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CID Story: The Slave Trade

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Welcome to a new CID story Shreya ishtyle! πŸ˜† And welcome a new set of CIDians into the story as well! For the first time ever we will be having a CIDian as a criminal. Yes. A criminal. Muah ha ha ha ha. πŸ˜ˆ

The CIDians who will be making an entry this time around:

  1. Ravi - Yes Ravi makes a re-entry. I needed a male in my story and I thought of Ravi first. After all it's a detective role. πŸ˜‰
  2. Debasree - Finally Sree you're playing a nice role in this story. πŸ€—
  3. Misha - As a sweet and caring side with Sree. πŸ˜ƒ
  4. Neha - Yep you're the other lucky one. You get to be part of another story of mine. πŸ˜†
  5. Snehal - Ab bajaongi tumhari band. Muah ha ha ha. πŸ˜ˆ

Anyways welcome to The Slave Trade. And remember:

Sunane walo, suno aisa bhi hota hai

Jo bura karta hai, woh bhi phasta hai

Jo aise kam karta hai, kya bach bhi sakta hai

Aao tum bhi aaj sunlo

Dastaan hai yeh ke

Ek thi dhansu team jo din pe din criminals ki bajata tha

Woh team thi jisse koi takra nahi pata tha

Iss team ki yeh kahani hai jisko sabhi kehte hain C I D

*Borrowed from Dastaan-e-Om Shanti Om for those who didn't guess yet. πŸ˜†*

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The Slave Trade

Disclaimer: This is inspired from a real life case that was shown on Crime Patrol. It made me realize that children are in a pitiful state. This story is written as an inspiration of hope for a better and brighter future. I hope you all take it in the same way and maybe one day everyone will realize the same as well. This is also a tribute story to Rajat...the cop who was sidelined when he could have been a great lead along with the trio. This is also a sort of celebration story for the 16th Anniversary of CID!!!

 

NGO Office, Tuesday, 11:40AM

The 4 were going through the photos that Ravi had taken. Ravi said, "Inhe sab bachon se zabardashti bheec mangwayi jaati hai aur kam karwate hain."

Debasree asked, "Yeh dono kaun hai?"

"Yeh inhe bachon ke saath har baar dikhayi dete hain. Ek baar maine inhe ke saath baat ki toh inhone kaha ke yeh inhe bachon ke maa baap hain. Aur yeh bheec nahi mangange toh aur kya karenge," Ravi replied.

Misha said, "Inhe bachane ka koi tareeka?"

"Raid kar dete hain," Neha said.

"Nahi! Pehle inhe bachon ke saath jo ho raha hai uske saboot chahiye," Ravi said.

"Yeh kafi nahi hain?" Debasree asked.

"Main toh kheti hoon ke inhe ke saath hamare boss ke paas jaate hain. Zaroor raid kar sakhenge," Neha put in.

"Lekin mujhe nahi lagta hai ke hum iss mamle main kuch kar payenge. Ek NGO ke paas itni power toh hoti hai ke woh chote mote raids conduct kar len lekin yeh bahut bara raid hoga," Misha said.

"Toh phir police ke paas jaate hain," Debasree said.

"Lekin agar yeh itne baare scale pe sab kuch kar rahe hain toh police bhi inke saath mili huyi hogi," Ravi said.

"Toh phir CBI yah CID ko involve karte hain," Neha said.

"CID ko involve karna zada asaan hoga. CBI main toh hum ghumte reh jayenge," Misha said.

"Main unka number dhoondta hoon phir unhe hum yeh saari baatein bata denge," Ravi said.

"Main hamare kamre tyar karwati hoon," Debasree said.

Debasree and Neha left to do that, while Ravi searched up the number.

*****

CID bureau, 12PM

Abhijeet walked into the bureau to see an anxious Rajat and Freddy. He asked, "Kya huya? Itne pareshan kyun lag rahe ho?"

"Sir mujhe iss case ne pareshan kar raha hai. Koi aadmi bina vault main tode kuch bhi kaise chura sakta hai?" Freddy asked.

"Yah toh woh pehle se undar tha yah phir woh wahan pe kam karta tha," Abhijeet replied.

"Lekin kisi ne vault ko khola hi nahi tha ek ghante main aur jab vault khula toh chori ke baare main pata chala," Freddy added.

"Yani shayad jisne vault khola woh bhi mila huya hoga," Abhijeet replied. He turned to Rajat, "Aur tum pareshan kyun ho?"

"Sir mujhe yeh letter mila hai. Ek hafte main mujhe duty ke liye report karna hai Delhi ke CID main," Rajat said, giving Abhijeet a paper.

ACP Pradyuman and Daya entered at this moment and heard this as well. Daya asked, "Tumhe aise kaise woh transfer kar sakte hain?"

"Pata nahi sir. Lekin papa ko pehle hi maine wahan ke ek hospital main shift kar dia tha toh shayad isli unhone mujhe wahan shift kar diya hai," Rajat replied.

"Yani ab yeh tumhara aakhri hafta hai hamare saath?" Abhijeet asked.

"Actually aakhri teen din. Mujhe Friday shift karna hai," Rajat replied.

"Sir aap kuch nahi kahenge?" Freddy asked ACP Pradyuman.

"Nahi. Mujhe pata chal gaya tha kal. DCP ne mujhe kal hi bata diya tha lekin maine isli kuch nahi kaha kyun ki main chahta tha ke Rajat khud bataye," ACP Pradyuman said.

Before anyone could say anything else, the phone rang. Freddy picked it up, "Hello, CID bureau."

It was Ravi. He said, "Ji mera naam Ravi hai. Main Save the Children NGO ke saath kam karta hoon. Hume aap se milna tha kuch bachon ko bachne ki baat karne ke liye. Kya hum aapke bureau aa sakte hain?"

"Haan zaroor. Aap ko pata pata hai?" Freddy asked.

"Ji haan. Hum aadhe ghante main paunchte hain. Bye," Ravi said.

Ravi hung up and Freddy turned to the team and repeated what Ravi had said. ACP Pradyuman said, "Dekhte hain ke inhe kya kehna hai."

*****

CID bureau, 1PM

After the preliminaries, the STC group set up their papers and were now going over everything they had found. Neha began, "Yeh sab tab shuru huya jab do mahine pehle yeh, Sandhya, hamare paas bhag kar aayi bheec mangti huyi. Iski umar dekhte huye humne iske maa baap se baat karni chahiye lekin iss pehle ke hum unhe se kuch bhi keh paate woh wahan se bhag gaye."

"Yahan pe main aaya. Main STC main ek private detective ka kam karta hoon. Logon ko peecha karna aur saboot dhoondna mera kam hai. Jab yeh log unhe se baat nahi kar paaye toh main wahan pauncha unhe dhoondne aur samjhne. Pehle kuch din maine sirf tasveerein li. Woh saare isme hain. Kareeb che din baad maine yunhi inhe logon se baat ki aur inhone bataya ke yeh saare bache unke hi hain lekin unke paas koi kam nahi hai isli woh bheec maangte hain," Ravi continued.

"Yeh sab inhe bachon ko bachane se kaise related hai?" Rajat asked.

"Hum usse tak abhi paunchte hain. Humne aise hi bachon ki madat karne ke liye aapna NGO khola huya hai. Hum free ke schools chalate hain. Badi mushkil se inhe dono se baat kar ke humne inke bachon ko do ghanton ke liye aapne school main padhane ka mauka mila hai. Pehle do hafte tak toh yeh log wahani rehte the lekin phir uske baad woh jaane lage aur yehi mauka mila hume inhe bachon se baat karne ka," Debasree replied.

"Yeh bache pehle bahut daare huye the aur kuch nahi kehte the. Lekin do teen din aur yeh bolne lage. Aur aisi aisi cheezein baatayi jinhe sun kar hamare hosh hi udh gaye," Misha said. "Ek ne bataya ke usse do saal pehle agwa karke laaya gaya tha yahan pe aur tab se woh yahani pe hai. Ek saal pehle uske haath ko unhone tod diya tha taki usse bheec aur araam se mile. Tab se uska haath aisa ho gaya hai."

"Lekin zada tar sab ne bataya ke unke parivaar ko yeh kaha gaya ke unhe Mumbai ek achi zindagi banane ke liye bulaya jaa raha hai. Yahan aaye toh unhe subah aur din main bheec mangne main laga diya gaya aur sham ko woh intricate hand-made rugs banate hain," Debasree said.

"Hum waise toh agar do teen bache hote toh police ki madat se ek raid conduct kar ke unhe bacha lete, lekin hum shaq ke isme police mili huyi hai. Hum local police ke paas nahi jana chahte hain kyun ki hum nahi chahte hain ke inhe logon ko pata chal jaaye aur yeh bache gayab ho jaayein yah, worse, unhe maara diya jaaye," Ravi said. "Isli hum aap ke paas aaye hain."

Abhijeet picked up the folder which had the photos that Ravi had taken. He started flipping through them. Daya asked, "Yeh bache kya sab ek hi jagah pe bheec maangte hain?"

"Nahi sir. Hume abhi tak char alag jagahon ka pata chala hai. Lekin sir maine ek baar inka peecha kiya tha aur mujhe inka aada mil gaya tha. Wahan aapko saare bache mil jayenge," Ravi replied.

"Kitne bache hain kuch pata hai?" Abhijeet asked.

"Hamare hisaab se 29 bache hain. Pehle 30 the lekin Sandhya, jiske wajah se yeh sab shuru huya tha, woh pichle mahine maar gayi. Hume bas itna pata hai ke woh kahin se gir gayi thi," Neha replied.

"Thik hai. Tum hamare paas wahan ka pata chor do. Hum unhe bachon ko bachane ki tyari karte hain," Rajat said.

"Nahi sir. Hum bhi aapke saath rahenge. Woh bache hume pehchante hain. Agar aap akele gaye toh kahin woh aap ke saath aane ke bajaye bhag naa jaayen. Nahi hum bhi chalenge. Humne unhe bachon ko aapne paas rakhne ka bandubasht bhi kar liya hai. Unhe bilkul takleef nahi hoyegi," Debasree said.

"Haan sir. Aur hum unke baare main sab kuch jaante hain. Hum aapki madat kar sakte hain," Misha added.

"Thik hai. Tum log bhi hamare saath chaloge. Abhijeet, Daya tyari karo. Aaj hi sham ko hum wahan pe humla bol denge," ACP Pradyuman said.

Abhijeet and Daya nodded.

*****

CID bureau, 4PM

With some help from the STC team, the CID team now was ready to raid the warehouse where the kids were working on the rugs. Abhijeet checked their list once more and then the 5 officers and 4 STC members left in 3 qualises followed by a bus.

*****

Warehouse, 4PM

The lady said sternly, "Yeh kya hai?!! Hain?!! Itna bara ched?!! Phir se kar! Warna aaj raat khana nahi milega!"

She walked around examining the other rugs as the children worked with their heads bent, quietly and scared. Her phone rang. She looked around once more before picking up. "Haan bol...Kya?...Maine bola tha ke inhe bachon pe nazar rakh! Lekin nahi! Ab hogaya naa kam tamam!...Nahi bache jaaye bhad main! Aapni jaan bachao aur bhaago! Bache toh phir se mil jayenge...Haan sab wahani milenge...Haan rakh!"

The lady looked around once more and then to her 4 men, "Chalo yahan se! CID ke kutte aane wale hain yahan pe. Jaldi chalo!"

The 4 men who had been sitting in various positions holding guns quickly got up and followed the lady out. The children, however, were so scared that they continued working. They probably thought that the lady and the men would be back and would beat them if they didn't work.

*****

Warehouse, 4:30PM

Abhijeet and Daya entered first, with their guns drawn. They checked the two doors on either side and then moved forward. ACP Pradyuman and Freddy followed. Rajat was covering the exit door in case anyone tried to run from there. A little farther behind ACP Pradyuman and Freddy were the 4 STC members. Abhijeet signalled Freddy to move up and to the side. ACP Pradyuman did the same on Daya's side. The 4 went around hiding behind the boxes. When they saw the children they looked around, but didn't see anyone standing over the children. Abhijeet saw steps leading up to the second floor. Freddy went up the stairs followed by Abhijeet. Freddy called down quietly, "Sir yahan bhi koi nahi hai."

ACP Pradyuman said over his headset, "Lagta hai unhe pata chal gaya tha ke hum log aa rahe hain. Woh bhag gaye bachon ko yahani chor ke. Unhe NGO walon ko le aayo undar. Woh inhe bachon ko yahan se le jayenge aur tum sab dekho kuch milta hai. Agar woh jaldi main yahan se nikale hain toh zaroor kuch na kuch chor ke gaye hain."

Freddy started tossing aside the boxes as he looked for anything to signal where this gang had gone or who they were. Abhijeet stepped off the stairs and started searching in the area itself. ACP Pradyuman stepped forward to stop the children from working with the STC team. Daya started going through the papers on the desk, while Rajat covered the outside area.

A few minutes later the children had been escorted out with the STC team who drove them off to their site after confirmation from ACP Pradyuman. Daya found several papers and brought them over to ACP Pradyuman. "Sir yeh dekhiye. Lagta hai yeh log internationally bhi deal karte hain. Yeh nakli import/export rights hain aur yeh bhi nakli landing documents hain."

ACP Pradyuman flipped through them and said, "Daya inhe se inhe logon ke asliyat ke baare main bhi pata lag sakta hai."

Abhijeet came over and on hearing this said, "Mujhe nahi lagta hai sir. Inhe se yeh toh pata lag sakta hai ke kis insaan ne banaye honge yeh lekin uss se sachayi uglwana asaan nahi hai."

"Koshish karo. Shayad kuch pata lag jaaye."

Rajat came in. "Sir bhar yeh teen alag cigarette butts mile hain. Lagta hai yeh log cigarette kafi peete the. Har ke kum se kum dus mile hain."

Freddy came down from the upper floor. "Upar kuch nahi hai."

"Rajat jab Purvi court se wapas aa jaati hai toh tum aur Purvi NGO jao aur inhe bachon se baat karo. Jinhe logon ne yeh sab kiya hai sirf unhe nahi dhoondna hai balki inhe bachon ke parivaaron ko bhi dhoondna hai," ACP Pradyuman said.

"Ji sir," Rajat nodded.

"Sir main aapne khabriyon ko laga deta hoon kam pe inhe papers ke banane wale ko dhoondne ke liye," Daya said.

*****

Forensic lab, 6PM

Abhijeet said, "Sir kuch mila?"

"Arre yaar tum Pradyuman ki taran ghode pe sawar ho kar kyun aate ho?!! Jab kuch milega tab bata doonga," Dr. Salunke said.

"Sir aap gussa kyun ho rahe hain? Main toh pooch raha tha," Abhijeet said.

"Main gussa nahi ho raha hoon. Bas tum sab ki jaldi dekh kar pareshan ho raha hoon!" Dr. Salunkhe replied.

"Sir aaj court main sab thik tha naa?"

"Haan...Nahi! Logon ko DNA ka sidha sa concept bhi nahi pata hai. Do ghante lage sirf yeh samjhane main ke koi do logon ka DNA ek sa nahi hota hai. Pata nahi kaise judge ban jaate hain."

Abhijeet hid a chuckle at that. Luckily Dr. Salunkhe didn't see that. He asked, "Aur yeh kya sun raha hoon? Rajat ko Delhi transfer kar rahe hain?"

"Haan. Sir ko pata chal gaya tha pehle lekin unhone bhi nahi bataya."

"Yeh Pradyuman bhi naa. Aaj kal kuch bhi nahi batata hai. Bas aapne undar rakhta hai sab kuch."

"Aap ko bhi nahi bataya sir ne?"

"Nahi. Agar bataya hota toh main yeh kehta?"

At that moment the machine beeped. Dr. Salunkhe went over to the machine, opened it, and pulled out the rack. He took a dropper and taking a little bit liquid from each put it into another test tube. Then he pushed the new rack into the machine beside the first one and turned it on. The first machine had been a mixing machine that mixed the DNA sample with a solution to clear it. This second machine was now extracting the DNA and feeding it into the computer. Dr. Salunkhe turned to Abhijeet, "Woh bache kaise hain?"

"Rajat bata raha tha ke kafi daare huye hain. Woh aur Purvi abhi bas baat karne lagenge unhe ke saath."

"Yeh log jab mile toh inhe kheench ke ek dena mere taraf se," Dr. Salunkhe said.

This was totally unlike him. Dr. Salunkhe had never shown emotion in such a way. Abhijeet simply nodded a bit surprised at the way Dr. Salunkhe had said that. In between the awkward silence that followed the machine beeped. Dr. Salunkhe went over to the computer and said, "Do aadmi aur ek aurat. Chalo dekhen yeh hamare database main hain pehle se yah nahi."

Dr. Salunkhe ran the profiles against their police database as Abhijeet came over and watched the computer scan the profiles as well. After a few minutes the scan was done. There was one profile in their system. Abhijeet read through the profile, "Lallan Singh. Char saal pehle ispe shaq tha ke isne ek khoon kiya hai. Saboot na milne ki wajah se yeh choot gaya tha. Last known address Andheri ka hai."

*****

Save the Children office, 6:15PM

Rajat and Purvi sat in the office as Debasree went to get another 2 of the 29 children who had been rescued. Purvi said, "Sir inhe logon ko pata kaise chala ke aap log unhe pakdne jaa rahe the?"

"Kya pata," Rajat replied.

"Sir aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ke iss NGO ka koi mila huya ho unhe ke saath," Purvi suggested.

"Tum aisa kaise keh sakti ho?" Rajat asked, surprised.

"Sir jab tak yeh bache unhe logon ke paas the sab thik tha. Lekin jaise hi yeh log hamare paas aaye achanak se iss gang ko sab pata lag jaata hai aur woh bhag jaate hain? Mujhe bas ajeeb sa laga."

"Aisa karo zara ACP sir ko phone karke bata do. Inhe NGO walon ka toh humne socha hi nahi tha."

Purvi nodded and stepped aside to call ACP Pradyuman. Once she was done she came back just as Debasree came back with 2 more children. They were both boys. One appeared to be 14 and the other maybe 11 or 12.

So far Rajat and Purvi had talked to 4 children. They still had 23 more to go. Debasree stepped out of the room and Purvi leaned forward, "Bachon daaro maat. Hum log CID se hain. Hum sirf aap dono se kuch baatein karna chahte hain taki hum aap ko aapke parivaar ke paas wapas bhej sakhen."

The 2 boys looked at each other and then looked down. Rajat also leaned forward, "Acha chalo yeh toh bata sakte ho ke tumhare naam kya hain?"

The one sitting in front of Rajat said, "Rehan."

The other one looked at Rehan and then back down and said, "Aditya."

"Acha Rehan aur Aditya tum yeh bata sakte ho ke tum yeh sab kab se kar rahe ho?" Purvi asked, carefully.

Both didn't say anything. Purvi pressed, "Dekho hum sirf tumhari madat karna chahte hain. Aur kuch nahi. Ho sakta hai ke tumhare parivaar wale tumhe dhoond rahe ho. Agar hume yeh pata lag sakta hai ke tum yahan pe kab se ho toh shayad hume aur bhi kuch pata lag sakta hai."

Purvi was trying to say that maybe the boys had been reported missing and by knowing when they had disappeared they could check the National Missing Person's database. Rehan replied first again, "Main shayad yahan pe pichle do saalon se hoon."

Aditya looked towards Rehan and said, "Main bhi."

Rajat asked, "Tum dono kahan se ho yeh yaad hai?"

Rehan was a bit more open this time. "Main Delhi ke paas ek chota sa shehar hai Sonipat wahan se hoon."

"Aur main bhi," Aditya said.

Purvi raised an eyebrow at that. She asked, "Kya tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho?"

Rehan nodded. "Hum dono bhai hain."

Rajat and Purvi sat back at that. The two were brothers who had been brought here together and their parents weren't looking for them? Rehan continued, "Didi hum toh yahan ek achi zindagi banane ke liye aaye the. Do saal pehle ek memsaab aayi thi hamare shehar main aur hamara ek street performance dekhne lagi thi. Unhone kaha tha ke woh yahan pe ek school chalati hain aur hume yahan dhakela mil sakta hai. Woh hamari bhaliye ke liye karna chahti thi yeh sab. Maa papa bhi mann gaye the kyun ki woh hamara kal sudharna chahte the. Woh hum dono ko yahan li aayi aur hume pehle din hi pata lag gaya ke hum yahan koi padhai nahi karne wale hain."

Rajat asked gently, "Tumhe tumhare maa papa ke naam yaad hain? Yah unka pata?"

"Hum wahani ek choti si basti main rehte the. Nagara Basti tha. Kholi...kholi..." Rehan got stuck.

Aditya said, "Kholi number 3."

Purvi made a note and then asked, "Jab se tum yahan aaye ho tumne dekha hai ke kitne log the jo tumse yeh kam karwate the?"

"Do memsaab thi aur paanch saheb. Aur maine ek baar uss badi wali memsaab ko ek aur se baat karte huye suna tha jab ki saab wahani the," Aditya said.

"Woh jinhe se baat kar rahi thi woh saheb tha yah memsaab?" Rajat asked.

"Shayad memsaab hogi," Aditya replied. Then he asked, "Kya hum ab jaa sakte hain?"

Rajat nodded. The two left the room and Purvi said, "Matlab koi aur bhi mila huya tha iss sab main?"

"Tumne jo kaha hai woh bhi sahi ho sakta hai," Rajat said. "Chalo woh Debasree ko bulate hain aur do aur bachon ko bulwate hain."

*****

CID bureau, 6:30PM

Daya got off the phone and said, "Sir aapne do khabriyon ko kam pe laga diya hai. Woh shayad jaante hain ke yeh nakli papers kisne banaye hain lekin confirm karke batayenge."

ACP Pradyuman also got off the phone and said, "Purvi ko lagta hai ke NGO se koi mila huya hai. Nahi toh woh gang achanak se bhag nahi sakti thi."

"Main NGO walon ki information niklwata hoon. Ho bhi sakta hai ke jo Purvi keh rahi hai woh sahi ho."

Freddy came in with a paper at that moment. "Sir yeh woh list hai jisme unhe saare jagaon ke naam hain jahan yeh log inhe bachon ko le kar jaate the bheech mangwane ke liye."

"Map pe daalo," ACP Pradyuman said.

Freddy put them in 5 different colours to represent the 5 different teams that went out on the map. Freddy said, "Yeh log zada kar ke Andheri ke alag alag jagaon main hi rehte the. Aur sirf yeh dono teams main ek aurat thi. Baki dono main bas ek ek aadmi tha."

"Inhe ki yeh factory bhi Andheri main hi hai," ACP Pradyuman said.

"Aur ek suspect bhi Andheri main hi rehta hai," Abhijeet said, from the door.

He came inside with a file. "Sir yeh Dr. Salunkhe ne bheja hai. Teeno cigarette butts main se ek aurat hai aur baki dono aadmi. Unhe main se ek yeh hai. Lallan Singh. Andheri ka address hai iska."

"Toh chalo isse pakde ke lekar aate hain," Daya said.

The two left to bring in Lallan. ACP Pradyuman said to Freddy, "Freddy NGO main jo bhi log kam karte hain unhe sab ki information nikalo."

Freddy nodded and sat down at the computer to pull up that information.

*****

Lallan's residence, 7PM

Daya knocked on the door as Abhijeet glanced through the window. He saw someone coming towards the door and said, "Koi aa raha hai."

They were at a small one-bedroom flat in the middle of a rundown area. A lady opened the door and asked, "Ji? Kisse milna hai?"

"Hum Lallan se milne aaye hain," Daya said.

"Aap log kaun hain?"

"Ji hum bank wale hain. Ek karza liya tha usne aur yahan ka pata diya tha. Pichle teen mahino se kisht nahi di hai loan ki isli aaye hain," Abhijeet said, quickly.

"Ab usne loan bhi le liya?!! Dekhiye woh nikamma yahan nahi rehta hai! Teen saal pehle jab uspe woh khoon ka ilzaam laga tha tabhi maine usse aapne ghar se nikal diya tha. Kahin aur jaa kar dhoondiye ab usse!"

"Aap hain kaun?" Abhijeet asked.

"Main uski behen hoon. Yeh mere pati ka ghar tha. Mere pati ko maar diya aur kehta hai ke usne aisa nahi kiya. Main nahi maanti hoon."

"Kya hum ek baar ghar main dekh sakte hain?" Daya asked.

"Arre kyun? Jab maine keh diya hai ke woh yahan nahi hai toh nahi hai!" the lady exclaimed, blocking the door.

Daya showed his badge. "Hum koi bank wale nahi hain. CID."

Then Daya pushed the lady aside and went in. Abhijeet followed suit as the lady sputtered. But she had been right. There was no sign of Lallan in the house or any sign that he had been there recently. As they were leaving though, Abhijeet spotted a duffel bag under the bed. He bent down and pulled it out. Inside he found two pairs of men's clothes and a razor. He asked, "Kya hai yeh? Woh yahan nahi aaya tha? Toh phir yeh kis ka saman hai?"

"Mujhe nahi pata hai," the lady stuttered.

"Nahi pata hai. Toh thik hai. Bureau chalo. Wahan tumhe sab yaad aa jayega," Daya said.

"Ek minute sir. Main...main...main batati hoon. Woh aaya tha. Aaj hi aaya tha. Pure teen saal ke baad. Uske paas yeh bag tha aur kuch paise the. Usne mujhe paise diye aur kaha ke usse kuch dino ke liye yahan chupne doon. Toh maine usse jagah de di. Abhi thodi deer pehle woh bhar gaya tha yeh keh kar ke ek ghante main aa jayega. Bas aata hi hoga," the lady said.

"Chalo phir hum bhi zara uska intezaar kar lete hain," Abhijeet said.

Abhijeet and Daya sat down on the bed to wait.

*****

CID bureau, 7:45PM

Rajat and Purvi were going through the notes and calling the police stations of each area to find the parents of these children when ACP Pradyuman came in. He asked, "Kya dekh rahe ho tum dono?"

"Sir yeh unhe bachon ke statements hain. Hum unke maa baap ko dhoondne main lag rahe hain," Purvi replied.

"Thik hai. Kya kaha unhe bachon ne?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Sir sab ka taqreebein ek hi kahani hai. Woh ek gareeb ghar se hain aur unhe ke parivaar se ek aurat milne aayi jisne kaha ke woh bachon ko yahan aapne ek school main padhane laa sakti hai. Yahan pe aaye aur unhe bheech maangne aur rugs banane main laga diya gaya. Kafi bache Haryana aur Uttar Pradesh se hain. Kuch Rajasthan se bhi hain," Purvi replied.

"Inhe bachon ka yeh bhi kehna hai ke do auraten aur paanch aadmi hain iss pure gang main. Lekin ek ka yeh kehna hai ke usne ek baar ek aurat ko kisi se phone pe baat karte huye suna jo issi gang ka hissa lag rahi thi," Rajat put in.

"Thik hai. Tum dono inhe bachon ke maa baap ko dhoondo hum dekhte hain ke yeh gang kahan hai," ACP Pradyuman said.

At that moment Abhijeet and Daya brought in a struggling man. He kept saying, "Chodo. Maine kuch galat nahi kiya. Chodo mujhe."

Daya forced him into a chair and said, "Sir yeh Lallan hai. Pure raaste kehta aaya hai ke isne kuch nahi kiya hai."

"Acha isne kuch nahi kiya hai? Toh phir tum hi bata do ke iska woh cigarette butt bhar kaise pauncha?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Sir shayad udh ke gaya hoga," Daya replied.

"Nahi nahi sir. Koi isse phasana chahta hai," Abhijeet said.

Lallan looked from Daya to ACP Pradyuman to Abhijeet as they said this and quickly agreed with Abhijeet, "Haan haan. Koi mujhe phasana chahta hai."

"Arre arre arre. Koi isse phasana chahta hai. Lekin phir woh isse aise hi kyun phasayega? Koi khoon whoon main phasata toh yeh phansi pe bhi toh chad sakta tha," ACP Pradyuman said.

"Shayad woh isse tarpana chahta hai," Abhijeet said.

"Haan, haan koi mujhe tarpana chahta hai," Lallan agreed again.

"Lekin iska matlab hai ke jo isse phasana chata hai woh iss sab main mila huya hai," ACP Pradyuman said. "Toh phir Lallan yeh toh batana parega ke woh kaun hai aur kahan milega."

"Ji woh...woh...woh," Lallan stuttered.

"Woh kya?!! Khud iss sab main mile huye ho aur naam kisi aur ka thera rahe ho!" ACP Pradyuman said angrily.

"Nahi sir! Main iss sab main mila huya nahi hoon. Maine unhe bachon se bheech nahi mangwayi hai! Main kuch nahi janta hoon!" Lallan exclaimed. Then he bit his tongue.

"Unhe bachon se bheech nahi mangwayi hai. Khin bachon se. Humne toh bachon ka naam tak nahi liya tha. Tumhe baara pata hai shamal naa hone ke liye," Abhijeet said.

"Haan main mila huya hoon. Main unhe main se ek hoon," Lallan said.

"Toh phir Lallan zara yeh bhi bata do ke yeh sab kyun karte ho," Daya said.

"Paison ke liye aur kis liye," Lallan said, getting cocky. He had accepted the fact that he had been caught.

"Tumhare baki saathi kahan hain?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Mere ko nahi pata," Lallan replied.

"Acha toh phir tum unhe se miloge kaise?" Abhijeet asked.

"Jab waqt hoga toh hamari boss hume message kar degi. Phir hum uske bataye huye jagah aur waqt pe paunch jayenge aur aapna kam phir se shuru karenge," Lallan replied.

"Tumhare boss ka koi naam yah number?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Hoga. Mujhe nahi pata hai," Lallan said, shrugging indifferently.

This angered the 3. Daya grabbed Lallan's collar and said, "Dekh yah toh tu thik se jawab de yah phir main aisa chanta maaronga ke daanton main se piano bajne lagega."

Lallan yanked his collar out of Daya's hand and said, "Mere ko jo pata hai main wohi bata sakta hoon."

"Toh jo pata hai woh bol de yahan pe," Daya replied, before standing up straight again.

"Thik hai. Batata hoon. Mere boss ka number kya hai woh nahi pata hai. Uske paas kahi alag alag SIM cards hain aur woh kaunse hume SMS karegi mujhe nahi pata hai. Mujhe yeh pata hai ke uska naam Maya hai aur main uske liye pichle teen saalon se kam kar raha hoon. Woh yeh kam kafi waqt se kar rahi hai. Hamare iss gang main hum paanch aadmi hain aur teen auraton," Lallan said.

"Yeh paanch aadmi aur teen auraton kaun hain?" Abhijeet asked.

"Kya unke naam aur paate chahiye?" Lallan retorted.

"Agar de sakte ho toh wohi de do," Abhijeet said.

"Agar main itni saari information doonga toh mujhe deal karna hai. Meri saza kum honi chahiye," Lallan said.

"Nahi. Tumhe toh puri saza milegi. Tum hume information doge yah nahi?" ACP Pradyuman said.

"Nahi doonga. Khud dhoond lo," Lallan said, spitefully.

Abhijeet riffled through his coat and pulled out a phone from Lallan's pocket. "Chalo tum naa batao. Tumhara yeh phone bata dega."

Abhijeet started to go through Lallan's phone. He reached a message and said, "Lo yeh mil gaya uss madam ka number. Ab tumhara khel khatam."

Abhijeet pulled out his own phone and called the phone company to trace a number. Daya took Lallan away. Rajat and Purvi came over, "Sir unhe 29 ladkiyon main se 15 ke maa baap ko dhoondna jaari hai."

"Aur baki 14?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Unhe bhi dhoond rahe hain sir," Purvi said.

"Number ka location mil gaya hai," Abhijeet said, hanging up.

"Toh phir chalen?" Daya asked, coming back in.

"Haan. Pakdte hain iss madam ko," Abhijeet said.

*****

Mumbai Central Railway Station, 9PM

Abhijeet, Daya, and Freddy reached the railway station. Like always there was a lot of traffic in the railway station. Freddy asked, "Sir itne logon main kaise pata chalega ke woh kaun hai?"

"Uska number baar baar dial karte hain. Jab bhi woh uthayegi aur hume dekhega toh usse pakde lenge," Daya said.

Abhijeet pulled out his phone and dialled the number. It rang. Abhijeet said, "Baj raha hai. Dhoondo."

Daya and Freddy started looking around. The phone got cut and Abhijeet dialled again as he looked around as well for the ringing phone.

After several minutes, Daya finally saw a lady who kept cutting her phone. He called Abhijeet and waited until he came over. Daya said, "Woh dekho Abhijeet. Mujhe lagta hai yehi hai."

"Ek minute isse phir se phone karke dekhta hoon," Abhijeet replied.

Freddy also came over as Abhijeet dialled the number again. The lady looked at her phone again and pressed a button. Abhijeet's call got ended as well. Abhijeet nodded, "Haan yehi hai."

"Chalo toh phir isse aapni khatardari dekhte hain," Daya said.

The 3 walked forward and without the lady realizing it surrounded her. Freddy said, "Hello ma'am. Lagta hai koi aap ko pareshan kar raha hai?"

The lady looked up surprised. Freddy introduced himself, "Inspector Fredericks, CID."

The lady gave a surprise and then tried to run, but knocked into Daya. Daya grabbed her arm and said, "Arre, arre. Kahan jaa rahi ho? Jaise bachon ko aapna mehman banaya tha chalo hum tumhe aapna mehman baante hain."

The lady scowled, but walked out of the station with them.

*****

CID bureau, 10:30PM

The lady had refused to speak and was therefore cooling her heels in their jail cell. Meanwhile the team was working on finding the remaining gang as well as the families of the children.

Freddy put some papers down and went over to the computer. He typed in something and after a few minutes said, "Sir shayad woh NGO wala connection mil gaya hai!"

Abhijeet and Daya came over. Freddy said, "Sir yeh ek Snehal ka bank account hai. Yeh ussi NGO main kam karti hai jisne unhe bachon ko bachaya hai. Mujhe ispe tab shaq huya jab maine yeh dekha ke pichle do mahino main isne bahut si nayi nayi mehngi cheezein liye hain. Yeh tabhi se shuru huya jab NGO wale unhe bachon ko bachane main lag gaye. Yeh maine uska bank account nikala toh dekha ke isse pichle do mahino main achanak se 50 lakh mile hain jisme se woh 30 lakh toh kharch bhi kar chuki hai."

ACP Pradyuman had overheard this. He said, "Freddy tum aur Purvi kal subah hote hi NGO jao aur iss Snehal ko yahan pakde ke laayo."

*****

CID bureau, Next day, 10AM

Purvi dragged a protesting Snehal into the bureau and forced her into a chair. Snehal demanded, "Mujhe yahan kyun laaye ho?!!"

"Tumhari aarti utarne ke liye," Purvi replied, sarcastically.

"Uske liye aise laane ki kya zaroorat thi!" Snehal exclaimed.

"Chup! Tum toh bachon ki bhalayi ke liye kam karti thi naa? Toh phir yeh achanak se unhe ke mazdoori ki taraf daari kyun karne lag gayi ho?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Yeh aap se kisne kaha? Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai," Snehal said, looking confused.

"Acha. Matlab jo kal 29 bachon ko bachaya tha uss gang ke saath tumhara koi lena dena nahi hai?" Abhijeet asked.

"Kya? Nahi! Main toh khud unhe bachon ko bachana chahti thi. Lekin Debasree, Misha, aur Neha ne mujhe kabhi uss team ka hissa banaya hi nahi," Snehal replied.

"Isli tum gang ke saath mil gayi. Unhone tumhe 50 lakh diye taki tum unhe yeh bata sakhao ke bache kya bata rahe hain tum logon ko lekin tum kuch nahi bata paayi kal tak. Kal tumhe pata chala ke Debasree, Misha, Neha, aur Ravi hamare paas aaye hain aur tumne unhe savdhaan kar diya taki woh bhag gaye aur bachon ko wahani chorgaye," Daya said.

"Kya? Yeh kisne kaha aap se?" Snehal asked.

"Tumhari madam ne," Purvi said.

"Oh hello! Woh meri madam nahi hai. Main aapne liye kam karti hoon," Snehal objected. Then she bit her tongue.

"Haan. Tumne sahi kaha. Tum sirf aapne aap aur paison ke liye kam karti ho. Ab batao. Tumhe kaise pata chala ke hum raid karne wale hain?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Haan yeh sach hai ke main uss gang ke saath mil chuki thi. Aur kyun naa milti? Maine kitni baar kaha Debasree se ke mujhe bhi ek mauka de ek baare raid main lekin har baar keh deti thi ke agli baar. Toh maine bhi soch liya ke agar main woh nahi kar sakti hoon jo main karna chahti hoon toh NGO ka bhi koi kam main sahi nahi hone doongi. Mujhe toh iss case ke baare main aise hi pata lag gaya. Main ek din Debasree ke office main gayi aur woh wahan nahi thi lekin Sandhya ke saath ki gayi baat ki transcript thi. Toh maine usse padh liya aur phir Debasree ka peecha kiya aur ek aadmi tak paunch gayi jisne mujhe uss Laila se mila diya. Laila ne mujhe 1 crore ka wada kiya agar main kisi taran se NGO ko rok paati bachon ko bachane se. Lekin main uss team ka hissa nahi ban paayi toh maine kaha ke maine unhe yeh bata doongi ke raid kab hoga. Uske liye mujhe 50 lakh mile. Jab kal chaaron wapas aaye toh maine yunhi pooch liya ke woh kahan gaye the aur baaton baaton main unhe bata diya sab kuch. Tabhi maine Laila ko sab kuch phone karke bata diya. Lekin I guess woh bachon ko aapne saath nahi le kar jaa paaye," Snehal said.

"Ab tum woh 50 lakh ke khub maaze uthana. Jail main," ACP Pradyuman said.

Purvi took Snehal away as she kept protesting. ACP Pradyuman said, "Ab uss baki ke gang ko bhi dhoondo. Abhi bhi char aadmi aur ek ladki gayab hain."

"Sir shayad Laila hamari kuch madat kar sakti hai iss mamle main," Freddy said.

"Freddy woh toh kuch keh nahi rahi hai. Toh woh kya madat karegi?" Rajat asked. He had come into the bureau just as Purvi had been taking Snehal out.

"Sir yeh baat hum jaante hain ke woh kuch nahi keh rahi hai. Woh log toh nahi jaante hain. Aur waise bhi uske phone se chahiye hum sab ko SMS bhejen yah phir woh. Kisi ko kya pata?" Freddy suggested.

"Freddy idea toh bahut acha hai. Lekin hume kya pata ke woh kaun hain?" Abhijeet asked.

"Toh kya huya Abhijeet. Hum ek mass text bhej dete hain iske phone pe sab ko aur unhe kahin bula lete hain. Aur aise code main bhejenge ke sirf unhe samjh aayega jo iss gang ka hissa hain. Baki sab ko nahi," Daya said.

"Waise sir zada log nahi aayenge agar sab ko samjh bhi aa jayega. Kyun ki Laila ke phone pe sirf 10 numbers Mumbai ke hain aur ek Snehal ka hai aur doosra Lallan ka," Purvi said as she looked through Laila's phone.

"Matlab 8 log aayenge aur unhe main se paanch iss gang ka hissa hain," Rajat said. "Toh phir toh karna chahiye."

"Thik hai. Jaise Lallan ke phone pe text tha waise hi SMS inhe aaghton ko bhejo aur aaj sham ko ussi factory main bulao. Dekhte hain kaun aata hai aur kaun nahi," ACP Pradyuman said.

As Purvi typed the message out, Rajat's phone rang. He picked up and talked to someone on the other end before hanging up. He turned to the team and said, "Sir ek Inspector ka phone tha. Usne do bachon ke maa baap ko dhoond liya hai. Woh aaj ki train pe bhete hain aur kal tak yahan paunch jayenge."

"Yeh toh achi baat hai. Do bachon ko toh aapne maa baap se phir se milne ko milega," ACP Pradyuman said.

"Ab aise hi baki sab maa baap bhi mil jaayen," Abhijeet said.

"Sir message type ho gaya aur send kar diya," Purvi said.

"Kya time kaha?" Daya asked.

"4 baje," Purvi replied.

"Thik hai. Tyar raho. Chaar baje se pehle hum wahan hoyenge aur inhe logon ko pakdene ke liye puri tyari ke saath," ACP Pradyuman said.

*****

Warehouse, 4PM

Daya looked towards Abhijeet who looked towards Rajat who nodded. The 3 were ready. On the other side Purvi, ACP Pradyuman, and Freddy also checked up on each other.

Two men walked in at that moment. One said, "Yeh Laila ma'am kahan hai?"

"Aati hongi. Woh toh waise bhi hamasa last aati hain aise meetings main," the other man replied.

A lady walked in as well. "Tum dono ko bhi message mil gaya tha?"

"Obviously Laila ma'am ne sab ko hi bulaya hoga," the first man replied.

"Baki teeno kahan hain?" the lady asked.

"Lallan ne toh kaha tha ke woh aapne behen ke ghar main chupega agar kabhi unhe bhagna parega. Toh woh zaroor wahani hoga," the first man replied.

"Aur Rakesh aur Sattu ne kaha tha ke woh gaon bhag jayenge. Ab kya woh bhag gaye yeh nahi pata," the second man replied.

Abhijeet whispered into his mouthpiece, "Sir agar woh dono bhag gaye hain aur Lallan hamare paas hai toh hum toh sirf inhe hi pakdene aaye the. Pakde len?"

"Ruk jao zara. Ho sakta hai woh dono bhi aate ho," ACP Pradyuman replied.

The team watched and waited. After about 5 minutes, the 3 got restless. The lady said, "Yeh Laila aayegi yah hume bula kar wapas gayab ho gayi?"

"Nikle?" the first man asked.

"Nahi do teen minute aur ruk jaate hain," the second man said.

Daya whispered, "Sir mujhe nahi lagta hai woh dono aane wale hain. Inhe pakde?"

"Haan thik hai. Pakdo," ACP Pradyuman replied.

That was all the team needed. Abhijeet, Daya, and Rajat pushed the boxes aside and came out of their hiding places with their guns drawn. The 3 criminals saw them and ran towards the door. This is when Freddy and Purvi revealed themselves. ACP Pradyuman stepped forward as well with his gun drawn. The 3 turned towards the back door but by then Abhijeet, Daya, and Rajat had blocked the back door. Realizing they were caught the 3 held up their hands in surrender. At this time, 2 more men came walking through the front door. The lady yelled, "Bhaago Rakesh, Sattu!"

The 2 men turned and ran. Daya and Rajat ran after them as Freddy and Purvi took the 3 out to the CID qualis. Abhijeet said, "Ab toh yeh puri gang hamare haath main aa chuki hai."

ACP Pradyuman agreed, "Ab unhe bachon ko unke maa baap se milwana reh gaya hai."

*****

CID bureau, 6PM

Rajat and Daya had caught up to Rakesh and Sattu as they had been trying to start Rakesh's car. Now the 8 gang members were sitting in front of the CID team. Abhijeet demanded, "Ab bolo! Kyun kiya yeh sab?!!"

Laila laughed. "Iske liye bhi wajah deni paregi? Paison ke liye."

"Lekin bache hi kyun?!!" Daya demanded.

"Kyun ki bachon ko bheech asaani se mil jaati hai. Aur unhe ke haath bhi chote hote hain toh woh araam se ache ache rugs bana lete hain," Laila replied.

"Yeh sab kab se kar rahe ho?" ACP Pradyuman asked.

"Chaar saal," Laila replied.

"Tum bachon ko chunte kaise ho?" Purvi asked.

"Hume jab bhi bache chahiye hote hain toh main aur Lallan Uttar Pradesh aur Haryana jaate hain chote chote shehron main aur wahan unhe bachon ko chunte hain jo bahut gareeb hain aur jinhe bahut asaani se yahan laaya jaa sakta hai. Ek do baar hum Rajasthan bhi gaye hain bache laane," Laila replied.

"Snehal ko kaise involve kiya aapne iss gang main?" Rajat asked.

"Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya tha. Yeh khud aayi thi. Aur gang ka hissa banane nahi bas hamari madat karne taki hum pakde nahi jaayein," Laila replied.

"Dekha! Maine kaha tha ke main toh sirf inki kuch madat karna chahti thi," Snehal exclaimed.

"Tum bhi utne hi gunehgar ho jitne yeh hain!" ACP Pradyuman said, angrily.

With no other questions left, the 8 were led out by Freddy, Purvi and Rajat.

*****

CID bureau, Next day, 9AM

Today was Rajat's last day in the bureau. He walked in hoping for a quiet day and was surprised to see the lights out. He checked his watch. Yep it was 9AM. Usually Abhijeet and Daya were here by this time. He found it weird, but turned on the lights and was met with a surprise. The entire team was standing in front of him. ACP Pradyuman stepped forward and said, "Yeh tumhara aakhri din hai isli yeh tumhare liye."

They all stepped aside to reveal a table laden with gifts and a cake. Rajat stepped forward and smiled. Freddy said, "Sir jaldi se cake kaato."

"Haan. Mujhe toh bahut bhuk lagi hai," Pankaj said.

Everyone looked at him as Rajat started laughing. He picked up the knife, cut the cake, and fed a piece to ACP Pradyuman. Purvi came forward to cut the cake into pieces for everyone. Their happiness was short-lived though. Rajat's phone rang and he picked up. Another child's parents were found.

*****

CID bureau, Two weeks later (An epilogue of sorts)

Debasree came in with Rehan and Aditya. They were the last 2 children left from the 29 children. The other 27's parents had been found and over the past 2 weeks their children had been returned. Yesterday, their parents had finally been found and today they were standing in the bureau waiting for their children. Abhijeet said, "Yeh lo. Aap ke bache aa gaye."

The mother turned around and ran forward hugging both Rehan and Aditya as both started crying. The father ran forward and hugged them as well. Debasree stepped out of the way. Freddy said, "Sir kitna acha lag raha hai."

"Haan Freddy. Hum hamasa parivaar walon ko kisi ke maarne ki khabar dete hain. Aise cases bahut kum hote hain jahan hum parivaaron ko milate hain," Abhijeet agreed.

"Abhijeet jo bhi ho yeh ehsaas sab se acha hai," Daya said.

Abhijeet nodded. The mother and father wiped their tears and the children's tears before coming back. The mother said, "Saab aapka bahut bahut shukriya hamare bache hume lautne ke liye. Humne kabhi nahi socha tha ke hamare bachon ke saath yeh sab ho raha hoga."

"Nahi, nahi. Isme shukriya karne ki koi baat nahi hai. Yeh toh hamara farz tha," Abhijeet said.

"Sir main kuch keh sakti hoon?" Debasree asked.

"Haan kaho naa," Daya said.

"Main aap dono ko bas itna batana chahti hoon ke hamare NGO ne Sonipat ke ek government school se baat kar li hai. Aap dono ke bache wahan padne jaa sakte hain issi saal se," Debasree said. "Aur agar kabhi kuch bhi chahiye ho toh yeh hamara card hai wahan ke local office ka. Aap wahan chale jana."

The mother took the card and then saying Namaste left. Debasree also said, "Okay sir ab main bhi chalti hoon."

The 3 nodded and Debasree left.

Abhijeet said, "Chalo ab wapas lagte hain doosre cases pe."

Daya agreed, "Haan abhi ACP sir aa jayenge aur poochenge ke kya huya hai abhi tak."

The 3 had just sat down when ACP Pradyuman came in and asked, "Woh robbery case ka kya huya?"

Abhijeet and Daya exchanged amused glances as Freddy started updating ACP Pradyuman. Ah the typical day of a CID officer. Never so typical.

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Great Sri...u r so fast !!! πŸ‘
I will read it after 19th πŸ˜† 😳
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Hey Sri, thanks for including me again... πŸ˜ƒ Yeah, i m lucky... πŸ˜†
Will read soon...
 
Kahin mujhe criminal toh nahi bana diya???!!!! 😲
Hope I am lucky enough to be on the good side πŸ˜†
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Lagta hai Snehal di is essaying role of the antagonist hereπŸ˜† or the victimπŸ˜‰??
Shreya di, is the story complete?
I don't know when will I get time to read this.. So sorry in advance.
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I'l read it certainly..
Sound's compellingπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow its a suspicious detective story πŸ˜ƒ my fav πŸ˜³πŸ‘

loved the 1st part , looking forward to more .

btw can u please update with english translations 😳 as i find it hard to read hindi

sorry if i hurt you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: debasree04

Great Sri...u r so fast !!! πŸ‘
I will read it after 19th πŸ˜† 😳



I was thinking of posting it on the 19th actually lekin phir socha 19th ke baad kuch aur post karongi. πŸ˜†

Yep well I write on the bus so it usually only takes me a few weeks to get something done if I have a good idea. πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: neha_dna

Hey Sri, thanks for including me again... πŸ˜ƒ Yeah, i m lucky... πŸ˜†

Will read soon...
 
Kahin mujhe criminal toh nahi bana diya???!!!! 😲
Hope I am lucky enough to be on the good side πŸ˜†



Socho socho kaun criminal hai. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Lagta hai Snehal di is essaying role of the antagonist hereπŸ˜† or the victimπŸ˜‰??
Shreya di, is the story complete?
I don't know when will I get time to read this.. So sorry in advance.



Snehal ka jo hoga woh toh story parne ke baad hi pata lagega. πŸ˜†

Yep it's complete. πŸ˜ƒ

Sorry πŸ˜‘ Ab se jo bhi sorry kahega usse yeh milega  aur yeh bhi  aur yeh bhi ho sakta hai