MG SS: MENTAL LOVE updated part 16 on page 87 on 22.09.15 - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago



Part 1

Geet and rahul leaves in delhi for their studies . their parents live in hoshiarpur.. they have haveli and farms to look after...

Geet and Rahul leaves here in Delhi in their own flat.. they need not live in rented apartment as they are well by money..

Maan visits discs occasionally but pari and yash likes discs a lot.. so we can say they both live in disco and occasionally come home.. just kidding.. but yes some what its true..

Maan was getting ready for his office, the time savitri called him..

Savitri devi : beta, have ur breakfast and then rush to ur office...

Pari : maan bhai drop me college plzzz...

Maan : pari... y u always demand only me to drop ur college.. uss yash ko bolo...

Maan bhai, I kn yash bhai will never drop me.. and even if he comes to college then he ll start flirting with my frnds which I dnt want it to happen..

Savitri laughs loud...

Ok Pari, get ready.. u have only 15 mins ...if I dnt see u besides me in next 15 mns then ur gone darling..

Pari: bhai aap na.. bade dhamkate ho.. kabhi mere sath raat me parties attend karo fir aap samajh paoge ki subah ki neend kitni pyari hoti hai...

Ruko aap.. aati hu mai...

Well now its time for our princess to get up...

"With the early morning ,

  the green leaves brushes each other,

  the flowers reach out to kiss each other

  and sun rays tends to fall on them to make them realize its beauty in nature..

   the tinkling sound of bells..

  The oozing sound of wind..

  The glittering drops of dew

  Are loved by few..

  But I m fallen for you..

  My nature, I Love You..."

Geet : Wow yaar wat lines.. I m proud of myself.. Geet handa no one can jus think to write like you.. I m to genious.. A real Gem..

Rahul : madam jee apki sher-o-shayari ho gai ho to andar chale, college jaana hai, apko bhi aur hume bhi..

Geet : OOoppsss jee bhaiyya.. chaliye, mai fatafat nashta ready kar deti hu...

 Rahul: jee madam, mai apka wait karra hu.. vaise papa je ka ph aya tha tumhare liye.. twice.. din me jab time milega tab baat kar lena..

Geet : jee bhaiyya.. nashta table pe rakha hai.. aap le lo plz.. mai college bhagti hu..

Bye...

College...

Pinky : hey Geet, chale andar. Tere liye hi wait karri thi mai..

Geet : haan chal.. are vo nashta ready karne me time lag gaya..

Are vo aaj miss Nuts nahi dikhi abhi tak...

Pinky : aari hogi.. vaise unki koi bhi gang nahi dikhi.. aanie ya ankit bhi nahi dikhe aur nahi koi aur...

 

[ Nuts: Natasha , she is frnd of Pari.. but rival of Geet.. ankit : frnd of pari and he is frndly with Geet gang ]

Maan : pari jao college aa gya..

pari: thanks bhai..

Bye..

She gets off the car and meets her gang..

Nuts , aanie , ankit and others.. went to canteen..

Maan : are pari apna cell yahi car me bhul gayi.. I should go and give her..

Maan was on his way to canteen..

He was typing some msg into his cell and walking towards canteen..

All the girls were jus turning and staring at him..

Maan knew this but avoiding it as he was not at all interested.. from the other side of the corridor Geet and Pinky were walking towards their class..

Geet ulti chalri thi and pinki sidhe.. Geet use Baat karri thi continuous..

Geet : aur tujhe batati hu pinky... sun to..

" unn sharabi ankho pe, dil the ghayal..

Par unki chamak..."

With these lines.. BOOOmm...

Geet dashed upon Maan...

Maan hold her by her waist an saved her from falling...

Geet : sharabi aankhen...

Maan : aaa... excuse me Miss..

Geet : jo teri dekhi...

Maan left her and let her fall down...

He went away...

Pinky : y tujhe kya hua Geet ? aise kyu gaane gaa rahi thi tu ?

Geet : hatt pagli maine gaana nahi gaya..

Pinky : haan gaaya Geet.. tu use stare karri thi pure time..

Geet : oyyy Geet handa kisi ko stare nahi karti.. vo to ladko ko apne piche daudati hai..

Ummm... vaise pinky, ye sadu munda tha kaun ? pehli baar dekha college me.. chal na peecha karte hai...

Pinky : haan chal na, bada changa munda hai... mai mar jawa..

Geet : hmmm buss karr yara..

Maan : pari ur phone..

Pari : ohh thanks bhai.. bhai ye mere frnds hai.. she is nuts, I mean natascha and hes ankit.. etc...

Maan : hi everyone.. chalo pari , m getting late. Bye..

With this geet got to know that he was paris brother..

Nuts : pari tere bhai log to bade smart hai.. yash to hai hi, but this Maan is too eatable...

Pinky : ye nuts pagal hai kya ? eatable kaha.. vo use aalu ya baigan dikha ya pizza, pasta dikha.. bhagwaan hi jaane...

Geet : chod na pinky, hume kya karna hai...

Same day at night...

Maan enterd Geets room and picked her up in his arms...

Geet : aap yaha?

Maan : haan mujhe tumse milna tha.. Geet : par kyu ?

Maan made her stand on terrace and said : Geet you are truly beautyfull like a princess of My heart..

With this once again Rahul sprinkled water on her face...

Geet : ya I m your princess, see its raining...

Its raining...

Rahul : ya baby, its raining,, Princess Geet utho abhi isi wakt varna pura flood aa jayega tumpe..

Geet : hmmm ye rahul bhaiyya kaha se aa gaye ?

She opened her eyes and saw that she was dreaming..

Geet : ohhh it was jus a dream... pccchhh chaddo yaar...

Rahul : nashta ready hai. M going college.. finish it off.. bye tc..

Geet : bye..

Ummm abhi wats the time ? its jus 8... college to aaj 10 baje ka hai.. wat should I do?

Ek idea hai...

Precap: paani paani ree and party all night 

Words: 1022

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Here is the part 1 !!!!

Next Part : 2

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Hope u all will like it!!!!


Edited by angelic_cute - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
https://www.mytinyphone.com/uploads/users/airflinkster/314481.gif
m 1st here too😳😆
awesome start di
nice intro...
lovely bonding between rahul n geet...maan n pari...
maaneet met for the 1st time n bumped with eachother...
geet singing sing😆
one meeting n geet is dreaming abt maan...
looks like she is falling in love with him...
waiting for more di...

Edited by goldenmoon - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Fab intro of all! esp Maaneet! Geet n Rahul share a wonderful bond! Maaneet bump into each other! Geet has fallen 4 him! She dreams abt him! Knws he is Pari;'s bro! Rahul is so sweet! Geet has an idea! update soon! Well written! Btw unable to read updates frm 31 Jan to 22 feb! Will b on holiday! Thanks! bt do pm - will read wen I get back

Posted: 10 years ago
lovelyy start love it...waiting for next part..di thanks for new story & Congress..
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update,cont soon

Waiting 4 nxt part.
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...geet is dreaming about maan...😆
Posted: 10 years ago
interesting part...

in first meet itself geet dreaming about maan...hehehe...


hope this dream comes true soon...


cont soon...

thanks for the pm...
Posted: 10 years ago
awsem update love at first sight

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