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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ari--

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

ari i m going to kill you 
u really make me emotional after reading this 

first i thought its reall sanyu talking to randhir and poor randhir is like a small kid whose teacher is scolding him and he is listing and standing 

and when vardhan is come i though he is real witness of pure love of his fav. student ,...but the reality hit me like hell...


WTH randhir is no more and sanyu is talking in her half conscious stage with randhir...ome this so heart touchy...

poor sanyu...and randhir why u go like this ...

i m happy that vardhan made sanyu to live life for randhir's dream...


love this os ...tu bach gayi ...kun ki abhi mein rone mein busy hoon
i think i need to open a tissue factory...bohot profit hoga after this os hehe LOL
here u too take a tissue *hands tissue*
lol...sadist club zindabad...one more down ROFLROFL
plz dont kill me for killing randhir...pretty please...mujhe abhi aur jeena hai...aur sad stories likhna hai LOL
haha thank god...ari bach gayi to write another one Cool
p.s thank you for liking it even though its so sad Big smile this is for loving the os Hug

who the hell told you ki tu bach gayi

ab to tu hamari nazar mein aa gayi...Cool

bach ke rehna ...aur thode jyada os likhana...


lekin tissue box story se pehele dena...lekin next time khushi ke aasu chahiye mujhe...samjhi ya samjhaun...


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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008


who the hell told you ki tu bach gayi

ab to tu hamari nazar mein aa gayi...Cool

bach ke rehna ...aur thode jyada os likhana...


lekin tissue box story se pehele dena...lekin next time khushi ke aasu chahiye mujhe...samjhi ya samjhaun...



hawww... Shocked *ari dar gayi* LOL
phunk phunk ke likhungi har word abse ROFL
sochlo...u ppl are encouraging a sadist LOL
lol...story se pehle dene ka idea very good che next time yaad rakhungi pakka Big smile

Tulip.

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
It's lovely. Heart-touching and amazingly portrayed emotions. Thanks. Do write more. Will love to read more from u.

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tulip.

It's lovely. Heart-touching and amazingly portrayed emotions. Thanks. Do write more. Will love to read more from u.
Wow...first one who didnt threaten me or cry ...LOL thank you so much Big smile claps for you Clapand yeh bhiHug

federized2210

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
I love angst and this made my eyes water! Loved it to the core:)
Great job!

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by federized2210

I love angst and this made my eyes water! Loved it to the core:)
Great job!
First one to say they love angst LOL one more member to the sadist club Big smile and thank you for liking it TongueHug

--ScarletRed--

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Amazing OS! I wuld say dat it ws par excellence.

The story strted wid a vry confusing note. Though I predicted dat it wuld be a sad one bt as d stry proceeded further, I felt dat it wuld be a happy one.
Bt who knew dat at d end of d story I wuld be left wiping my tears!! Its so nt done... I really loath dat Vidushi!!!!

U hv beautifully penned down every viceral feeling, every lingering emotion of Sanyukta. It ws jst amazing.
Every dialogue portrayed a different sentiment of dat passionate luv dat Sanyukta had in store fr Randhir.
The whole writeup of dis story ws flawless.
U r such a gr8 writer. Hats off!!!
I dn't hv words to describe hw brilliantly u hv redefined a different phase of luv.
I'm speechless nd spell bound as well.

Nw since u hv made us cry its ur responsibility to make us smile.
Ab jaldi se ek romantic OS bhi likh dalo.
I'm eageely waiting fr ur nxt story.

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iluvrainaarti

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
That was sooo sad...u had me crying throughout the osCry...but ur an amazing writer...do write more.

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