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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 4:10am | IP Logged

Hi.. Though I have been a silent reader of this forum for almost an year now, this is my first post on the forum. So let me first introduce myself, I am Manishi.  Even after almost an year since Parichay went off air, I still keep watching the old episodes and keep imagining some other better angles to the story line. Having read almost every ff, ss and os on the forum, I thought of giving vent to my imagination too through this ff. This is my first attempt at writing. Please do let me know how is  it...


Part 1  -> Page 1
Part 2  -> Page 3
Part 3  -> Page 4
Part 4  -> Page 5
Part 5  -> Page 7
Part 6  -> Page 10
Part 7  -> Page 12
Part 8  -> Page 14
Part 9  -> Page 16
Part 10 -> Page 17


Edited by SaTi4ever - 11 May 2014 at 5:42am

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Part 1


Kunal: (keeping his bag on the table) mera kurta kahan hai?? Tumhein pata 

hai na ki mujhe khud se kuchh nahi milta, toh nikaal k nahi rakh sakti... 

aur meri chai.. Chalo ab jaldi se utho aur mere liye adrak waali chai le aao..

When there was no response Kunal went near Siddhi who was lying on the bed.

Kunal: (slightly raising his voice) leti kya hui ho?? Utho aur mere liye chai banao...


Siddhi was lying lifeless on the bed with absolutely no movement.  Seeing 

her this way Kunal's eyes welled up with tears. Just then Seema kept her 

hand on Kunal's shoulder. He quickly hid his tears and turned towards her.

Seema: (while giving Kunal a glass of water) Meeting kaisi rahi bhaiya??

Kunal: Theek rahi. Aaj doctor aaye hongein naa.. Kya kaha Doctor ne???

Seema: Wahi jo hamesha Siddhi ke checkup ke baad kehte hain.. Ki humein 

patience rakhni hogi.. Par ab toh patience bhi khatm hoti jaa rahi hai. 

6 mahine se zyaada ho gaye hain. (almost crying) Siddhi theek toh ho 

jaayegi naa?

Kunal: (looking at Siddhi, with determination in his voice) Aise kaise theek 

nahi hogi Siddhi. Ise theek hona hi padega, bilkul pehle ki tarah. Aur doctor 

ne kaha tha na ki Siddhi humaari saari baatein sun sakti hai... Agar woh apni 

Seema bhabhi ko aise pareshan sunegi toh use achha lagega kya??


After a pause Kunal took his kurta from his chair and went out to change. 

Seema too convinced herself of Kunal's words and went towards the kitchen 

to serve the dinner to the family. Soon after Seema called Kunal for dinner but 

he declined as he was not hungry and went to his room saying he had a lot 

of work to finish before the final hearing of his case which was to take place 

a week later. But he was hardly able to concentrate. Though he was trying 

to keep himself busy in his files but all the painful memories were coming 

back to him. 

On the day of the last hearing of Richa's case Siddhi had went to the court 

despite being shot. Even Rohit had given his statement in favour of them 

and the happy decision was just coming their way when Siddhi suddenly 

collapsed in the court and was rushed by Kunal to the hospital. On diagnosing 

her the doctors concluded that due to heavy loss of blood, Siddhi was in 

Coma. Kunal was completely broken. He blamed himself for Siddhi's condition 

and wanted her to become all right at once. "Keep Patience" the Doctor 

had said. Yes, he had a lot of patience to give assurance to the family. But 

for himself?? 185 days and he was still counting...


He sat beside Siddhi on the chair and started talking to her which was 

almost a routine for him now.

Kunal: Do you know Siddhi, after a week I have a very important hearing 

against Thakral. Yes, he will lose very badly and this would be my first blow 

to him because he is also equally responsible for whatever happened to you 

just like his kids who are rotting in jail now for doing this to you. I have fought 

about 25 cases in these 6 months but this one is different. This is more 

personal rather than professional. I would give their dues to everybody who 

are responsible for this state of yours. But what about my punishment Siddhi. 

I am your biggest culprit. Get up and punish me Siddhi, punish me...


Kunal never knew when he slept on the chair itself blaming himself for Siddhi's 

condition...


To be continued



Edited by SaTi4ever - 09 January 2014 at 11:22pm

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Thanks fr ur effort in writing
Its awesome..beautiful..
Bt start kiya hai..toh khatam zarur krna..beech me mat chodna..plz
Aur apna usual dialog..sb theek krdo plzz;-) LOL
Do pm me fr next update..nd update soon.. Tongue

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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Great to see a new ff! Please do continue and this time with a bigger font if possible. So, you started off from rape case ending.. nice! Looking forward to reading the story. Good to see you are making Kunal take revenge on Thakral soon!

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Great start Clap
Plz do continue ur FF..would love to read further Embarrassed

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Nice start n grt work.. do continue ur work.. missing sinal very badly Cry ... pls dont stop in mid... thanks 4 ur FF.. Smile Smile

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Great start ... loved reading new FF...

Plz continue...

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Good start  ! looking foward to reading your version  in the coming times .
Goodluck !

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