KriYaansh Drabble Series : Entangled (Chap 2 - Pg 6) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
awww that was totally adorable...

I had this cute smile...

I mean I don't have words to explain...

I just loved hwow u described small gestures... so cuuuttee.. wish I cud do that...

awesone..

btw I voted... :-D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

awww that was totally adorable...

I had this cute smile...

I mean I don't have words to explain...

I just loved hwow u described small gestures... so cuuuttee.. wish I cud do that...

awesone..

btw I voted... :-D

Thankuuu ^_^ :*
Glad it was readable atleast ..i suck at writing mushy stuff πŸ˜†
even I am going to vote at 4 :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
next chap πŸ˜†
lol kyunn ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is officially the worst response I have ever got on any write up :p
I wonder why I am not surprised πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
She was his peace,his semblance,his happiness and will always be.

I simply loved this line!

Beautifully summed up the entire drabble!

It was extremely cute!
The way he admired her,the love he has for her!

Truly mushy and that is why I liked it so much!😳 Edited by So_Naley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was an amazing part..
I Just loved the way u showed rey's irritation..at office..
The words u used to describe his hatred towards the boss n dat beautiful KR moments
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy Birthday to meπŸ₯³
Is it 22nd January again??πŸ€” I thought you are gonna update it on my next birthday!😑
Finally you got remembered of this avoided beautiful piece of work. Thanks for updating Jerry! huh!πŸ€“

You are an expert of details. You write such small details which are so near to realism. One can't stop adoring and smiling while reading it. This series is so close to my heart for obvious reasons. And This series is so on my watch for many reasons. 
I totally loved Rey's condition in office. I can relate.πŸ˜†
Then comes my most favorite part, you love kria! Don't you??πŸ˜† How you managed to write her so well?? She reminded me of my mother who corrects the papers in a similar way. She tells us Kid's super funny answers in between like Kria did. I am in awww! Honestly! it was cutest thing I have ever read!!
But why the hell it was so short??? Let me guess! You are friend of Tommy! Laziness personified!😳

Jerry! This was amazing excerpt. I loved every word of it. Update soon!!!
Love you!πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
this chapter was fabulous and great... rey find her at one place and the way she do her
and make him go crazy... bu her ways to laugh and express he falls for it more loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: So_Naley

She was his peace,his semblance,his happiness and will always be.

I simply loved this line!

Beautifully summed up the entire drabble!

It was extremely cute!
The way he admired her,the love he has for her!

Truly mushy and that is why I liked it so much!😳

Thanku dear ^_^
Glad u liked the mush ...I am not that smooth with it but glad u found it nice :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

This was an amazing part..
I Just loved the way u showed rey's irritation..at office..
The words u used to describe his hatred towards the boss n dat beautiful KR moments

Thanks alot dear ^_^
Glad u liked the portrayal of scenes ^_^