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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 2:04am | IP Logged
HI friends!SmileI'm new here!ButI've read lots of stories on Veeba and Ranjan and love dm..And this cute couple Veeba had got my writing fingers itching too..So m here with a little bit on them..EmbarrassedI'll confess m not an indian so was scared to write..OuchBut somehow managed to do so..ConfusedSo my dialogues will be mostly english,but might add hindi sometimes too..(But I do mix it up,esp the
gendersOuch)..
  So this is just a prologue,and if you do want me to continue,dnt forget to let me know..EmbarrassedOtherwise I'll just leave it here,and wnt continue..SmileThank u for reading dis patiently..Smile

This story starts with Veeba meeting first time after growing up...All the other characters r same..I changed their first meeting in my story..Hope you don't mind..Embarrassed

Tehsina...

p.s.I look forward to crticisms too,as m not a professional writer..TongueSo here u go..



  PROLOGUE:-

 

   Baldev again stood up  and walked impatiently..

  He walked towards thelawala selling kulfi...

"Bhaia what's the time?"

"It's 12:30.."The man replied,surprising Baldev in the process.

 With a dark frown on his brows he walked back towards the bus stand,or to be precise,the place that was considered by Pritampura people as just that..A place under the open sky,where a lone broken stool sat on its old rickety legs..

  Baldev showed angry eyes to a young boy,who instantly emptied his place allow Baldev to seat instead.He sat like the royalty,he was always told by his mother that he was..Lost in his musings..

  He loathed giving in to Surjeet Singh's demands,but he was helpless..All because he wanted to be a sarpaanch at any cost..

  And at the stupid man's bidding,he was here at the bus stand to receive Surjeet Singh's sister..Who was supposed to be here by  11 am..And it was already 12:30 pm..

 Baldev cursed himself again..

  Impatiently he called Surjeet Singh..

  After two minutes he nearly threw his phone in anger as the line was cut from the other side.

That scoundrel!He is even a bigger one than me!If he knew his sister isn't coming,from one hour ago,why didn't he inform me before?!!Baldev thought angrily,gritting his teeth and clenching his hand into tight fists..

  He stood up angrily ready to cross the road,as his jeep was parked on the other side.

  He had taken just one step when a bus suddenly came out of nowhere and did a hard break infront of him..

"SALA KAMINA!DOES ANYONE DRIVE LIKE THIS?!!"He shouted at the driver who seemed to be deaf to his shout.

 He folded his jacket sleeve up,and walked towards the bus door,all ready to get into a fight with the driver..

  He could not even step close to the narrow doorway,as a crowd of people seemed to be coming out of the bus,and also getting into the bus all at the same time..

"ARREY BAAP RE!MELA LAGA HAI KYA?!!I did not even know such a huge number of people lives in Pritampura!!!"He thought aloud in wonder,as he stood watching people squeezing and pushing themselves into and out of the bus..

  Finally when he thought,the doorway was empty enough for  him to confront the driver,the bus suddenly started moving with a jolt and a loud screech ..Just like the way it had stopped ..

  Baldev never even got the time to react,as simultaneous with the jolt of the bus,he heard a squeak from somewhere above him..

   And before he knew what was happening,a slight feminine form fell from the roof of the bus directly onto his lap,and a large suitcase which seemed like the fallen female body's luggage fell with a thud just beside him..

  Amazed,Baldev forgot to breathe for a few seconds..

  Finally he managed to breathe in,and looked down at the slight figure in his arms..

  A slight smirk on his chiseled male lips,thinking how God had been so generous to him today..He had not even asked for it,and He had blessed him with a whole living breathing  girl for him,and that also directly into his arms..

  As the thoughts passed through his brain,his eyes took in her attire in jeans and tops..He frowned at that..

Chalo!Koi nai!I will change her dressing style..He thought smugly,as his eyes moved up..

  The girl was still breathing heavily,shaken by the fall,he realised,taking in her fine feminine assets..

Hmmm..Not bad at all..Mujhe to chalega!He thought with a devilish grin,as his eyes reluctantly moved up to study her face..

  He frowned irritatedly again..The girl's face was completely covered by her wild open locks of dark hair..

  Just when he was at the end of his patience,God once again became merciful to him..

 A strong wind blew out of nowhere,and satisfied,he watched the soft dark locks of hair being blown away from her face..

  Slowly the tendrils fell away,and..And Baldev  forgot to breathe..

  A face like no other came to his view.. Creamy skin,soft lips,a cute pert nose,and eyelids that boasted the thickest and longest eyelashes he had ever seen..

  Baldev did not know what to think,and then when she opened her eyes..Baldev felt he was hit right on his solar plexus..

  She had the most mesmerizing eyes he had ever seen..

  His hand round her waist tightened unconsciously making the girl frown slightly..

 But Baldev was unaware of this..He was only aware of getting lost in the dark pools of her eyes..

  Minutes passed,and he stared on..

"Aise ghur kiu raha hai mainu?!Kaunsi planet se aya hai?!Ladki dekha  nahi pehle  kabhi?!Lagta hai jaise kha jayega mainu!Chadd!"

  Before Baldev could reply or react to that tart remark,she had squirmed herself free from his lap..

  Somehow Baldev could not make himself react immediately,the way he usually did..

  He watched dumbstruck as like a storm,the girl got her luggage,hailed a rickshaw,and got into it..

  And just as the rickshaw was about to pull away,she looked back at him..

"By the way thank you!For not letting my bones break.."She said softly,and then the rickshaw started moving,and she turned away..

   For sometime more Baldev stood still,until the rickshaw took a turn and vanished from his view..

  Finally he inhaled a long breath,and a devilish smile came on his lips..

"Iss baar to chadd dia tenu...Lekin agli baar..Tu jo koi bhi hai,Baldev se abh tujhe Bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta.."

  Muttering this Baldev crossed the road and got into his jeep..He had a new mission in his hand now..He chuckled to himself..His dark eyes twinkling with the mischief in them..

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Link to my VEERA worksEvil Smile:

Tehsina's VEERA Writng Index:Come,Live The Love..:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3938303&PID=102274391&#p102274391





INDEX:-


Chapter-1,page-5:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99642047&#p99642047

Chapter-2,page-11:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99781519&#p99781519

Chapter-3,page-15:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99821608&#p99821608

Chapter-4,page-21:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99866731&#p99866731

Chapter-5,page-27:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99922368&#p99922368

Chapter-6,page-31:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=99981692&#p99981692

Chapter-7,page-37:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=100074154&#p100074154

Chapter-8,page-42:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=100283763&#p100283763

Chapter-9,page-46:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=100374757&#p100374757

Chapter-10,page-50:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=100580787&#p100580787

Chapter-11,page-54:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=100793904&#p100793904

Chapter-12,page-60:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=101175397&#p101175397

Chapter-13,page-62:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=101219204&#p101219204

Chapter-14,page-65:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=101319959&#p101319959

Chapter-15,page-71:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=101604849&#p101604849

Chapter-16,page-76:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=101809905&#p101809905

Chapter-17,page-79:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=102281032&#p102281032

Chapter-18,page-83:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=102548192&#p102548192

Chapter-19,page-87:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3885007&PID=102940304&#p102940304







Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 05 April 2014 at 2:33pm

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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 2:14am | IP Logged
di aapne yaha story likha aur mujhe nahi bataya??? aur ye surjeet singh ki sister kaun he??? veera???ShockedShockedShocked so are you not taking other characters from the show???Smile next time pm me.. i would love to read your stories no matter which forum it is in!!!!Smile 

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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.rajeev

<font color="#FF0000"><font size="4">di aapne yaha story likha aur mujhe nahi bataya??? aur ye surjeet singh ki sister kaun he??? veera???ShockedShockedShocked so are you not taking other characters from the show???Smile next time pm me.. i would love to read your stories no matter which forum it is in!!!!Smile</font></font>


Hi sis! ! Sorry I didn't know you watch Veera too! Ok wil PM u! Nd Surjeet Singh is a.buddha! How can he be Veera's bro? Ok I jst strtd da story from wn Veera returns aftr growing up..Dis is 1st grownup Veeba meeting in my story. ALL da crctrs r same..I'Il add dis in my post to clear confusions..Oh nd Surjeet Singh's sis didn't come..Baldev learnd it on caln Surjeet..I sd it..Mayb u missed it sis! Love ya!

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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.rajeev

di aapne yaha story likha aur mujhe nahi bataya??? aur ye surjeet singh ki sister kaun he??? veera???ShockedShockedShocked so are you not taking other characters from the show???Smile next time pm me.. i would love to read your stories no matter which forum it is in!!!!Smile 


ya missed it i think!!! was a little busy for some days.. but am free from last 3 days.. i will comment on yor other ff's soon diSmile

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Plzz update soon can't wait for it

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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Nice dear beautiful start
Continue soon and do pm me

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Bkmrk...wohooo yr writing for VeeBaParty

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woow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are sooo good 
i am your fan 
first i usto read your junoon stories 
now this 
keep it up and plzzz updatte soon 

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