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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 3:57am | IP Logged
beautiful, sweet and lovely

loved Arnav and his this another side. also him being so caring towards Khushi from the very first was another story. then Vandana and Arnav gelling up to each other so easily was beautiful one. i liked the care that Arnav took of both the ladies from the beginning and in between the separation period as well.

loved it. it was all about second chances and not wishing to let go of that chance...!!!

plz write more.
will be waiting.

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Ha ha ha!!! V, the world is hell bent to you know what !!!



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This was a beautiful OS! And the occasion makes it more beautiful. A daughter is always close to her mother, but I have the experience of sharing a great relationship with my father. 

Arnav has been attracted to khushi ever since their first meeting, but the fact that his admiration for the little girl strengthened his will to have both of them in his life, is undeniable. 

As much as khushi needed a life partner, as much as arnav needed a companion, what I liked the most about this story is how it focused on how much vandy needed a father in her life. 

It was an emotional ride, very well explored and neatly presented. It didn't feel like an OS. I felt as if it was a complete Ff with a prologue, chapters and an epilogue, only in small appropriate doses.

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You made V smile today and what more can I ask for !!



Edited by Viji79 - 24 January 2014 at 4:47am

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:05am | IP Logged
What a birthday gift
Though bit late
Awww he fell in love with her and her daughter
And thankfully she gave in to that love too
Well more than to vandy right
Think it sure is aptly named
Bless loved that
So cute they all were
Cheers for pm

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:06am | IP Logged
beautiful os...loved it...

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vandana.sagar

I am so touched and humbled by this dedication and the gesture, one that has surprised me completely and come timely ...yes the celebrations continue...even though the birthday is king over...so thank you for that too...a small poem in the form of my comment ...hope it justifies your story and the gesture...thank you...
 


Driving around relaxed him completely 
On weekends of his favourite hobbies
Another one was firing his employees
Fear in their eyes he relished devilishly 
More so than the deals he cracked daily 
But his attitude everyone deceived easily 
Cause from inside he was really a softy

Looking for the perfect partner was he 
Someone he could himself continue to be 
And then one night he met his Khushi
By her he was mesmerised instantly 
And hopelessly in love he fell with Vandy 
Who wanted him to be her daddy 

In time he helped them thankfully 
To the hospital he took them carefully 
He appeared like an angle magically 
Mingling were both so happy like family 
When a bombshell he dropped suddenly
He admitted he loved her immensely 

Her past was revealed to us shortly 
Misfortunes she had dealt with bravely 
Mother daughter on the road to recovery 
Dealing with circumstances positively 
But Vandy he continued to see secretly 
Till his love for Khushi she felt him worthy 

The rest as they say is now history 
Completing their perfect family was Vidhi 
A daughter to them & sister to Vandy 
Content & happy were Aranv & Khushi 
Celebrating now their wedding anniversary 
With a love so strong to bind them till eternity ...


Awww Vandy... its so beautiful and perfect for the story;;;


You proved once again... My poetress Hug

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:09am | IP Logged
That was such an adorable OS!
Loved it!

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divyahet

JfCji,
pehchan kaun ?
me crazy ab pehchana ?LOL
me here for second time..
ab jab aapne IF ki ek behtarin kaviyatri ke naam yeh OS kiya hai toh chhotu si kavita on Arnav.(iss OS mai jo uska nature hai uspe.)
hamari English hello hi bye bye type hai so hindi mai chalai lo NK.LOL

Log yoohi mujse darr te hai..
maine toh keval nakaab pehna hai..
mai uss insaan ki raah mai hoon jo..
mere iss nakab ke andar chhupe hue Mujko pehchaane..
mai dikhata sakhta hoon, par hoon naram dil insaan..
bus zarurat hai muje padhane ki,
aapne dil ki nazaron se mujko pehchaan ne ki koshish karoge toh..
mere naam ki tarah Prem ka athaag samamdar paaoge.

thanks once again dear,
take care.


Hum aapko bhool jaaye? Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai Hetal ji?

Love your Poem and woman your hindi is so good... 

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:11am | IP Logged
nice:)

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