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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 2:53am | IP Logged

By Evening there was a suicide case reported and the victim being a well known politician the case was transferred to ETF. ETF got busy with the case led by their current acting chief, ACP Arjun. It isn't new for Arjun, he had lead the team earlier in absence of Sameer, when he was busy or injured earlier, but the whole team knew, there was something different today.

Though Arjun tried to keep a calm and professional indifference towards their scared and skeptical gazes, he too knew he wouldn't be able to mask his frustration for long. Already he had hurt Riya in the afternoon, without any fault of hers and now when he was regretting, she has started avoiding him, except for case related discussions.

The political pressure on the case, urgency from the higher authority, the media rebuking the case and ETF's involvement in it and his conversation with the Commissioner earlier during the day, was taking on his patience and level of aggression. Within hours ETF team was working silently inside the ETF office trying to solve the case as soon as possible, while their present chief kept a vulture's eye on them and the evidences. None even dared to look at the raged Tiger, while he was looking around for the prey, the Culprit.


Sameer was sitting on the bed smiling at the old man, sweeping the floor and giving him his personal insight about the ETF team and also the strange stories he had heard about their jobs. Sameer laughed while the illiterate old man gave out stories about ETF team getting special divine powers from the almighty by which they could easily sense the real criminal and then the fearless ways they solve out cases inside haunted mansions, encountering with real lady ghosts and other creepy creatures.

Sameer had once thought of rectifying his myths but then the aged man seemed happy with the incredible thoughts and stories and even took the attempt to bless them for their generous work for the society. He kept nodding or speaking a word here and there or smiling at his words. The man finished his job and walked out of the room, handing him the TV remote, which was giving out some regional program, which was helping to encourage the sweeper to clean the room faster. Sameer took the remote and looked at the door close while the man walked out.

He changed the loud instrument being played on the present channel and looked into the recent news. The reader was then giving out sports news about Arjun's once favourite football team, who had won the game. He looked into the score of the previous matches. The team had lost the first but won the rest of the two. He checked onto his own favourite team. They have lost the last game, while won the earlier one. He memorized it for the discussion with Arjun later.

The sports details ended and another news came up. It was about a case of a local MLA's sudden suicide. The case was presently handled by the ETF team lead by ACP Rawte. He increased the volume and leaned forward to concentrate on it. He could watch Arjun walk out of the minister's house through the press cameras. The media weren't allowed to step inside the crime scene so he couldn't get a glimpse of that.

The media was continuously criticizing the working style of ETF team when Arjun had kept his complete silent towards them. The continuous criticizing words were agitating Sameer. Arjun's face showed, he was disturbed and angry, might be coz of the high profile case. Arjun wasn't too fond of protocols and orders. He saw the commissioner confront the media and give a neutral statement. Nothing about the evidences or the progress in the case was informed.

Sameer was feeling restless now. The continuous criticism about his team and work was irritating him. He sat straight looking into the screen. The same news about the case was being shown repeatedly. He fisted his palm and hit it on the bed. The helpless silence by the commissioner and the ETF, was suddenly increasing his aggression. He knew and had faced it often, but now when he was watching his team go through the same phase, he was getting frustrated. He knew it always happened like this. The media would sensationalize their silence and they would have to helplessly wait for the case to get solved. But it had never pained him in the neck before. May be the failure to reach them at this moment was contributing more to his excited state.

He felt his fingers tremble and he couldn't hold the fisted palm longer. He released the fingers and lay the hand on the bed. The saline tube from his left hand had been finally removed, but the point on the hand, where it was injected was still quite painful. His head was feeling heavy and dizzy. He had a mild pain from the back of his neck to his chest. He was sweating and his heart was beating fast, making him feel sick.

He leaned back on the stack of pillows and closed his eyes. The news channel was still playing the news of the MLA's death. He could hear them speak about Arjun and then ETF. Then the news changed and started giving highlights about some hospital fire and so on. He couldn't hear any longer. He was feeling sick. He rubbed his temple and moved his head to the side, slowly sliding on the bed. He didn't know, how long he remained awake, coz when he opened his eyes next, babasa was standing beside the bed, looking at him.


'Sameer,' babasa called him, touching his arm softly,

'babasa!!' he replied, trying to sit up,

Babasa helped him to sit. Sam asked him to sit beside him on the bed and he did.

'Masa nehi ayi?' Sam asked,

'ayi hain, wo Ayesha se milne gayi hain. Uske parents Ayesha se baat karna chahte the, isliye Ayesha ka phone usko dene gayi hain, bas ati hi hogi,' babasa replied,

'hmm,' Sam hummed, he wasn't feeling well yet, he was weak,

'kya hua Sameer, tired lag rahe ho? Tabiyat thik nehi lag rahi?' babasa asked,

'nehi wo, pata nehi, I am feeling thirsty, babasa wo pani..' sam told him, and immediately babasa brought the glass of water to him,

His lips were dry and his throat parched. He gulped down the full glass of water and asked for some more. Babasa poured from the jug beside and he gulped it down too. He returned the glass to babasa and leaned back on the pillow trying to smile at him,

'kya hua Sameer? Mein doctor ko bulau?' babasa panicked, touching his cold palms,

'nehi babasa, mein thik hu, wo kafi din se yahi hu to, thora ajeeb lag raha hain, shayad ye sick atmosphere ke liye,' he explained,

'jaldi apko discharge kar denge, bas kuch din aur. Mujhe ek baat batana tha Sameer,'

'kya baat hain babasa?'

'kuch urgent kam aa gaya hain, mujhe wapas jana parega, tumhare masa yahi rukhengi, mein jaldi wapas ane ki koshish karunga,bas kuch din..' babasa told him,

'babasa ap akele kaise rahenge? Ap masa ko bhi le jayiye, hum thik hain, aur arjun riya sab haina. Ap itna stress mat lijiye, hum manage kar lenge,' Sameer spoke up,

'Ap hume bhagana kyu chahte hain Sameer?' masa asked from the door,

'masa!!' both the men turned to the door. Masa walked in silently.

'Tumhara chehera kyu uthra hua hain? tabiyat thik hain na?' she asked him with a concerned touch at his chest,

'nehi ma, mein thik hu, ab ap pareshan hona band karo,' Sameer replied irritated,

'pareshan nehi hogi sameer? Hospital mein ho kabse, iss halat mein, ab bhi pareshan na hu? Aur tum kya kehe rahe the? Mein chali jaungi to tum log dono injured pati patni kaise samhalo ge sab kuch?' she retorted back,

'masa. Babasa akele kaise rahenge? Ap jao,' Sameer told her irritated,

'ill manage, masa yahi rehegi, tum log manage nehi kar paoge beta,' babasa replied,

'hum kar lenge na babasa, please ab koi baat nehi, masa, ap aur babasa, jaiye, kam khatam kijiye, aur aram se baad mein ayiye, hum samhal lenge, ab mein thik ho gaya hu, aur Ayesha bhi..' sam replied,

'tum itne chid kyu rahe ho Sameer? Hum tumhari bhalayi ke liye hi kehe rahe hain na?' masa asked him,

'mein chid nehi raha hu, bas apko samjha raha hu, please aplog itna pareshan maat huiye, I am fine now,' Sameer replied back,

'thik hain beta, hum kal subah ja rahe hain, jaldi ane ki koshish karenge,' babasa replied, nodding at a reluctant angry masa.

Both left after some more words with Sameer and his recovery stages. The nurse came back to check and dress on his wounds as usual. Everything done properly he had his meal and slept for the night. He was tired and the sedatives were even more affective.


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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Res /unres 
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itna isliye ki bahut time baad aayi LOL coming to update ******

loved it dear Rimi 
awesome update  
I just loved sasha convo (aankho ankho main) LOLWink
& every one teasing the injured couple  
but loved their concern for each other    
I think something big has happened  
otherwise arjun would not have reacted like this  Ouch
Kya sameer ko ETF se hata rahe hai?  OuchConfused
& in all this he hurted riya too Ouch
sameer is sending his mom & dad ab kya hoga 
how will they deal the situation 
thanks for the PM  
Continue soon  Smile

Edited by GOLD.A - 21 September 2014 at 3:27am

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rajeeviansonai IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 3:44am | IP Logged
rimi onek din por update dile.
Kichu bolar nai di.farafari update.arjun eto stressed kano?bechari riya sudhu sudhu arjun riyar upor rag dekhalo.
Sammy k taratari thik kore dao.
Plz di update soon

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Areesha566 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 4:01am | IP Logged
nice chapter

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_Tabassum_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Loved Sam-Aisha's silent love... n everyone teasing them...
Why Arjun is so didtrubed...??? Sam is getting restless...
Cont sooon
Waiting for next part
Thankf for the PM

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Harisree001 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Superb update!
Aisha Sameer meeting was beautiful..
Arjun ne tou kuch btaya ne k what the commissioner said.. even um scared for sameer's future now...

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Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
From the time Aisha entered into the room Sameer's eyes didn't left her even for a second...LOLLOLLOL
LOL...Riya ne Aisha ko blush karne par majboor kar diya...LOLLOLLOL
LOL...Sameer's eyes are betraying him...LOLLOLLOL
Anakhon hi Ankhaon mein Raesha ne ek dusre ko scold kiya aur ek dusre ko assure bhi...LOLLOLLOL
They didn't not exchange any word yet they talked shamelessly...LOLLOLLOL
LOL...Riya was enjoying the silence while for Arjun it was getting intolerable...LOLLOLLOL
LOL...Riya gave glare to Arjun for his disturbance...LOLLOLLOL
Arjun nani si jaan hai toh baki koi toh abhi tak iss duniya mein hi nahi aaya...ROFLROFLROFL
Riya also want attention of Arjun like Sameer gave to Aisha...LOLLOLLOL
Now Sameer is feeling relax...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Arjun want Black Coffee instead of Cutting Tea...OuchOuchOuch
What has happened at commissioner office???ConfusedConfusedConfused
I m sure it is related to the job of Sameer...OuchOuchOuch
Arjun was hell angry & irritated & he vent it out on Riya...OuchOuchOuch
Politician's suicide case...OuchOuchOuch
Now Riya is avoiding Arjun...OuchOuchOuch
Old man said that ETF has some super natural powers...ROFLROFLROFL
Sameer didn't correct him bcoz he was happy with that...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Sameer was feeling restless bcoz of news...OuchOuchOuch
I guess his illness is now showing in his behavior...OuchOuchOuch
Sameer made masa forcefully go with babasa...OuchOuchOuch

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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