reading, I thought there's something off. Why would Sanyu go to a cliff to confess something? Why would Randhir call her there?
But as the story progressed, I believed he actually was there, that she was confessing everything before him.
That passion, the hurt, that anxiety to confess her love, the pain. I could feel it all.
And THEN came the heartbreaking reality crashing down the lane.
That feeling was so strong that it ached my heart. I, at that very instant, wanted to stop reading. I, somehow, could not see Sanyu in so much pain. Feeling helpless in front of her fate. For her love.
But how could I?!
When the writer had so flawlessly penned something so beautiful for her readers. When I could not imagine anything happening to Sanyu.
I resumed reading it further. And truly speaking, this OS had such strong emotions, I could connect myself to it.
I could feel the pain of losing someone so dear.
You managed to win my heart with your writing. The words you used, the way the story progress is beyond describable.
Thanks for writing this.
All the best for your future works.
Diyyaaa... pehle yeh lo
u know i loooveee people who leave long comments...mwahhh
Aww...thank you so much sweetheart for continuing reading... means alot
especially that you liked it so much and connect it to sandhir...i myself didnt feel i had done their relation any justice...it was missing that spark...
srsly...you made me very very happy with your comment and all your sweet words...thank you very much...m very happy that my writing touched you so much