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OS - Blooming out of my past - Last part updated (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruhakhan

awesome os 
loved it 
the way astha told abt her fear dat was totally heart breaking watever she said was absolutely true 
nd shlok at last made her realise dat she still feels for him 
thanks for this wonderful os

Thank you so much for analyzing it so beautifully. Yes that's right it is a matter of trust between Astha and Shlok.

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajani_sid

good one..enjoyed reading it...especially liked Aastha's characterisation. If someone breaks your trust this is what would happen...

Absoutely buddy! And Shlok better regain her trust back to get forward in their life.
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Geeta.R

This was absolutely beautiful... Him trying to make amends :-) 
Would be lovely to see this in the show 
Well done :-) 

Thank you Smile and going by what's happening in the show I very much doubt it!
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samyuktha0411

My views may b different from d others but this is my opinion...After watching yesterday's n today's episode can't even imagine Shlok n Astha being together again!!!

Yeah thats what any normal person would feel but you know these soaps...very soon everything will be sorted n they will get back and we will be like grrrLOL

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anusha16

Operation getback started... step one successful...
plan B in progress ... will get to see in action soon...

Ryt di???LOL

Plan B ah? What's that? R u trying to put words into my brain? Wink
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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 9:43am | IP Logged
wow grt update
the way u depicted astha's fear was superb i mean it was very natural smvn betrayed in love will react like this only.
shlok trying his bit too
i would say u are damn gud in making erotic updates and ur glossary is very effective i mean whn i write smthing i run out of words though after finishing it lot many words pop in my mind, but u use words very beautifully and i would say its bcoz of ur prfct vocab!!!!!!!!

do tell me smthing to improve my vocad too!!!!!!



Edited by pt311288 - 07 January 2014 at 9:42am

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:32am | IP Logged
totally loved it...
 
continue soon...

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Posted: 07 January 2014 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Once again splendid turn up,,
Sudden realization and Aastha fear well  written.
Thank you for giving us such a RELITY based cute story.
Am cherish, cherishing day by day.or say din pe din aur beautiful.
Lovely. 

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