Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

ff hatred vs love

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Hey guys.this is my first try at writing a story.i am not sure how it will be but do give it a read.I am drawing inspiration from the current shivani-mirza track

How can you hate somebody so much without knowing them?
how can you loose somebody in spite of loving them?
How can life conspire against you without your knowing it?
How can a single word make so much of a difference?
How can a single second turn everything around you?

Chapter1- the wedding 
The whole of Amer was lit up.raja Bharmal and rani mainavati were full of joy.their youngest daughter,shivani was about to get married.although none of his daughters was married,he simply could not say no to this proposal.mirza hakim- a well reputed king of India ,known for his bravery,valiance and intelligence had asked for shivanis hand.he had encountered her on one of his hunting expeditions.he had seen her playing with the water.he was curious to see her face as her back was
Turned towards him.suddenly he spotted a snake advancing towards her.she was completely oblivious of the snake as she was busy playing with the water.driven by his instinct,mirza ran to save shivani- who was on the verge of being bitten by the snake.he pushed the snake away and in the process fell on the ground,skinning his arm .Shivani turned around listening to the sound and saw mirza fallen next to her.althogh mirza was hurt he could not overlook shivanis beautiful face.she stood up and thought of mirza as an enemy.she picked up a log to hit him but stopped seeing mirza get up.he explained everything to her after which shivani apologised and thanked him.she offered him to come to the palace for treatment of his wound.while going back to the palace shivani took a closer look of mirza and found him soon as they reached the palace raja Bharmal received them and asked for Mirza's introduction.

Shivani: baapu sa yeh mirza hakim hain.inhone hamari jaan ek sap se bachai aur usi dauran inke hath mein chot lagayi.hum inhe yahan aushadhi karane Laye hain

Raja Bharmal thanked him and asked a servant to take him to the hakim.mirza was treated well and arrangements were made for his return.

Mirza could not forget shivanis beautiful face and narrated the entire incident to his brother jalal.

Mirza-  bhaijaan aaj us rajkumari ko dekhkar ham sab bhul gaye.hum unse nigah karna chahte hain.

Jalal- zaroor mirza ham kal hi ek pegam raja Bharmal ke pas bhijva denge

(I am not going to show the oppositions and other drama.i am straight away going to everybody's acceptance.the marriage is accepted by everybody willingly)

Everybody was happy with the wedding but jodha-raja bharmals eldest daughter.she could not see her sister marry a Mughal no matter how good he was. Mughals were supposed to be hated not made relationships with.

Jodha( angry)-baapu sa is rishte ko manzoori kaise deh sakte hain.mirza hakim hoyege ek ache insaan paruntu hum yeh nahi bhul sakte ki wo ek Mughal hain.shivani wahan kaise reh payegi.humein kuch toh karna hoga.

She was interrupted by her mother who asked her to get prepared to leave for Agra as all preparations were to take place there.jodha did not say anything and simply did what she was told.

Jodha-(in a victorious tone) ab ham dekhte hain ki yeh rishta kaise hota hain.
Little did she know that it was only the first of many relations with the Mughals 


Chapter 1(the wedding)-page 1
Chapter 2(first meet of akdha part 1 and 2)- page 2
Chapter 3 (I hate you part 1 and 2)-page 3
Chapter 3(part 2 continued)- page 4
Chapter 4(another admirer)-page 5
Chapter 5 (how dare you)-page 5
Chapter6 (revenge)-page 7
Chapter 7( the saviour)page 8
Chapter 8(misconstrued) page 9
Chapter 9(the jashn)page 11
Chapter 10(we are equal)page 11
Chapter 10(we are equal) part 2 page 13
Chapter 11 part 1(oh no) page 16
Chapter 11 part 2(oh no) page 17
Chapter 12 part 1(headed towards the same way) page 17
chapter 12(headed towards the same way) part 2 page 18
Chapter 13(profuse apology)part 1 page 18
Chapter 13(profuse apology)part 2 page 20
Chapter 14(surprised) page 21
Chapter 15(lovely words)page 22
Chapter 16(nasty act)page 24
Chapter 17(poor you)part 1 page 25
Chapter 17( poor you) part 2 page 26
Chapter 17(poor you)part 2 continued page 27
Chapter 18(your pain my pain)part 1 page 28
Chapter 18(your pain my pain)part 2 page 31
Chapter 19( an unexpected call)part 1 page 33
Chapter 19 ( an unexpected call) part 2 page 35
Chapter 20(the departure) page 37
Chapter 20(the departure)part 2 page 39
Chapter 21(the wedding)page 39
Chapter 22(teary eyes)page 41
Chapter 23(I am here)page 43
Chapter 24(another trip to Agra)page 44
Chapter 25(overwhelmed)page 46
Chapter 26(a change of heart)part 1 page 48
Chapter 26(a change of heart)part 2 page 49
Chapter 27(the beginning of love)part 1 page 49
Chapter 27(the beginning of love)part 2 page 51
Chapter 28(jalal is mine)part 1 page 52
Chapter 28( jalal is mine) part 2 page 54
Chapter 28(jalal is mine)cont page 55
Chapter 29(I won't let this happen)part 1 page 56
Chapter 29 (I won't let this happen)part 2 page 58
Chapter 30(I trust you)part 1 page 60
Chapter 30(I trust you)part 2 page 61
Chapter 30(part 2 continued)page 63
Chapter 31(I don't want this)part 1 page 64
Chapter 31(part 2)page 65
Chapter 32 (a grand invitation)part 1 page 69
Chapter 32(part 2)page 71
Chapter 33(a heavy heart)page 74
Chapter 34(welcome to amer)page 76
Chapter 35(I don't believe this)page 77 
Chapter 36(a stroll in amer)part 1 page 79

Edited by gvsmu - 20 March 2014 at 2:05am

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aanchal_c IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 1:36am | IP Logged
wow,i seriously love the concept..but jalal is shehenshah-e-hind right?

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Awesome start plz plz continue and pm me when u do 
sweet_diksha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:25am | IP Logged
interesting. PM me next time
NJAPA_Addict IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:27am | IP Logged

Lovely concept!Clap Continue soon!Big smileEmbarrassed

Edited by PrincessNancy - 14 January 2014 at 2:29am
--Aashi-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Sounds interesting ...continue soon

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Pm me if u can

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 3:28am | IP Logged
and ya welcum to IF

Edited by ...Arshaya... - 14 January 2014 at 3:26am

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