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Arshi FF - Burning Rage THREAD 2. UPD THREAD 3 PG 127 (Page 58)

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayabhi

I was so surprised wen khushi asked the difference between both times to arnav. I guess she os too innocent to think before saying anything. I hope she doesnt have to suffer too much.
Im also goad that he wud let her go to college.


KHUSHI IS INNOCENT N LIKE ANY TEENAGER CURIOUS TO SO SHE HAD TO STOP THE QUESTIONS BUGGING HER SOS HE ASKED TO THE ONLY OPTION SHE HAD.
LIKE ALLL TEENAGER SHE IS CURIOUS N CONFUSED MOST OF THE TIME.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MDTharun

khushi is so innocent , she is not understanding half of his actions and words . However ASR is in no mood to enlighten his innocent wife . He is always bullying her , this is the first time khushi had some better conversation with her so called hubby & breakfast . ASR is intending to register their marriage & admit her in reputed college . Will he really leave her freely to college , I guess no , she is a caged bird . It is his way or highway . Is Payal day dreaming? that she can come and take her sister from the mighty ASR , khushi has to Act wise with ASR , one wrong step she will be punished brutally .
loved it


ASR IS NOT A MAN OF MUCH WORDS.
PAYAL MAY SOUND FOOLISH BUT AREN'T WE ALL SOMETIME IRRATIONAL WHEN OUR LOVED ONCE R IN TROUBLE.
KHUSHI HAD ACCEPTED THAT RUNNING FROM ASR WILL CREATE MORE PROBLEM FOR HER SO AT THE MOMENT SHE IS AGREEING TO ALL HIS TERMS.
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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima_FM

oh this chapter 12 i literally loved it 
may be arnav didn't behave so brutally with her 
though there is some emotion left inside which he had concealed inside in his heart.
khushi will understand aranv if he allows himself to open with her
or khushi will find out herself, 
but i am so keen to know about Arnav's past
when you r going to do that
opps sorry for asking this question!! 
but i can't help it, 
i am just so so eager to know his past and khushi's reaction
oh!! that is big comment i am commented
is it me lolLOL 


HIS PAST WILL BE REVEALED ON TIME AS IT PLAYS A CRUCIAL ROLL IN THE WAY HE IS.
SOMETIME U DON'T NEED TO OPEN UP TO SOME ONE  STILL THEY UNDERSTAND U EVEN IF U R A CLOSED BOOK.
KHUSHI MAY BE CHILDISH BUT SHE HAS NEVER NEEDED TO BEHAVE MATURE AS SHE AHD ALWAYS SOMEONE TO LOOK AFTER HER SO WHEN TIME COMES WE ALL HV TO GROW UP DON'T WE.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saakhi01

Awesome update...
Khushi's behaviour was soo cute n innocent...
Anyone other than ASR would hv been in splits seeing her... LOL
Cont soon... Thanks for d pm...


WHEN YOU HAVE LONG FORGOTTEN HOW T LIVE LIFE N U DON'T FEEL ANY FEELINGS OR EMOTIONS HW CAN U ENJOY LIFE WHICH IS JUST A BURDEN.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arnie-girl

Oh..! This ASR is really a worst nightmare!
Khushi's mind trying to deal with the sudden drastic change in her simple life..
The pain she is going through is so horrible that it can make anyone broken!!
I am really very much impressed by her fighting back spirit!!
When life become your worst nightmare its not easy to stand firm forget behave normally!
I like it how she is still herself & innocent as always
She is scared of him without loosing herself!
Arnav well its not easy to say anything about him he is making her sign papers to legalize their marriage atleast he is letting her go collage..
It was funny khushi's irretation with aman calling her mam & her sulking for not talking while having breakfast ..Only khushi can be like this LOL
Arnav is going to use paayal as her weekness!
But wonder who is the new entry??

Superb update!! I love your works sooo much Smile

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LIFE IS NEVER A FAIRY TALE N WHEN U R HIT BY A NIGHTMARE U FEEL LIKE U CAN NEVER COME OUT OF IT BUT REAL COURAGE IS WHEN U MAKE THE OTHER PERSON THINK THAT WHATEVER BAD THEY DO U WILL FIND THAT SILVER LIGHTENING IN IT TO.
ITS EASY TO BE BROKEN AND SHATTERED BUT IT TAKES LOT OF COURAGE TO HOLD URSELF HIGH EVEN IN THAT SITUATION.
MY KHUHSI IS A FIGHTER SHE WILL NEVER LOSE HER SELF. 
NEW PERSON WILL BE REVEALED IN NEXT CHPT.
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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by daljeet

Okay this is kind of shocking. 

I felt bad for Payal, how much guilty she will feel for what happened with Kushi.


In this update it seems ASR is enjoying the physical part of this relationship and is not immune like u mentioned in the last chapter. Is it a good sign? 


Who is this man? His father or his jeejaji?


I liked her innocence, I totally understand what u r trying to say.


There are a lot of typo errors even in the note you gave!



PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT BOTH THE SISTERS R FIGHTERS.
KHUSHI SI A TEENAGER U CANT EXPECT HER TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE.
TYPO ERROR AS I DNT GET TIME TO PROOF READ U HV NO IDEA HW I TRY N ASSEMBLE MY WORK .Ouch, WITH COLLEGE N JOB ITS DAM TIRING BUT U CAN TELL ME THE ERROR N I WILL TRY TO CORRECT IT.Smile

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ipkkndeternity

Ok superb update dear thank god nothing dark from arnav side 2day ... khushi is saved for awhile
say she had not understood his riddle she was a normal girl not some spy to understand hidden meaning...***...hahahahaha i was lyk getting married 2 asr u hav to be a spy...coz its not in de hands of normal ppl 2 deal wth ASR...****


Khushi was shocked how did he knew this but she thought the beast has a share ears ****** yea its lyk kan yea bluetooth... he can hear evrythg**

Damn wat is his problem why cant he be a little friendly old arrogant hag kahika...aww payal and khushi's convo
she lied 2 save payal

and dat Ass of a man keeps kissing her argh

ok who is bak again ...why is ASR so damn furious
thx for de pm continue soon
but after reading dis story i wonder do men lyk ASR exist or is it jst in ff's
although dere ar worse men dan ASR in dis world



U CAN'T EXPECT BEAST TO BE A PRINCE CHARMING
HE WILL NEVER BE FRIENDLY
PAYAL WILL BE SHATTERED BUT SHE IS FIGHTER THEY BOTH HAD BEEN EACH OTHERS STRENGTH FOR LONG AND ALWAYS WILL BE.
WHO IS BACK WILL BE DISCLOSED IN NEXT CHAPTER.

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Posted: 09 June 2014 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rana5

This chapter was much better. At least Khushi was not tortured again. I hope Arnav softens up a bit, I like him tough but not with Khushi. She should be the only one who can calm him. She is too immature though, how will Khushi ever understand him??? 


The mystery continues, who is the man and who was the woman?? I am going to guess that he has a horrible step brother and the woman who is ill is the wife?  Or Arnav's mum and dad????






YUP AND NO A DID RIGHT A DID WRONG ABT WHO N WHOWink
ASR IS NOT AT ALL A SOFTY KIND OF A PERSON NOR HE WILL EVER BE
KHUSHI MAYBE IMMATURE BUT SHE HAD OTHERS TO TAKE CARE OF HER SO NEVER NEEDED TO BE BUT WITH TIME PEOPLE DO CHANGE.

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