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-INDEX-

character sketch
pg 1
pt 1 pg 1

pt 2 pg 2

teaser pg 6

part 3 page 8

part 4 page 12

teaser pg 16

Part 5 page 20 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3876474&TPN=20

part 6 pg 25

Edited by Gmsk.. - 18 September 2015 at 9:17am

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-CHARACTERS REVIEW-

MAAN SINGH KHURANA - he is the heir of the khurana group of industries , he is young dynamic but a cold hearted 'DEMON'.,
if he loves someone he does with extent of insanity aur nafrat bhi usi shiddat se karta hai...
Currently MD of KC
25 year old

GEETANJALI SINGHANIA - she is the youngest princess of khurana's , 20 year old she has one inspiration her heart beats for him
she doesnt knw what is love bt she knew that it will be the changing phase of her life... In last year of her graduation...

SHAGUN SINGHANIA - 23 year old beautiful but selfish
she love money , fame but the tag of a princess and her motives destroyed her

VIKRANT SINGH KHURANA - maan's brother he shares the same birthday as maan opposite nature but looks to die...
He is a big name in fashion industry vikrant khurana meant success...
World famous designer...


-INTRODUCTION-

this is a story of revenge where love plays its role at the level of insanity...

Innocence
hatred
pagalpan
aur
ek sach

kya wo pyar ek dil ka koi khwab tha
ya
uski sisakti aanhaton ki goong

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readers review awaited

Edited by maanlovesgeet - 07 January 2014 at 9:11am

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Part 1

she cried and moved backwards , her eyes were red from crying she was holding herself in a protective manner , he tried to come close to her but she shouted he wanted to help her , as she was moving he feared she may hurt herself ...
Vikrant : geet sambhal ke dont move
you will hurt yourself ruko geet
but she just denied and moved her hands were badly hurt cuts everywhere
the next moment the mirror broke as she moved hitting her already injured hand
geet : mere pass mat ana
humne kaha na hum chale jaaenge
hume kuch mat karna please hum...hum kisi se kuch nai bolenge..

Vikrant was not understanding her outburst , neither she was allowing him near her aur khud ko dekh nai rahi thi..

Geet : suna nai jao
she cried and put her bloodied hands on her face her hiccups were increasing after sometime she opened her eyes and looked around she had expected vikrant to leave bt he was still there
she again shouted in immense pain and fear

kaha na chale jao..

He left the room in order to get someone..

AFTER FIFTEEN MINUTES

two hands holded her from waist and took her in his arms...
He made her lie on the bed and removed her hands which were on his chest she was holding him just like holding her life he made her lie removing that grip it was not gentle but a harsh touch she moaned and cried in pain..

Hum kisi ko nai bataenge , hame jaane do ...
Hume jane do

she moaned but he didnt melt he was not allowed his feelings those emotions had turned him cold..

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short part
bt will continue if got positive response


Edited by maanlovesgeet - 07 January 2014 at 9:35am

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