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VM FF || DIL MIL GAYE #6 | CH 92 N 93 on PG 141 (Page 46)

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Nice update. Manvi is still confused whether to go to work or not. I felt Kasak is becoming more demanding. Is she feeling insecure?  Rishabh and Manvi's mom conversation were nice. I felt bad for him. Continue soon.

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
nice update ..finally manvi ko realise to hua that she has spoilt kasak now she has to manage that little naughty demanding girl wisely ...cute update ...update next part soon Big smile

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Posted: 06 March 2014 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Superb update Naina!!! :D Little Kasak and her demands :p.. I liked how you are portraying her character.. Very realistic.. Kids these days are very demanding and quite stubborn.. Finally Manvi is realizing that to some extent she has spoiled Kasak.. It will be interesting to see how Virman will deal with her from now on.. They can't give in to her every demand.. Things are going to change for all of them.. Loved Virman-Kasak part.. Now what's happening in Rishabh's life?? He seems different.. He started caring about Madhu.. Liked the conversation between Mitali and Rishabh.. Very well written.. Loved it.. Waiting for the next.. Take care :))

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Posted: 06 March 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged

Hey Naina that what yet again a mindblowing update.. i tou loved it ree...Clap

Starting scene was really emotional. i loved how Mitali concoled Rishabh.. Finally Rishabh is giving a try to his relationship.. hope he goes successfull...Big smile
 
Hmmm now let see what Maanvi will do.. either office or Kasu.. I too felt strange like virat when she said so.. Really she thought that way? first time hmmm..
 
The way u protrayed Kasak's childhood memories till now in the form of a thinking to maanvi.. that was really speechless..Clap
 
Loved the convo of Maanvi n Kasu.. I really had a strange feeling when maanvi again said n reacted so weired.. so strange,.. have a little confusion hope it clears soon by u..Tongue
 
I want next update sooner..
 
P.S: I didnt get any PM.. Cry
 
Sanjana...


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Posted: 09 March 2014 at 5:07am | IP Logged
******** TEASER ********
 
 
 
manvi : we are not doing a mistake... are we...???
virat : huh...??? mistake...???
manvi : this baby...
virat : manvi... what are you saying...???
manvi : are you sure we should go on with this pregnancy...???
 
 
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the next chapter will be pmed to the ones who liked the update or the ones who commented...
 
 
 

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Posted: 09 March 2014 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Nice teaser..
Why is Manvi thinking like that???
Update soon..

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Posted: 09 March 2014 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie2244

Hey Naina that what yet again a mindblowing update.. i tou loved it ree...Clap  thank u soo much sanjana... glad u did swthrt...

Starting scene was really emotional. i loved how Mitali concoled Rishabh.. Finally Rishabh is giving a try to his relationship.. hope he goes successfull...Big smile hope so... fingers crossed... 
 
Hmmm now let see what Maanvi will do.. either office or Kasu.. I too felt strange like virat when she said so.. Really she thought that way? first time hmmm.. yeah first time... may be pregnancy hormones driving her crazy LOL
 
The way u protrayed Kasak's childhood memories till now in the form of a thinking to maanvi.. that was really speechless..Clap  thanks...
 
Loved the convo of Maanvi n Kasu.. I really had a strange feeling when maanvi again said n reacted so weired.. so strange,.. have a little confusion hope it clears soon by u..Tongue  just stay tuned Wink
 
I want next update sooner..
 
P.S: I didnt get any PM.. Cry i didnt pm anyone this time...
 
Sanjana...
 
 
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Posted: 09 March 2014 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

Superb update Naina!!! :D thank u soo much meera... Big smile Little Kasak and her demands :p.. I liked how you are portraying her character.. Very realistic.. Kids these days are very demanding and quite stubborn.. yeah i know... i see my nephews n neices... all are same... Embarrassed Finally Manvi is realizing that to some extent she has spoiled Kasak.. It will be interesting to see how Virman will deal with her from now on.. They can't give in to her every demand.. Things are going to change for all of them.. for sure... Loved Virman-Kasak part.. Now what's happening in Rishabh's life?? He seems different.. He started caring about Madhu.. thats a little secret... shhh Wink Liked the conversation between Mitali and Rishabh.. Very well written.. Loved it.. Waiting for the next.. Take care :)) thanks again...  
 
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