Hey guys...I'm back with second crappy update..hope you'll like it.
After getting settled at their respective places,they both start with their usual chit chatting.Soon Rukhsana dozed off to sleep as bus journeys were very tiring for her.Antara who was sitting by the window side smiled at Rukhsana who made an 'O' face while sleeping.Later Antara turned her head to look outside the window & started admiring nature's true beauty.There was no doubt that the wonderful background scenery created a tranquil atmosphere for Romance...for Love.No wonder Antara didn't feel Odd when she noticed that half of the Bus was filled with newly married couples and each of them busy in their respective Lovey -Dovey talks.A smile appeared at the corner of her mouth ,when she looked around the sorroundings.she laid her head back at the headrest of her seat and slipped into her thoughts..It wasn't too long when Antara too dozed off.
While sleeping she looked so mesmerizing,cold air coming from mountains started caressing her cheeks,her half of the lustrous silky hair was flowing outside the window.Her head was tilted revealing her bare neck along with a visible earing which appeared to be kissing one side of her neck.The earing which was silvery round in shape with one emerald hanging at the centre & few hair strands falling on her face made her look more ravishing, more like a divine beauty.One end of her green veil had made its way out of the window.suddenly a gush of wind came as windows from opposite side opened causing Antara's veil to blow away leaving her chest with a covering of pink cardigan.
Antara smiled in her sleep as if her heart knew that something was about to happen.In the meantime her green veil flew in the direction opposite to that of the bus,taking its own free will course...after sometime it got stuck in one the branches of a tree.It looked like her veil was struggling to free itself from the branch,after hanging in there for sometime,harsh winds made it free again and letting it fly in some unknown destination.As the intensity of winds decreased, her veil fell down.It caused blurred vision in front of someones eyes,which made his movement come to halt.As he pulled it down from his face, he got confused at first & later smiled staring at it.
On the other hand Rukku and Antara came out of their sleep by screeching sound of bus tires created by breaks.When they looked around,they saw their bus was standing near a Dhaba and bus conductor informed them about 15 mins break for refreshments.
Both Antara & Rukku wanted to go to Loo,before Antara thought of getting up, Rukku screamed startling her.
Rukhsana-ANTARA...tumhara dupatta kaha hai???..
Antara,after touching her neck..she starts looking out for it..she says...
Antara-Rukku mujhe nahi pata kaha hai...maine toh pehna hua tha..sayad yehi kahi hoga,phir se dhoondti hu...
Rukhsana-ya Allah mein is ladki ka kya karu..kuch hosh mein nahi rehta isse...har bar ki trah is bar bi kahi bhul gayi hai..iss bar kaha chod ke ayi ho?
Antara-starts searching again..
After a lot searching..they don't find it anywhere..Finally rukku speaks..
Rukhsana-Antara sayad bus mein chadte hue ghir gaya hoga..ek kaam kar bag mein se shawl nikal le...
Antara takes out the shawl and they both head out of the bus..After 15 mins of break when they were about to board the bus, Bus driver informed all the passangers that there was some technical fault in the engine due to which they need to stay longer till the engine is fixed for further journey.The news made everybody happy except Antara,it just pissed her off more post losing her veil.
Rukhsana-OMG...Antu stop being grumpy all the times..zara nazre utha ke to dekho,kitni sunder hai yeh jagah..!!!
Antara-pls rukku tang mat kar mujhe, mera mood thek nahi hai.
Rukhsana-oh..ho...toh madam ka mood thek nahi hai...chalo koi baat nahi, tumhara mood abhi thek kar dete hai..
By saying this rukku picks out her phone & hits the speed dial button...someone from the other side picks up the call...she puts the person on hold, places the phone on Antara's hand and asks her to speak.
Antara-At first little confused...says "hello" and suddenly her eyes lit up..'MUMMA' she says loudly...kaise ho aap?...nodding her head...hum dono thek hai...mumma aap apna aur Ishu ka dyan rakhna...after speaking for sometime...ok bye mumma..she hangs up the call.
Antara turns towards Rukku...giving her a beautiful smile...
Antara-Thanx rukku and hugs her...
Rukhsana-a little bemused...Arey..arey..thanx hi bolna chahti ho to mera ek kaam karna hoga.
Rukhsana-while making a puppy face speaks...tumhe mere different-different poses mein photo khinchne hoge...woh kya hai na mein FB par apne friends ko jalana chahati hu apne is trip ke photo upload karke..while saying that Rukku hands her the camera.
Antara-while taking the camera she laughs thinking about Rukku's sillyness..
And rukku's photo session starts in different poses and in different locations near the bus.With one more to go.Rukku finally decides to take her last pic on the road when its empty.
Rukhsana-Antu..pls zoomed view lena.
After saying that She clicked her picture in a zoomed view.Rukku walked away and sat at a bench as she was feeling tired after her photosession.As soon as Antara thinks about turning off the camera, she hears some giggling sounds.When she looked up, she saw some children playing cheerfully near by making her smile again.Just to capture the moment of happiness,She clicked their pictures too.
Soon they heard bus honking again, letting them know that bus engine had been fixed. Rukhsana got up , rushed towards the bus and spoke to Antara ...teasingly from behind.
Rukhsana-Chalo Antara bulava aa gaya hai...giggling...aur ha ...ab pls apne dupatte ki trah iss camera ko bhi kahi chod ke mat aa jana...she starts laughing & runs away..!!!
Antara didn't respond to her as she was in her deep thoughts, watching those children playing happily and remembering her childhood with her dearest father.A deep pain crossed her face and a lone tear escaped from her eye.Soon she came back from her thoughts when she heard Rukku calling her name.She just changed her expressions by pretending to be happy or by putting up her Happy Mask.With a Sigh! , she turned and started moving towards the bus.Suddenly out of no where ,someone held her wrist from behind and She Gasped...!!!!
His Rough looks and ruffled hair created a charm that could allure the absorption of any girl. And it did create a havoc in Antara's heart too.
reviews and criticism most welcomed.
Edited by PurpleSunset - 31 May 2014 at 9:05am