ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish- - Page 4

Himani

@Infinities

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Baadmein fursat mein karungi teri tareef :P

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vaishali

@-Vaish-

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

kabhi nhi milegi tereko iske liye fursat... -_-

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

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Yogini

@yogini64

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

this is amazing!!! 😃

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... 😊

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... 😔

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... 😛

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... 😳

Fantastically described... good work... 👏

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Every damn word had an impact on me..

Every word depicted so much yet beautified the entire plot..

Clear yet blur images formed..

Transitions like a movie scrolled in front of the eyes..

I love the way you play with words yet so aptly put up...

All I can say is.. It isn't good..

But it's outstanding..

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome os loved it so much

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Himani

@Infinities

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

Thank uuu Vaishnavi 🤗

Glad u liked my work ^_^

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Himani

@Infinities

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

[QUOTE=yogini64] this is amazing!!! 😃

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... 😊

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... 😔

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... 😛

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... 😳

Fantastically described... good work... 👏 [/QUOTE

I alwayss look forward to ur comments 😛

Thanks yaar Yogini 🤗

Yes thats was the idea behind it but I kept it a bit unclear ...a sort of open end😆

😃

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Himani

@Infinities

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha
awsum OS

Thanks :)

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Himani

@Infinities

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Every damn word had an impact on me..

Every word depicted so much yet beautified the entire plot..

Clear yet blur images formed..

Transitions like a movie scrolled in front of the eyes..

I love the way you play with words yet so aptly put up...

All I can say is.. It isn't good..

But it's outstanding..

Shenz I am on cloud nine after reading ur review ^___^

It feels super awesome to know you liked the way I penned the drabble 😃

Thank you so very much🤗

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