T2 Sameer Rathod FF: betrayal of love new thrd pg 152 - Page 4

Originally posted by: skrafty

Congrats for the new thread
Awesome update
loved it
loved Arjun-Sameer convo
I hope Aisha is fine
waiting for the next  part
continue soon

Originally posted by: kunchu

congrats for the new thread
liked the way how Arjun brought back Sam
par Sakshi kaha ja rahi hai?
waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Samara92

Superb updt.
So sameer is not leaving d case.
Luv Samjun convo.
Omg aisha's accident...
Cont soon.

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

thanks gold...kareeb really???😃😃😃

stay tuned

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

first of all the new banner iz awesome ...
update was amazing..
omg ayesha met with an accident i hope its nothing serious
at last sameer undrstood his importance in d case...
arjun smiling would have been wondrfull...
overall loved the update..
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: bgargate

 

The part where Sameer opens up about his past with Aisha was nice 👍🏼... But I believe it had a lot of scope for detailing because Sameer-Sushma's past is the base of this entire story ... it is the foundation on which whole story rests... the case, the clues, the answers of all the questions are hidden in this part 😊 ... I guess at least one more layer could have been opened here, may be something that Aisha catches which could be useful for the case ... 😉 ... but again there is a flip side... u cant reveal too much at this stage ... else the suspense might go off ... so its up to you how you want to reveal it ... layer by layer slowly ... or with a bang giving a single zor ka jhatka 😉

yeah may be u r write..but while writing i found it better to unearth the clues later...fingers keep on complaining..😉😉😉

 

 Now this is interesting ... very interesting 😉 ... Sameer trying hi best to go away but finally Arjun and Aisha convinced him to stay back 😉 ... at once I found it unbelievable to think The ETF Chief Sameer Rathore as a weak person ... but connecting with his past ... it was convincing ... just to add the effect... u could have added some flashback scenes flashing in Sameer's mind 😉

yeah ill add but adding it here would weaken the conversation..this was important...will add in some other update..

 

Overall good going 👏

 

But ye kya... Aisha's accident? 😲  ... was it deliberately done?

 

waiting for next part 😊

Originally posted by: Payal_156

like button not working di..
ty for d pm..
check ur too lolz..
update it..
congo new thread..
Samjun bro rocks..
beautiful frndship..
missing...
ayesha too gud!!
Sushma upto..

Tiger back in action ..

Originally posted by: halima_zaka

awesome update 

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

congrats for new thread
the update was awesome
Arjun n Sameer convo was amazing
n also wonderfully written
glad Arjun made him realize the importance
of his involvement in this case
n also Aisha's encouraging words
were superb as well
so finally the chief is back in action
but last sequence was scary
hope Aisha get wells soon
thanks for pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

I know I'm late...so let me start from the beginning.

Congratulations for the new thread...and the banned is awesome.

and the case is getting interesting...

the emotional side of Rathod is taking a toll on him..but Arjun gave a nice SYS to him..it was well written. he made his friend understand to make his weakness to his strength...and use susma's weapon on her!! Bravo!!

Now let's see what you have in your sleevs..do continue.

Thanks for PM.