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The King And The Nightingale/Last part pg 84/Epilogue pg 91

IPK007 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 8:29pm | IP Logged

Maharaja Arnav Singh and Mohini's love story...Retold...


Rewar, Madhya Pradesh

A gleaming, dirt road meandered through the face of the moonlit plain, gently sloping from the rocky foothills of Vindyas Mountains down to the sea of twinkling orbs of lights, that signaled the presence of human habitation. A lone figure, barefoot and wearing tattered clothes walked uphill with weary, heavy steps. His overgrown hair caught the night breeze and flapped wildly even as drops of blood trickled from his weather beaten, leathery forehead and ran down his face, unchecked. 

A smile played on his lips as he talked to himself, with an incongruent air of unconcern that perhaps only a mad man can manage. Ridiculed, stoned and banished from civil society, he trudged up the windswept path towards the foothills, not knowing where his feet were taking him.

Without warning, a silver fork of lightning ripped through the black velvety sky to reveal the burnished red sand stone facade of the Anand Vilas Palace as it perched proudly on a rocky cliff. Slowing down, he raised his eyes and gazed at a dark, desolate wing of the palace, while the wind howled around him.

"Mohi...Mohi...", the disconsolate wind whispered to him, causing unexplained tears to run down his suddenly stricken face. His body trembled because the whole air around him seemed to be shuddering with umimaginable grief and each gust of the wind tortured with pain. He had chanced upon a phenomenon that kept people away from the palace at nights.

A century old incessant echo, a century old yearning , a century old love...

Hey Friends,

Yes, I'm back..Embarrassed

I'm reposting a story that was a part of one of my FFs, in the form of a separate SS. I just felt I hadn't done full justice to this story when I'd first posted it. This is all written already so I will be able to update quite frequently...every other day or so..:)

Hope you like it,




I won't beable to PM regularly for this story..maybe once every 2/3 updates or are welcome to visit my profile for updates...:)

 there will be a few changes in this story ...esp with names and stuff..

Edited by IPK007 - 14 January 2014 at 10:23pm

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arshi-pooja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 8:29pm | IP Logged
Res !!!
Omgg...jenny..*rubs eyes* i dreaming again...

a SS frm you !! Wow...
Bring it on dear ...the title reminds me of a saying
'Ra ja ki jaan Tote me..'...a kings life caged in it seems its nightangle... Big smile
btw...i m thinkin its on lines of Arnav - mohini ...
Baaki comment on reading prologue !! Wink

cant believe i m first... Tongue

Edited by arshi-pooja - 11 January 2014 at 8:31pm

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V3Od Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
OMG, a new story by you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the prologue or chapter 1Day Dreaming

Is this your come back storyEmbarrassed

I really hope soBig smile

Missed your work so badlySmile

Welcome backParty

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AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Edit 1 : 

If there's something I know about you with absolute certainty, it is your love for writing and I'm thrilled it continues to be great priority for you...otherwise you wouldn't be here despite all those things surrounding you, screaming to be sorted outLOL

Awaiting this tale Hug

Edit 2 : 

Disturbed elements used to portray the distraught protagonist was really stunning and goose bumpy. There's something when the nature behaves one with man...whether in happiness or in pain. The pathos in your writing made me want to reach out to that person help him overcome his pain. 

Loved it Jen :)

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 January 2014 at 6:43am

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Nimie207 Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
Haye rabb..I am so happy...Hop this wll ha a happywala ending...waiting for the story to unfold soon...

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Dee_J IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
What I found Big smile

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MsDroolKanthan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Faint . Thud . Daad

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