Os:Kahi-Ankahi-Batein - Page 3

I love angst and this made my eyes water! Loved it to the core:)
Great job!

Originally posted by: federized2210

I love angst and this made my eyes water! Loved it to the core:)
Great job!

Amazing OS! I wuld say dat it ws par excellence.

The story strted wid a vry confusing note. Though I predicted dat it wuld be a sad one bt as d stry proceeded further, I felt dat it wuld be a happy one.
Bt who knew dat at d end of d story I wuld be left wiping my tears!! Its so nt done... I really loath dat Vidushi!!!!

U hv beautifully penned down every viceral feeling, every lingering emotion of Sanyukta. It ws jst amazing.
Every dialogue portrayed a different sentiment of dat passionate luv dat Sanyukta had in store fr Randhir.
The whole writeup of dis story ws flawless.
U r such a gr8 writer. Hats off!!!
I dn't hv words to describe hw brilliantly u hv redefined a different phase of luv.
I'm speechless nd spell bound as well.

Nw since u hv made us cry its ur responsibility to make us smile.
Ab jaldi se ek romantic OS bhi likh dalo.
I'm eageely waiting fr ur nxt story.

That was sooo sad...u had me crying throughout the os😭...but ur an amazing writer...do write more.

Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

That was sooo sad...u had me crying throughout the os😭...but ur an amazing writer...do write more.

ye lo tissue for u as well *hands tissue* 🤣 weee m goanna be rich with my tissue business 😆 p.s thank you for the compliment :) and liking my writing 😃

Originally posted by: KAJU10

Amazing OS! I wuld say dat it ws par excellence.

The story strted wid a vry confusing note. Though I predicted dat it wuld be a sad one bt as d stry proceeded further, I felt dat it wuld be a happy one.
Bt who knew dat at d end of d story I wuld be left wiping my tears!! Its so nt done... I really loath dat Vidushi!!!!

U hv beautifully penned down every viceral feeling, every lingering emotion of Sanyukta. It ws jst amazing.
Every dialogue portrayed a different sentiment of dat passionate luv dat Sanyukta had in store fr Randhir.
The whole writeup of dis story ws flawless.
U r such a gr8 writer. Hats off!!!
I dn't hv words to describe hw brilliantly u hv redefined a different phase of luv.
I'm speechless nd spell bound as well.

Nw since u hv made us cry its ur responsibility to make us smile.
Ab jaldi se ek romantic OS bhi likh dalo.
I'm eageely waiting fr ur nxt story.

i had tears reading it ari...

Originally posted by: --Ari--

Wow such long feed back n so much love with no galis... * ari khush hui* 😆😆

Thank you so much for such sweet and encouraging words dear 🤗 m truely humbled 😳

M glad you found my writing to be good and liked it 😃 I myself thought i hadnt done any justice to sandhir with this one 🤢
Mwahhh for all the compliments :-* 😆 you got me all blushing 😆 will try to write another less sadistic one soon 😃

Frstly, u deserv all d compliments, its truely an awesome wrk nd u hv done a gr8 justice to it.

Secondly, r u a sadist???
Itna rulane(cry) k baad bhi dil nhi bhara kya??
Nxt tym plzzz write a romantic SanDhir story.
Nd if u write a sad one again them plz do send us a tissue box...

ari, it's really amazing story dr
i had tears, reading it