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awesome update 

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Originally posted by rashi246

WOW, I love Baldev's passion to get her
Plzzz continue soon


Thank you so much!Big smileWill do!

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Originally posted by niki795

awesome update 


Thank you!Big smile

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Prologue,page-1:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99578327&#p99578327


                                                    CHAPTER-1.

 

   Veera had just surprised her entire family..

  Ranvi,her veerji,her chaiji and Biji were all astonished to see her at home two days earlier than the destined day..

   They were all having lunch when Gunjan entered..Suddenly Veera's eyes twinkled with mischief..She indicated everyone to stay quiet and not to expose her..

   A questioning look passed through Ranvi's face,but Veera just winked in response.

"Wo taiji.."Gunjan  drifted off in midsentence, suddenly,noticing a new female face..

  Gunjan looked over the new female face sitting close to Ranvi,and then  looked questioningly at Ranvi,but he just kept quiet,and looked away..Then she looked at Chaiji,who coughed and made some excuse about needing water,and left..

  Finally Gunjan turned to Ratan..She sat with a bland expression on her face..

"Were you saying something Gunjan?"Ratan asked her softly,not heeding Veera's silent pleas.

"Yes..Wo chaiji..Who is she?A new guest..?"Gunjan asked,her face- a mask of confusion..

"Her?She is Veera-.."

  Veera interrupted before Ratan could finish.

"Ki dost!I am Veera's friend!I am Veera's friend-..."Veera tried to think of a name.."Khushboo..!"

  Gunjan was now eyeing Veera with a frown.

"Khushboo..?But I never heard of you from Veera or Ranvi..."

"Wo..We became friends through internet..That's why..You know internet..Ummm..Computer.."Veera explained in a small voice.

"Ha ha..Mainu pata hai intra..Mainu pata hai wo ki hondi hai.."Gunjan said in an offended voice..

    Veera felt bad at hurting her favourite Gunjan didi..She was just about to expose herself when Gunjan  suddenly turned to leave..

"Mainu na bauhot kam sham hai ghar par..Mai chalti hu.."Saying this Gunjan started walking away,but not before she passed a last angry look at the way Veera was sitting close,cuddled to Ranvi..

 

 

   It was a warm afternoon and Veera decided to walk around her pind..Her home,where she had returned after such a long time..

  She was walking towards the edge of the village,when a voice called her..

"Didi mainu maadat kardo na!"It was a small boy of about 6 years of age.

  Instantly Veera knelt down to the boy's eye level..

"Ki hoya tainu?"She smiled at the kid..

  The kid pointed at a tree by the side of the river..He explained that his kite had gotten stuck on the tree,and he could not get it down..

  Veera being Veera,instantly decided to help him out..So within minutes was climbing the huge tree..

 

     Baldev was driving by,when suddenly he skidded his jeep to a stop..

  He had just seen a pair of jeans clad legs vanish into the tree.He squinted..Trying to see better..

  He was right!He could make out a slim shapely body on top of the tree..

  Instantly a devilish smile came on his lips,and he massaged his unshaven cheek..

"Ae hae!Kaha kaha nahi dhundha tenu,aur tu yaha hai!"

   Without further thought,he had parked his jeep to a side,and sat on it,relaxed ,watching her shapely body through the tree limbs..

  He inhaled a long satisfied breath,as he observed her antics silently..Totally captivated by her every move..

  She was in a red top now,and even from this distance he could clearly say that the colour suited her very well.

  He sighed out again..His eyes travelling along her shapely limbs clearly visible through her fitting jeans and top..The only thing he was missing seeing at that moment was her face..And ofcourse her captivating eyes..

  He thoughtfully scratched his jaw..

 He had been wondering the entire day,who she was..Where had she suddenly come from..The only person who he had heard about coming from the city recently was Veera,but she will be here after two more days,as Ranvi had said..And Ranvi was never wrong about his so called Veera..

  His lips curled upwards distastefully at the thought of Veera..

 Let her come this time..!He would teach her quite a few good lessons of life..One of them being learning to respect him..Him,the To Be Sarpaanch BALDEV SINGH..He thought smugly.

  SNAP!!!

 Was she okay?!Baldev sat up straight at the sound of a branch snapping..

"DIDI!ARE YOU OKAY?!!"A small boy called out from the bottom of the tree,breaking into Baldev's thoughts..

  That was the first time Baldev noticed the kid..

"Meri kabab mei iththe inna chota sa haddi kahase tapak pari?!!"He muttered irritatedly..

  He squinted his eyes,trying to understand what the strange girl was really doing on top of the tree..Actually he was quite impressed by the way the city girl had managed till now.

  Finally a sound of celebration came from the top of the tree..

"Here is your kite!!!"The girl called out,and dropped the kite down..The kid instantly caught it,and saying a loud thank you ran away..

"Ye lo ji!Ye to bhaag gaya!Dhang se shukriya bhi nahi kehna aata!"Baldev sneered at the kid's  antic..

  It was finally clear to him why the city girl had climbed the tree..

 

   Now he knelt on his jeep's steering wheel,waiting for the spunky beauty to climb down..

He was sure the branches might not take both their weight together,or else he himself would have climbed on top of the tree..To get to know her..

  His eyes glinted in anticipation once again..

  Some rustling noises came,and a naughty grin came on his lips..

"Aaja jaldi se meri soniye!Aakhein taras gaya hai tenu phir se dekhne ke liye.."He muttered impatiently..

  SNAP!!!

"HELP!"

  This time Baldev sat straight with a jolt,as he saw her hanging precariously from the top of the tree,holding onto a half broken branch..

   His eyes nearly bulged out when he realized she was in trouble,and then he noticed she was hanging just on top of the fast flowing river!

"HELP!"

  She called out again,as she tried her best to climb back up..

  Baldev was out of the jeep,and running towards her within seconds..

SNAP!

SPLASH!!!

  But Baldev turned out to be a second too late,as the branch broke off,and the girl fell into the fast flowing river..

"HELP!!!PLEASE!MAINU TAIRNA NAI AATI!!!"The girl called out..

  Baldev did not think a second further,as he threw his coat off his body,and jumped into the river after her..

SPLASH!!!

 

 Chapter-2,page-11:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99781519&#p99781519



Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 18 January 2014 at 10:15am

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Omg I'm loving this.. Update soon! :D

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Lovely update

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 3:50am | IP Logged
oh dat was a nice update
ok so gunjan was nt liking ranvi closeness with khushboo aka veera
nd baldev is going to save her
lets see wat happens wen he will come to know dat she is veera
do update soon

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Omg Baldev jimp into river after her...
Kya baat hai...
Jealous gunjan...she is so cute...
Awesome update...

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