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UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 46

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome update loved family moments sply Maaneet hot and passionate romance. You know na how much i loved that... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ amazing combo of past and present. Or ab raha swaal english ka To TU NA AB PITEGI MUJHSE AGAR TUNE YE TOPIC YAHI BAND NAHI KIYA TO . PATA HAI AISE KAR K TU YE SHOW KAR RAHI KI WO MORON KI BAATE TUJHE EFFECT KAR RAHI HAI. MAAR GOLI USE KOI NAHI HOTI WO TUJHE JUDGE KARNE WALI. BAS AB BAHUT HO GAYA AB MUJHE TERE MUH SE BAAT DOBARA NAHI SUNNI HAI SAMJHI TU...




arrey shona usne kaha hai toh woh soch samajh kar kaha haina?πŸ˜‰ chal mein khatam kar rahi hoon theek hai😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. 
Hey, don't worry about any negative comments. You have the guts to write and post a FF which is much more than people like myself do. I can just imagine but not able to put into words and you are doing it. Take care and keep writing. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
i'm warning u siri agar dubara aisa faltu note diya na tho mai cmmnt nai krungi update me😑
anyway suprb update... haayee maaneet ka hot hot romance...
past me maan ko yaad hi nai h k almondy kaun h...maan geet se dur rhne ki kosish kring...but Annie ne maan se demand ki wo geet ko apne saath le k aaye...chalo dekhte h aage kya hota h
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my..dat was hotty hotty ...passionfilled update...me blushing...
maan ka bas chale toh he wont leave ...her any time ...not even at office...
tree house is so dreamy...yaar...i feel lk goin der now itself...

loved d cutiepies...very much...
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Dear der will be bashers every wheere ignore dem...nd write for one who loves ur writings...

waitin for nxt part...
rt now reading jeevan sanghini...ll comment once i have finshed reading dem


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Posted: 9 years ago
hot update dear
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb n romantic n hot update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Gonna start reading it di n then reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohh ohh maan having night mares is it??
and present is fully seasual me chup bachi hu na πŸ˜†

i love bhoomi pie so much give more moments of her ye dil mange more yaar 

my mind asking for past more than present 

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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nikkirocksss

i'm warning u siri agar dubara aisa faltu note diya na tho mai cmmnt nai krungi update me😑

anyway suprb update... haayee maaneet ka hot hot romance...
past me maan ko yaad hi nai h k almondy kaun h...maan geet se dur rhne ki kosish kring...but Annie ne maan se demand ki wo geet ko apne saath le k aaye...chalo dekhte h aage kya hota h




aah sorry sorry nikki ab aap bhi moo mat fulaavo richa ki tarahπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Present - Maan and Geets marriage is truely colorful
they always passionate about each other whether in dress or in love
making , their passionate with they kids
 
Past - Maan apologizes to Geet but she really did'nt need that as now he said he will not trouble her and she must stay away from him
hmm ... they all going to club
sizzling update