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Anny90 Goldie

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Posted: 30 August 2014 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Rimi di update do na!!
kab kar rahe ho update??ConfusedConfusedConfused

Radhika Shah IF-Sizzlerz
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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 30 August 2014 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Great update..
MriduB IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 August 2014 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anny90

Originally posted by MriduB

Yes ji, why not...Hum toh Sameer ko na jaane kaisi kaisi situations mein imagine karte hain..

apna dhyan yahan wahan bhatkane mat do..WinkWink
agar rimi di maan gai na tumhari bat ko to tum kahin gum ho jaogi..LOLLOL (gum hai kisi ke pyar mein dil subah sham..)
fir tumhara serch warrant bhi sam se hi nikalwana padega..ROFL

Itna handsome chehra jab saamne aa jaata hai na chahte huye bhi vaise waale khayalat mind mein aane lag jaate hain Blushing Aur mein dreamland mein kho jaati hunn...
Mein kya...sabhi kho jaate hain! Embarrassed

Arey toh karo na gum mujhe...issi bahane Sam mujhe dhundhne aayega! Haye...

MriduB IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 August 2014 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anny90

Rimi di update do na!!
kab kar rahe ho update??ConfusedConfusedConfused

Yup yup!

Hum aapke saath hai! Update do bhai update do! Big smile

Rimi ji, updatewa mangta! Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 September 2014 at 2:30am | IP Logged
awesome updates

very emotional part 
sam is suffering from brain injuryShocked
how will arjun told about this to sam n aisha ???
ab kya hoga ???


finally sam realized his feeling for aisha Big smile
both are dying to meet each other 
arjun - yahi scene abhi dekh kar aa raha huROFL
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon

sorry late comment  


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Posted: 05 September 2014 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 05 September 2014 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Update soon

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Posted: 21 September 2014 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Hi everyone...

Yes its after ages i am giving an update..but again i am early as this was suppose to get delayed by another 20 days..TongueLOL

So not wasting more time...thank you everyone, for their special appreciations to this story of mine..had those comments never came...this story would have never existed..

thank you so keep loving me like this..
Sorry couldnt reply to anyone..might be next time..filhal the next update..

its a small insight into the next level of this story...hope i would not confuse a lot of heads with this..

do leave your queries if any..ill try to revert back as soon as i can..Embarrassed

Chapter 26

Arjun walked in pushing the wheel chair. The wheel chair rolled on the ground and stopped beside sameer's bed with Aisha facing him straight. Sameer hadn't expected her and the sight itself brought in some strange mixed emotions in his heart. He heard babasa call her and ask about her health and aisha fumble in her reply, awkwardly alternating her gaze between the bed and others. Riya too walked beside her and held onto her shoulder, muttering softly into her ears,

'kya baat hain ayesha? Itne mahine alag rahe aur ab ek pal bhi sabar nehi hota? Hayeee kaisa ye pyar hain?' dramatically placing her palm on her chest,

'Riya!!' Aisha glared at her, her cheeks burning crimson, while her gaze moved to him for a lone moment.

Sameer was trying hard to look away from the blushing lady but his eyes seemed to have stopped taking his own orders. He could feel riya walk beside Arjun and chuckle poking him to look at the shameless duo. He could feel Masa silently look away at babasa, who gave an assuring smile at her. But nothing, not even the embarrassment from their taunting gazes, could help him to force his gaze to tear away from her. His gaze was fixed at her blushing face which still held a sly bright smile. Aisha too could feel his intense gaze on her and looked back at him.

If eyes could really speak, everyone would have heard the conversation going on between the two excited pairs. Sameer's eyes gradually moved toward her head and shoulder which were covered with heavy bandages. He frowned at her, just to be assured back with a blink of her regretful eyes and calm smile. His gaze calmed down, mercilessly scolding her for her reckless nature. Aisha gaze turned sober, lips curving at him while she silently tried to convince him but the very next moment the smile faded and her eyes showed anger as she looked at his palm, which still had the saline tube inserted into it. His gaze moved to his hands and back to her, giving her a sheepish innocent smile, assuring her his presence beside her. She looked away ashamed yet contended while he enjoyed her embarrassment.

Days and months of longing were finally trolling to an end inside this hospital room. Both had somewhere silently conveyed their loneliness and compassion they had realized in the absence of the other. They could easily watch the fear of losing the other in each other's eyes but accepting them in front of the other was still distant away. Both were shy and arrogant at the same time. Sameer was scared and apprehensive about the decision to accept his feelings for her, while Aisha was waiting impatiently for Sameer to take the first step.

The pin drop silent inside the room and especially between the injured yet furious couple was now getting intolerable for others, specially Arjun. Arjun had to reach ETF early due to Sameer's absence, but was already late. Moreover, since he had taken the responsibility of Aisha's visit to Sameer, he didn't want to leave in between. He waited for another few moments but again no one spoke. Sameer's lips still bore that playful smile, while aisha was giving away those uneasy glares. He looked towards riya, but she was almost mesmerized at their sight and enjoying the play in front of her.

Arjun cleared his throat gaining others attention and Sameer and aisha looked away, avoiding to look at anyone while Riya glared at Arjun, for the sudden interference.

'mujhe laga tum log kam se kam ek dusre ka haal puchoge, lekin last 17 minute mein nehi pucha, pucha kya ek baat bhi nehi kaha. mujhe nehi lagta aj baat kar paaoge, so, aisha tumne agar Sameer se mil liya hain to wapas chale? Mujhe ETF bhi jana hain..Already late ho chukka hu, bohot kam hain, thora sa rehem kar do..iss nanhi si jaan pe..' he spoke up giving sarcastic look at both,

Aisha gave a brief look at Sameer and looked at the floor, biting her lower lip, while her face flushed. Sameer glared at Arjun who replied back with a crooked smirk. Aisha looked up at masa and bid them and looked back at Sameer, who nodded at her and muttered softly, almost inaudible, but the small room made it loud enough for the others to hear them,

'Take care..'

Ayesha smiled and nodded her head but before she could open her mouth to reply back, Riya came hopping behind her and held onto the arm of her wheel chair,

'Dekho Arjun, Majnu ne bola, wo bhi take care,' aye hain, Sameer tumhe Ayesha ki kitni fikar hain, kash Arjun meri itni fikar karta,' Riya said pouting at Arjun,

'kaho to tumhe ETF se nikal ke yaha admit kardu? Fir roz ake tumhe take care' keheke jaunga,' Arjun replied back,

'haan kardo, kamse kam tumhe meri yaad to ayegi, iseme to kabhi nehi ati,' she replied with another smirk,

Arjun walked beside her in a sarcastic grin but before he could speak Masa spoilt their fun time.

'Riya, Arjun, ye dono abhi bhi puri tarah se thik nehi hain, they need rest. Arjun tum Ayesha ko cabin mein chor ke aao, aur riya ab hume bhi chalna chahiye, visiting hours almost khatam ho chuke hain,' she ordered them,

'haan, mein bhi wahi kehe raha tha,' Arjun fumbled back and pushed riya aside to hold onto the wheel chair, earning an angry look from her. Ayesha bid everyone and Arjun took her back to her own cabin.

Sameer kept looking at their retreating back, while Arjun laughed and spoke to Ayesha while taking her through the door. The door closed and she vanished away from his sight. But he was feeling calm now. Aisha was safe and close to him. The extreme fear and tension he was feeling from the day he had gained senses has suddenly subsidized and he was now feeling comfortable.

His eyes looked away from the closed glass door, when masa touched his shoulder and bid him before leaving, again asking him about his health. He smiled at her and she left with babasa and riya.


Riya, Shree and chotu were sitting around the glass table at their refreshment area, with their empty lunch plates, when Arjun barged in the office visibly agitated. He found the three smiling and talking among themselves and walked towards them. He stood at a distance and barked out,

'listen, I want a strong, black coffee without sugar, immediately at my cabin,' he walked away instantly not even sparing a glance back at anyone while the three kept looking at his back.

'black coffee? kuch to choot raha hain riya,' Chotu mumbled at her,

'haan, Arjun commissioner sir se milne gaye the, kuch urgent meeting tha..I guess waha pe hi kuch hua hain,' Riya replied back, looking at his retreating back,

'hua to zaroor hain, warna achanak cutting chai se black coffee? chal ab jaldi kam pe chalte hain, warna fir aa jayega samjhane, waise hi mood thik nehi hain,' Shree spoke up,

'haan, mein coffee le jati hu, dekhti hu agar kuch pata chale?' riya told them and all three departed for their respective stations.


Riya took the steaming mug from the coffee machine and walked through the corridor towards Arjun's cabin. She peeped in through the glass walls and found Arjun sitting on his chair, leaning on the right arm of the chair, rubbing his temple. His forehead had deep furrows and it showed well, he was disturbed.

She had seen him disturbed from the time The Commissioner had called him for the meeting, in the morning. He had not spoken to her since then. She wasn't sure what had disturbed him so much, but somewhere she felt it was about Sameer and it could be related to his illness that the doctor detected that day.

She could feel a tension build up inside her. She couldn't dare to think, what the department was planning for Sameer now, which had disturbed Arjun to this extend. She couldn't think more, her impatience was giving in, she quickly walked ahead and knocked on the door.

A few seconds passed by but Arjun didn't call her in. She turned the knob and pushed the door slightly. Arjun was sitting there still as she had already witnessed. She walked inside closing the door behind her and stood at his table, facing him. Arjun had heard her close the door and walk close to him. He straightened and picked up a random file to fake himself busy. He heard Riya keep the coffee mug on the table and call out to him,

'Arjun, tumhari coffee,'

Arjun nodded at her and got back to his file. His ignorance was scaring Riya now. She took a step closer to the desk and held onto it,

'Arjun commissioner sir ne kyu bulaya tha?' she asked him again,

'kuch important kam tha riya,' Arjun replied sounding quiet irritated,

'Sameer ke bare mein?...kuch kaha kya?' she probed him,

Arjun instantly banged the file on the table and stood up, pushing his chair. Riya was astonished at his behavior and took a step back.

'Tumhe aur koi kam nehi hain Riya, saradin, sirf gossip ke liye topic chahiye tumhe. Whats wrong with you? Tumhe yaad bhi hain tum ek ETF officer ho, aur humare pass abhi bohot kam baki hain, so if you can please get back to your work and stop disturbing me?' Arjun shouted at her giving her heated glares,

Riya was more surprised than hurt at his words initially. Arjun wasn't a man to shout and yell, without any suitable reason. He would taunt or make sarcastic comments and even scold his junior officers including her, but this shout was different and it showed there was something seriously wrong, which was disturbing him immensely. Riya was getting more curious at his attitude of keeping things hidden from her. She tried to reason with him but it turned out like a piercing cold sword. He kept shouting and yelling at her. She didn't know what had suddenly turned so sour between them when she tried to speak about Sameer.

Finally it started hurting her and she protested,

'Arjun tum chilla kyu rahe ho? Mein to bas tumse puch rahi thi, ki..' she told him, frustrated at his sudden rage towards her,

'Ki Sameer ETF ka chief hain ya nehi? Hain aur get back to your work, right now,' Arjun yelled at her,   

'Arjun, tum aise kyu baat kar raho meine ek simple si baat...'

'ek aur baat and you can go back home right now. Just leave, get out of here riya,' Arjun spoke between his gritted teeth and turned his back at her.

Riya was genuinely angry now. She had just come to show her concern, but Arjun had turned everything too sour. He was a hot headed person and infuriated at small things, but this was something bit too much. She kept her silence and walked away. Arjun heard her footsteps move out of the door and sat back on his chair. He was regretting to have lost his control on her.


wait scroll down for rest..Big smile

Edited by rimi_invisible - 21 September 2014 at 2:50am

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