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Chapter2- first meet of akdha (part1)

Hey sorry for the mistakes that I made earlier.this chapter will focus on akdhas meeting. the first part takes place in Amer but the second one will surely have akdhas meet.

Everybody in Amer was preparing for their departure.they were to leave for Agra where all the ceremonies were to take place. Mainavati and sukunya were getting shivani ready when they saw jodha passing by.

Mainavati- jodha beta zara yahan to aana
Jodha- Ji maasa

Jodha entered shivanis room and walked up to her mother.

Mainavati- jodha tum Kahan jaa rahi thi.aur kya tumne Agra jaane ki tayaari kar li hain.
Jodha-wo maasa hum baapu sa se Milne ja rahe the aur ha humneAgra jane ke liye bhi taiyaari kar li hain.(in an irritated tone). Apne Hume yahan kyun Bulaya.kya aapko humse koi kaam hain
Sukunya- Kam to hain jiji.
Jodha- kya matlab
Sukunya(giggling)-aapka kam yeh hain ki Agra mein aap subko apna hasta chahera dikhaiyega na ki yeh chidchidhapan isi bahane ho sakta hain aapko bhi mrza hakim jaisa uttam var miljaye.

Shivani could not control her laughter after listening to this.this vexed jodha to the core. everyone was aware of jodhas disapproval for this wedding.
 
mainavati-ab bas bhi karo tum dono.
Jodha(in an angry tone)-aap logo ko yahan nahi kisi Mughal ke yahan paida hona chahiye tha.haan ham hain krodhith.maasa aap hi ne humein mugulon se nafrat karna sikhaya aur aap hi aaj apni beti ka hath ek Mughal ke hath me saup rahi hain.aisa kya jadoo kar diya hain mirza hakim ne aap sab par ki aap humari baat nahi sun rahe.
mainavati-jodha tumhare baapusa aur humne tumhe kabhi ek beti ki tarha nahi parantu ek bete ki tarah pala hain.har nidnay mein tumhari soch ko maana hain parantu aaj tum galat ho.mughalon ke prati tumhari ghrina aaj tumse galat faisla karwa rahi hain.hum jaante hain jodha ki hindu aur mughulo ke beech mein koi rishta asambhav hain paruntu mirza hakim shivani ke liye uttam var hain.guno se bhare aur shivani se adhik prem karte hain woh.aisa var dhoondh sakti ho jo apni patni se itna prem kare ki use apna dharm badalne ke liye bhi na kahe.aur to aur tum kaise bhul sakti ho ki shivani aaj unhi ke karan saans le rahi hain.itni kathinai se tumhare baapu sa ko sabhi hindu rajao ki sweekriti mili hain.tumhare ise na karna ab galat hain.
 
jodha very well knew that mirza hakim was the best groom for shivani.what she was afraid of was not mirza but his family.she had heard a lot about the Mughals and specially king jalaluddin Muhammad-mirzas brother-and his cruel rules,of how he could go to any extent to get what he wanted. How could then she let her sister marry mirza knowing that danger would embrace her as soon as she kept foot in the Mughal agra.
 
jodha(frustrated,to herself)-humari baat koi nahi manega.na baapusa,na maasa na koi aur.paruntu jo humne than li hain wo to hum kar ke hi rahege.agar hamare parivar wale iss rishte ke liye naa nahi karenge toh hum un mugalon ko naa karne par majboor kar denge.parantu kaise...
 
I WOULD POST THE SECOND PART FOR THIS CHAPTER SOON.THANK YOU:)


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Chapter2 part2
AGRA
All the preparations had been made in Agra for welcoming the guests.jalal had himself made sure about everything.after all,it was his brothers wedding.he had no objection to the wedding.he was extremely ecstatic

Jalal(happy,to himself)-aaj hum bahut khush hain.dekhte hi dekhte mirza itne bade hogaye ki unka ab nigah tah ho Gaya.khush naseeb hai ki unhe apne pasand ki ladki ke saath nigah karne ko mil raha hain.

He was interrupted by a servant who announced the arrival of jalals mother-hameeda bano.

Hameeda-aadab Amer se pegam aaya hain.nigah ki sabhi rasmo ko poora karne ke liye sabhi log wah se ravana ho gaye hain.kuch hi samay mein yahan tashrif laayege.hum tumhe bata nahi sakte ki hum kitne khush hain.

Jalal-ammijaan khush toh hum bhi bahut hain.un rajvanshiyon ke swagat mein hum koi kasar nahi chodenge.yeh nigah aaj tak ka sabse bada nigah honga.pure agre ko hum isme shamal karenge.hum khud  pure Agra ko nyota denge.

Hameeda-beshak.ab hume ijazat dijiye sabhi ke liye Nazarane taiyaar karane hain

Jalal-Adab
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 Meanwhile,everybody had started their journey from Amer.all the females were allotted palkis for the journey.they were on their way to Agra.everyone but jodha was excited.jodha(in her palki)started brainstorming ways to persuade the Mughals to cancel the wedding

Jodha(to herself)-he kanha ab tum hi koi rasta dekhao.aisa kya kare ki yeh vivaah toot jaye.mirza hakim itne ache purush hain.who jaldi naraz nahi hoyege.(after several moments of thinking)...
Parantu wo kroor raja jalaluddin toh zaroor naraz ho sakte hain.jitna humne unke bare mein suna hai wo apne aan samaan par koi ungli uthte nahi dekh sakte.aur jab hum aisa karenge Tab wo zaroor yeh rishta tod denge.

Jodha was very happy with her plan.she thanked kanha and finally took a breath of relief

A short distance away from Agra.everybody decided to rest.the palkis were kept down and raja Bharmal and his sons got down the horses.they were to wait for a while before continuing ahead.jodha came outside and decided to take a stroll.nobody was aware of jodha's disappearance.a little while later the journey commenced.jodha was not in her palki and nobody got to know about her.
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On the other hand jalal ordered atgah Sahab to make preparations for his visit to the local streets of Agra.he wanted to get done with it before the arrival of Mirza's in laws

Jalal left for the streets on a horse with quite less security.he had no reason to be afraid in his own city.

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Jodha was astonished to see the spot- which until a few moments ago was full of commotion-empty.she was not scared-fear did not run in her blood-but confused as to which way to go.she knew that she was near Agra and decided to follow her instinct by going straight.after walking a few miles she could see the city at a distance.


She finally entered a small street studded with markets selling there produce.she walked upto a shop and asked for directions to the palace.
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Jalal finished his work and started moving for the palace when at a distance he saw jodha.he could not see her face clearly as she was standing far and her back was turned towards him.but he could definitely make out that she was not a Mughal.instead of moving towards the palace,he turned his horse in the direction of jodha.as jalal went closer he could see her clearly.

By this time,jodha had asked for directions and turned around  facing jalal.she neither saw jalal nor anyone else .she continued walking ,satisfied with the help she got.

Jalal was stupefied to see her.her face,her beauty,her innocence sent him into another world.he could not believe his eyes.he could not believe that something as beautiful as jodha could ever exist.his gaze was fixed at jodha who did not notice this at all.she crossed jalal on her right without looking at him.jalal could see how tired she was as a frown crossed her face.he wanted to be lost with her in a world where nobody else could see them.He had never seen anyone more beautiful than her

Jalal(to himself)-ya allah hume bacha






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