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Raesha FF: Finding Home thread 2 link added.. (Page 144)

Chulbuli_Annu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 December 2014 at 1:18am | IP Logged
iss se to behtar rehta k aisha akele reh leti
ariya to usse aur preshan kr rhe hai
sam ko kitna gussa ane lga hai 
arjun ko danta then riya ko to sahi fatkar lagai LOLLOLLOL ETF ko bnd karo aur arjun k sath chuttiya mano LOL
finally sam ko discharge mil hi gya...
ahaan ek jaan bujh kr medicine lena bhul jata hai dusre se dant khane k liye Wink
finally arjun aisha decided to tell sam about his illness...
cllifhanger huh...
jab baat krne ki baat aayi to to be cont...Angry

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EshaalYousufzai IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 December 2014 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update..
Loved it very very much..
Superbly written..
But Sameer's illness making me uneasy..
Hope he get well soon..
Plliisshh con soonz..

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savali Senior Member

Joined: 02 August 2014
Posts: 250

Posted: 08 December 2014 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Awesome,Beautiful update.
Ariya dusro ke ghar aise koi jhagdta hai kya?
Love their movements,bechari ayesha aram ke bajay dono ko chup kara rahi hai.
Finally sam ko discharge milne wala hai.
Sam ke symptoms ariya pe bhari pad rahe hai.
Aisha blushing haye kash sam vaha hota.
Finally he is back.
Dono ek dusre ko takte rehte hai accha hai.
Sam ke symptoms well described.
Finally arisha decided to tell sam abt his illness.
Ye kam bhi ayesha ko hi karna hoga.
Last scene was beautiful.
Thnks for pm n cont soon.
IshitaRocks015 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 May 2011
Posts: 5698

Posted: 11 December 2014 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Chapter 29--
Steel plates thrashingOuch thats indeed the worst alarmDead
Ye Arjun aur Riya bhi na,... kitchen me jung ka maidan bana diaOuch
Bechari Aisha.. already bimar hai...inke wajah se aur zyada bimar ho jayegi..
Ria ne ate hi Aisha ke ghar ki saaf safai kardiLOLLOL
Ria knife leke...Arey chaku hai... aram seDead
Aisha Ria ka khana khake suicideLOLLOLLOL
Aisha ne sahi bola... usko DEKHNE aye hai ya EK DUSRE KOLOL
Ria ki choice distortedLOLLOL Arjun you are one amongst her choicesLOL
Aisha missing SameerEmbarrassedOuch
Aisha is worried about sameer.. yes.. telling him about his disease was a challenge in his reaction would be unpredictableConfused
Sammy coming homeBig smile
Sameer pagal ho gaya hai?? doctor ka license cancel karwayega?? wo v nind me rakhne k liye uskoLOLLOL hey bhagwan!!
Ria ko bhi daantLOLLOL
Aisha bhi paglaying sameer wapas ane ke excitement me!!
Aisha bechari..wait karte karte so gayiSleepySleepy
heheh.. even sameer is scared of Ria's dishes..usko hospital me rehna haiLOL
Aisha's slipClap kash thoda aur boldeti
Omg.. i think vision problem hi hai... warna usdin glass bhi nehi dikha uskoConfused
Aisha has to tell about the illness alone...Ouch
Aisha is so worried that , getting distracted she could have burnt herself...

Violence kyu machayenge... wo to humlog jama kar rahe haiLOL ek hi baar me violent honge..LOL
update soon didiyaWinkLOL

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MriduB IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4851

Posted: 15 December 2014 at 3:08am | IP Logged
Sorry for commenting so late! :(
Very busy lately, don't get much time to check updates!
Awesome update as usual Rimi :)
haye, Sam :( I toh feel very bad for him! :(
Last part...haye...jhappi... :D
Cont. soon!

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Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 December 2014 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Ariya ne toh ghar ko jung ka maidan bana diya hai...LOLLOLLOL
Riya ki nazar gadbad hai...Aisha beaware...ROFLROFLROFL
Seeing Ariya Aisha remembered her days with Sameer in the house...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Aisha accepted her feelings but now she is scared...OuchOuchOuch
Sameer was excited to get back home but Arjun lateness due to doctor made him angry...LOLLOLLOL
Although it was kind of funny scene but it shows the affect of disorder on Sameer's patience level...OuchOuchOuch
Liked this side of Aisha ...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun is better cook than Riya...ShockedShockedShocked LOLLOLLOL
Sameer ko hospital jana better lag raha hai bajaye ke Ariya ke saath rehne ke...ROFLROFLROFL
Aisha ko company chahiye Ariya se deal karne ke liye...ya phir kuch aur chahiye...WinkWinkWink
Changes in Sameer are scary...OuchOuchOuch
They decided to tell everything to Sameer together but now Aisha alone has to do it...Big smileBig smileBig smile
How much Aisha is nervous & scared can be seen in her actions...OuchOuchOuch
Last scene was Big smileBig smileBig smile

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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rimi_invisible IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 December 2014 at 11:31pm | IP Logged

@nikita : thanks you so much dear...glad you liked...keep reading..Smile

@FLOREY : i am sorry for missing you while pming..glad you attacked..keep


@Gold: thanks itself is complicated goldie..nothing is a piece of

cake..keep reading..pata chal jayega..Embarrassed

@rajeevsonai,@Zubiya,@areesha,  : thanksSmile

@Manali : thanks manali...glad you liked...keep reading..sab pata chal jayega..Big smile

@nainaSm : thanks dear...glad you liked..keep reading..Smile

@rvss : thnaks dear...glad you liked..stay know more..Big smile

@ariyabestfan : thanks dear..glad you liked it..stay tuned..Smile

@skrafty : thanks skrafty, glad you liked..keep reading pata to chal hi jayega..Embarrassed

@aditi: thanks dear..keep reading..Smile

@annu: thanks annu...gussa...itna gussa  sehat ke liye acha nehi hain annu

darling..patience rakho...keep reading..Dead

@esha : thanks darling..glad you liked..keep reading..Smile

@savali : thanks dear...gladyou liked the update...keep reading..sab pata chal

jayega..Big smile

@ishi : thanks ishi...aisha bolegi...apne weapons wapas kardo...kyu ki iske baad

na tumlog mujhe mar sakte ho na zinda rakh sakte ho...stay tuned..LOLWink

@mridu : ohh please dont say that...even i am always late..
glad you liked the update...thanks dear..Big smile

@sneha : thanks gabbar...glad you coming to the next part...
tumhare guns kaha gaye?? kho gaye kya?? TongueWink

Edited by rimi_invisible - 20 December 2014 at 12:11am

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rimi_invisible IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 December 2014 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Replied to everyone in the post above..please do give a look..Smile

Pretty early this time?? yeah...Here i come with the next part of the story...Big smile

A complete raeshalous update for all the raesha lovers...hope you like it..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Chapter 30

Sameer left Aisha near the sofa and stepped back, just to be pulled back by her. She wrapped her arms around his neck hugging him tight to herself. Sameer felt the sudden tug and her body slowly loosen her weight on him. He stiffened back with the sudden action. His hands fell by his sides, while he felt Aisha rest her head at the crook of his neck. He was too surprised to even react and kept numb. He could feel her heart beating against his chest and gradually all his resolves started breaking down. The feminine scent in her hair and the beautiful aura of her cheeks rubbing on his neck and grown stubble made him weaker and he closed his eyes, inhaling it sharply. His hands moved around her back, wrapping her closer in his arms.

'Aisha,' he whispered softly in her ears but there wasn't any response in return.

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha

Rahe na faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Tere qareeb main ho sakoon

De de tu apni razaa

Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon

Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main

Hai dil ki ye khwaahish

Ki sun le guzaarish

Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe

Aisha was just resting herself on him. His fingers swiftly touched her back and moved up in the hair, entangling them with her dense build curls. It was all such a strange feel for him. The feel of her embraced arms around him, brought a sudden calmness in him yet her chin rubbing on his chest and her fingers playing in his hair were taking away all his peace. He was feeling restless and disturbed. How much he tried to control himself, his body was slowly giving up on all his controls. His body had started building up the heated passion and urge for her. He heard her gasp on his skin while his lips started brushing on her earlobes.  

Tujh se mohabbat hui

Hai meri hai bas ye khata

Tujh se main door rahoon

Yeh mujh ko gawaara kahaan...

Aisha was scared at the sudden accident she had landed into unintentionally. Arjun's absence on this crucial evening has disturbed her for a long time. Sameer was recovering and the thought that the truth would spoil the little process made her extremely restless. She was lost in her own disturbed state when she touched the heated pan accidentally. So, when the heated pan fell down she just fell numb with shock. Her limbs didn't move and her mind went completely blank. She didn't know how to react to the whole mess when Sam called out to her, forwarding his hand for help. She couldn't even realize when her arm had spontaneously stretched and held onto his fingers. His fingers curved around her cold fingers and the haunted feel of losing him dawned upon her again. She kept herself close to him as they walked outside to the living room. She had almost calmed down when his grip loosened and she felt her world would tousle without him. Shedding all her hesitations and inhibitions in the next moments, she pulled him back to her, hiding herself into his protective arms. Soon, his warm embrace and the soothing closeness gave her peace and she started feeling contended.

Aisha felt his fingers fiddle with her hair and moved her chin slightly up to touch the skin on his neck. Her eyes fluttered and her lips gasped instantly as his lips touched at her earlobes, giving her a strange sensation across her body. She opened her eyes slowly and looked into the uncontrolled passion in his intense orbs. His hands touched slowly through her naked arms and she could feel the heat spread through her covered frame. She closed her eyes and breathed in sharply, as her lips parted in submission. Sameer looked at her flushed cheeks and stepped back reluctantly, though still holding onto her arms. Aisha felt the distance between them and looked up instantly, her forehead forming faint, thin furrows. Her eyes showed disappointment.

Main tere saath mein hi rahoon

Chhodo ye saara jahaan

Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon

Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main

Hai dil ki ye khwaahish

Ki sun le guzaarish

Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe woh ho ho...

'Dinner?' he whispered and pointed to the kitchen, a playful smirk still on his lips.

Aisha took her hands back from his shoulder and turned away, extremely embarrassed. She bit her lips recounting the intense moments few minutes back and smiled. Sameer couldn't comprehend her reaction and smacked himself to have lost his control again. He remembered the last time when this had happened and he had almost lost her. The sudden flashbacks of the moments long gone and then their separation scared him and he stepped back a few steps from her unknowingly.

Aisha heard his footsteps and mistook it to be his growing closeness towards her again. Though her heart has willingly accepting the new advancement and her body was missing the warmth of his skin, she was too embarrassed to even face him. She could feel her body shiver and hurried inside the kitchen, just to slip on the oil that was now spread all around the floor.

Sameer was lost in his own thoughts when he heard a loud thud, which was followed by a shrill cry. He turned back and found Aisha missing from there and he understood what it could be all about. He ran into the kitchen and found her sitting on the floor, holding her oil smudged legs. Aisha looked up at him. Her hair was disheveled with a painful pout on her face. Sameer forgot everything he had been thinking of and sat beside her.

'kaha lagi?' he asked, somehow trying to control his bursting laughter,

'tumhe mazaa aa raha hain?' aisha glared at him,

'haan..nehi matlab...main...' Sameer bit his tongue and burst out laughing,

'Sameer!!' aisha shouted angrily and tried to hit him, but held onto her legs which was paining,

'Aisha, kya hua?' Sameer now bent down towards her, showing his concern.

Aisha showed him her leg, which was red and swollen now. He held out his hand to help her get up. Aisha took his support and finally stood up carefully trying to balance herself on her oily feet. She took a step to move but again slipped and held onto Sameer's waist. Sameer held her quickly and scooped her up in his arms. He took her up to his room and carefully placed her on the bed. She had tried to protest when he entered his room and not hers, but it all went into deaf ears, so she stopped.

'ab batao kaha dard ho raha hain?' Sameer asked, sitting beside her with the pain relieving ointment in his hand,

'tum laga doge?' aisha asked him, looking at the clutched tube,

'haan..nehi...matlab tum hi laga lo, ye lo...' Sameer stammered and forwarded the medicine to her, his face showed his hidden anger.

Aisha smiled and took the medicine from him. His red face was making the scene even more funny for her. She kept the ointment on the bed and Sameer looked at her surprised.

'rakh kyu diya lagao? dard bar jayega, waise hi abhi tabiyat thik hui hain tumhari,' he yelled back immediately,

'nehi...main baad mein laga lungi,' she replied back,

'tumhe problem kya hain?'

'Sameer, main...'

'I know. Main yaha hu, isliye nei laga pa rahi, fine main chale jata hu...tum rest lo,' he said and stood up,

'nehi Sameer, ruko...' Aisha held his hand and he looked back, anger pretty visible in his face.

'baitho, please...' she requested and he sat beside her again,

'tumhe problem hogi Aisha. main neeche jata hu, aur dinner bhi order kar deta hu,' he told her,

'mujhe kuch problem nehi hogi...mujhe tumse kuch important baat karna hain, please..' she requested.

Sameer took the side of the bed beside her and looked at her. His heart was giving all sorts of negative signs. Somewhere in his mind he was sure, she would speak to him about their separation or has she already started with the legal proceedings? He didn't want that to happen but didn't want to bar her happiness too. There wasn't any reason to capture her in this house with him anymore. He signed and composed himself. He took his palm from her hold and turned away. He didn't want to show her his real vulnerable self now. He turned his face emotionless and voiced out to her.

'kya baat hain Aisha?' he asked her in a calm and stern tone.

Aisha was in a strange dilemma now. She didn't know where to start and how to get the whole truth out without exciting or disturbing him too much. She excused herself to freshen up and Sameer didn't reject. He too understood she needed some time to get the things sorted out for herself. He waited in his room while Aisha walked out towards hers.

It was a long impatient wait for both of them. Aisha was rehearsing the lines and cursing Arjun to have dropped her in such a situation while Sameer was preparing himself to acknowledge their separation wisely. He didn't want to hurt Aisha, nor did he want the separation to happen. He started deciding on all points he could stop it for the one last time. He just hoped it wasn't too late already.

Aisha entered the room to find Sameer nodding and speaking to himself. She tried to concentrate on the little murmurs that left his lips, while he vigorously nodded his head speaking to the invisible figure in front, but couldn't make out anything of the content. A chuckle left her mouth, but taking it to be one of the symptoms of the disease she kept silent and walked beside him. Sameer was still so busy talking in himself that he almost jumped up, when Aisha tapped his shoulder. He looked at her shocked and ashamed but quickly made up the loss. He moved aside and left her the place on the bed for her to take a seat.

'kya baat karna tha Aisha?' Sameer asked her, now feeling impatient at her continuous silence.

'Sameer, wo tum abhi...main...mera matlab...' Aisha started to speak, but forgot everything that she had prepared all this while. She fell silent again, cursing herself when Sameer interfered in between.

'I can understand Aisha. Tumhare liya yaha thora zyada hi problem ho raha hain. Have you already applied, ya fir main...' Sameer looked away while he uttered the words,

'Applied matlab? Kis application ki baat kar rahe ho?' she frowned at him,

'tum jis bare main baat kar rahi ho aisha, usse bare main. You are right, hume ab divorce ke liye apply kar dena chahiye, waise bhi last week ek saal pura ho chukka hain, we wont have much problem getting it. Aur tum bhi kitne din aise yaha mere saath...' Sameer spoke all at once and then looked at Aisha, defeated. He couldn't stop anything. Everything between them would soon come to an end.

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Edited by rimi_invisible - 20 December 2014 at 12:21am

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