Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

ff hatred vs love (Page 5)

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Chapter 4 -another admirer
Thank you so much for all the comments.this is a very short update.not very important but just building up the story.

Jodha was moving back to her room when she saw a pair of eyes looking at her.she looked at him but could not recognise him.she had never seen him before.the person turned his eyes away from jodha as she turned towards him.jodha was disgusted and rushed to her room. 

Inside jodha's room

Jodha-is rajya mein kaise log rehte hain?mehamanon ke saath sahi vyavahar bhi nahi karna jaante.khair hume abhi apne kary par dhyan dena chahiye.shehensah jalaluddin  humari baat se krodhith to the parantu ye kaafi nahi hain.hume kuch aur karna hoga.

After having a hearty look of jodha,shareeffudin was in awe.he found jodha extremely pretty .although he had a wife,he could not love her.he had only married her to get a respectable post in the was all part of his plan.he was a shrewd and conniving person who could do anything to achieve his goals.after looking at jodha he intended to marry her.he decided to talk to jalal soon about his thought.he knew that jalal would never be able to say no as their religion permits them to do so.a smile crossed his face and he continued thinking about jodha
Jalal was greatly upset by jodha's rudeness.nobody could insult him not even his own mother then how could a mere princess do so.

Jalal-humari tauheen karkar aapne acha nahi kiya jodha.agar humara aapke  parivaar se sambandh na judne waala hota to hum aap ko kadi saza dete.
(Smiles)-aapki beizzatti ka jawab hum aapke tarike me denge

Jalal calls a servant and asks him to tell his ammi jaan that he wants to meet her.the message is conveyed and soon hameeda walks into jalals room

Hameeda-jalal tum humse kya baat karna chahte ho

Jalal-ammijaan hum ye chahte hain ki aaj ke jashn mein saare rajvanshi humara diya tohfa pehne.

Hameeda-jalal hum unhe ye kaise keh sakte to unki marzi hain.

Jalal-hum samajhte hain ammijaan par hume nahi lagta ki isse kisi ko koi aapati hoyegi.

Hameeda nodded and left jalals room.shr thought that perhaps jalal wants to see jodha in his favourite colour.
The message was conveyed and nobody had any objection to it.finally when jodha was told about it she sulked.

Jodha-koi insaan apne shehanshah hone ka aisa faida kaise utha sakta hain.iska yeh matlab hain ki hume kuch aur karna hoga.

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great..Thumbs Up
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wow cute story plz update soon
and plz pm me plz plz 
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great,jalal in he would do sumthing for sure

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Awesome update ClapClap plz plz plz continue soon 
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Chapter 5-how dare you
Jodha had an idea running in her head.she had to trouble jalal.she had to make him realise that she was no slave who would obey his rules.she picked up the green outfit and walked out of her chamber.
Jalal had just attended a session of diwaan-e-khaas and was returning to his palace alone when he spotted jodha.he was still angry with her but he could not overlook her beauty.she was wearing a baby pink dress with a big set of jewellery.

Jodha also saw jalal and thanked kanha as she wanted to see him but did not know how.she walked closer to jalal with the green outfit in her hand and then stopped.

A flame was burning in a stand next to her.she looked at jalal and smiled scornfully.she moved the outfit from her right hand,sliding it in front of jalals face and threw it in the fire.even before jalal could realise what had happened ,the outfit was devoured by the fire.

Jalal was full of wrath.he held jodha's wrist tightly,not letting jodha move.jodha tried to pull her hand away but jalals strong hold was not easy to break.jalal pulled jodha close to him and made her turn towards the flame.

Jalal(at top of his voice)-aapne humare diye tohfe ko aag mein phekne ki himakat kaise ki.apne aap ko kya samajhti hain aap.

Jodha(struggling with her hand)-hume jaane dijiye.humara hath chodiye.(she was scared but tried to keep her as calm as possible)

Jalal-na hi hum aapka haath chodenge na hi yahan se jaane ki ijazat denge.(screaming) hume hamare sawaal ka jawab chahiye.

By now jalals grip on her hand had grown stronger.he pressed it between his fingers mercilessly giving immense pain to jodha.

Jodha-aap hume chot pahucha rahe hain.(she screamed in pain)

Jalal-aur aap ke shehanshah ke sabr ko.

A tear fell out of jodha's eyes melting jalals heart in a minute.he could not hurt someone who looked so innocent.he let go of jodha's hand and saw it turn blood- like red.he instantaneously felt sorry.his anger abated but did not go.

Jodha-(with a strong and powerful voice)-yahi aata hai mugalon ke shehanshah ko.bal prayog.bahut gussa aa raha hain na ki humne aapka tohfa aag mein daal diya.sunna chahenge ki humne ye kyun kiya.hum aapko ye samjhana chahte hai ki hum aapke gulam nahi hai jo wahi kare jo aap chahe.hume jo pasand nahi aata hum wo nahi karte.

She did not care to listen to jalal and left.jalal stood there alone sulking in his anger.
Mahamanga,jalals badi ammi,witnessed the entire scene before her eyes.she saw jodha disparage jalal.she was beyond angry.

Mahamanga- resham tumne us rajvanshi rajkumari ki zabaan suni.jalal se aaj tak kisi ne aise baat nahi ki.

Resham-Ji wazir-e-Aliya.lagta hain kisi ka khauf  nahi hain.

Mahamanga-lagta hain apni tehzeeb Amer bhul aayi hain.jaanti nahi ki inki behen ka nigah hone waala hai Mughal khandaan mein.lagta hain ki maza chakhana hoga

Resham-aap kahi ye nigah to nahi tod dengi

Mahatmanga-nahi resham hum to kuch mazedaar karenge

Edited by gvsmu - 31 January 2014 at 3:06am

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awsme updates.
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