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Fate-Mate Thread 13 Chapter 37 (Page 27)

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
Wow u have updated after very long time... I can't believe ur back! I really missed u..
Loved the way how beautifully.u have written their feelings.. and at last arnav realised his feelings for khushi..
Totally Loved the update dear!

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
awesome awesome awesome...
brilliantly written...
welcome back... loved d update...
nxt part asap...
n thnx fr pm...

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
welcome back
loved d update
continue soon

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aleezay Senior Member
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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
sadkey jaooonnn u updated :*
OMG wat afab upate ... loved each part ... ooo it has been long ago u updated ... aand im an idiot u were updating 300 within this time and y the hell i didnt know that Y Y Y im so mad at myself  and let it be here the discussion is abt arnav and khushi ... hayeee i so so sooo love them u just depicteed it sooo beautifullly they are really connected heart to heart thats what i call love soon they will realize it too ;)
KEEP ROCKING KC :D

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Fantabulous update. Was waiting eagerly and  at one point in time lost hope that you will update. I love love love to the power infinity your characters gloomy and tsunami. I could not believe my eyes when I saw chapter 37. Still I opened and I cannot tell how happy I am. And the update totally worth the wait.( looong though) and my thank you to you from bottom of my heart.

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Every mrng I just open IF from my mobile to get out of my sleepy mood..this mrng is the best one I ever had...Seeing a pm frm u..I was literally praying inside my head...plz..let it be the update...
Finally after finding out that it was an update...I was so happy & screamed out loud...my mom was confused &gave me those weird looks.. LOL
Awesome update di... Clap ...loved it...
First the nightmare..I was really feeling the pain while I was reading it...khushi's mixed feelings towards arnav r justified...So she reached arnav 's home...when she joked about their wedding..I started dreaming of their wedding...
They both r made for eachother..their love & concern towards eachother never ends...
Hope khushi doesn't leave the job...
Arnav!!loved the way he realized his feelings towards her..&
hugged her &thought she was his girl
Totally in love with the update..I'm gonna surely read it again after my exams..
Thanks for the update...A big hug from me. Hug
U made my day...
Love gloomy&tsunami...I never feel they r characters from a story..They have bcom a part of my life.&many others...
Saare waitmates ke liye
big hug...I don't know if ppl go through any thread to read the comments...but I loved reading every post in this thread...
I never knew this one is going to be the longest comment I have ever written.

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome...superb update

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ipkknd_gbdfan Senior Member
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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
First of all, I am super happy that you are back!
Now, for my opinion of this chapter, please keep in mind that I love your writing, but I'm being honest here...

Ch 37 was good, but it didn't make me "feel" stuff...I mean, you described the emotions, but not in your usual manner...I don't have any specifics, but your previous chapters had me jumping with joy, or laughing, or rolling my eyes at Arshi's banters, etc. but this chapter didn't have that same effect on me. 

Before, when you mentioned stuff about Khushi's dad and all the time they spent together, I got sad and even cried a little bit...but now, when you described how everyone was leaving Khushi alone, it didn't have that effect on me - I was merely a reader.

I also felt that some of the emotions you described were repetitive and cliched...which is usually not the case in your writing...

I'm sorry for my incoherent thoughts, but I don't know what exactly I dislike...I just don't feel that this chapter was up to your standards. It was a good chapter, but something was missing - it didn't seem like YOU wrote it...

Also, I don't mean to hurt your feelings or degrade you as a writer...but if you do feel that, please forgive me.



Edited by ipkknd_gbdfan - 28 January 2014 at 8:35pm

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