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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

Another centuryLOLLOLLOL
Now since I am upto date with all my comments i can finally ask for an updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Green update pleaseEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hahaha you know mera dhyan kahan hai aaj kal :p Need to find time to write it... without distractions :p

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by metoyou

100 pages! Yes, we can do this and we will do it!!! Dancing
I am enjoying this because I am still 'romancing' with my HR Embarrassed
But I can understand that your readers want AsYa's SR so if you don't mind...please update karo Smile


Hahaha lagta hai you won't be reading this story anymore... aapka happy ending toh mil gaya hai hahaha.
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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

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I know i am like super late but you know my reasons but the first thing that I am doing after being finally done with my paper is unresing so that my wonderful Green can read my comment and can smile while doing so coz i definitely am smiling while typing thisEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Well since I have already made you wait so much I am not gonaa keep you waiting for any longer...let's talk about the update nowEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

He found himself adjusting the collar of the forest green sherwani that his mother had bought for this occasion, unable to quit his nervous habit.
You know what I love about your writing so much is that you keep your characters true to the characters in QH..I love how you bring in their little habits and traits so that the readers can better connect and imagine that character and hats off to you for that...I can imagine Asad wearing a green sherwani and adjusting his collar so clearly as if he is standing right in front of meEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Asad swallowed slowly as he took in the breath-taking sight of Zoya in a beautiful green sharara, matching his clothes, with her dupatta covering her face slightly from the top, her quivering lower lip visible below it.
HAHA my Green and her obsession with Green never fails to make me smile Embarrassed
Poor Asad must be hard holding his breath while watching his musibeet dressed like fairyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedGreen takes me back to Mangalpur days when Zoya waers the Green Sharara and Asad kept staring at her during the "Aa gale lag ja" song...Ah the memoriesEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

"Bhaijaan, umr bhar dekhte rehna Mona darling... I mean bhabhi ko, but for now, at least take your seat for the nikaah first," Ayaan commented from behind him playfully, earning laughter from whoever was within earshot.
Can i just hug you for thisHugHugI am so glad that you didn't forget to mention Ayaan in the wedding coz there is no way I can imagine Asad getting married if Ayaan isn't there...I love you for not forgeting the important stuff manEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Zoya climbed carefully onto the platform, staring intently at the mehndi on her hands once she was seated. 
I just loved the whole part where you described Zoya' feelings and showed how nervously she kept staring at her mehndi...It was so beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedAnd the way she kept staring at her lap and refused to look up was so real and i felt that it was the most natural way to react in that situation.

Zoya found herself drawing small circles on her thigh as she contemplating whether or not to look up. She could see Asad's knees, since he was sitting across her, but that was all. Suddenly, she saw Asad's hand rest on his knee tentatively, before his index finger lifted a little, pointing upwards. Oh, so he knew exactly where she was looking, and where he'd prefer for her to look. Zoya huffed slightly before turning her head away completely, choosing to stare at the cushion on her side instead.
These lines are one of the most beautiful lines in the story so far.These lines are subtle and yet so powerfulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedAnd the whole idea of zoya not looking up but figuring out what asad wants just by looking at his fingers is very very beautiful,different and new.When I read these lines for the first time I was surprised how someone can think so something so subtle and portray it so beautifully...
I know you pretty well but still you manage to surprise me everytime Green and with just small little things and i love how your stories aren't about grand gestures but subtle ones and how you manage to make little things look so grand and sweet and make us go aww every single time...
You are just fantastic Green the best and I never smile so much as I do while reading your stories..they make me feel good,alive,happyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedand for that I would like to give you a big round of applauseClap..

Zoya blinked away the tears of relief that flooded her eyes as soon as the sound of his husky acceptance entered her ears. She wasn't even sure why his rejection worried her so much... didn't she want to end the charade herself last night?
He nodded at her ever so slightly as soon as she made eye contact with him, and her lips naturally parted at that time, poised to answer.
 while Asad and Zoya continued staring at each other through the curtain with bated breath, as the gravity of what had just transpired began to sink into them.
As I said above you make little things look so grand and portray even the smallest of gestures and feelings so beautifullyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Zoya blinking away her tears of relief to Asad assuring her with his slightest of nods to them just staring at each other trying to understand the gravity of the situation was just so beautifully writtenEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Green I don't have enough words to describe how beautiful and touching this update was I will just say i was smiling through when i read it and while typing my comment...
Thanku for making my time so beautiful with this lovely update

Love you loads GreenHeartHeart





Yeah I know you were busy so no issues at all (: I try to keep them in character as far as possible! Glad you think so too (: But you know what, I myself had totally forgotten that Zoya had worn a green sharara at the Mangalpur wedding!

Anyway I'm glad you liked my attempt at subtle romance! I was just trying to bring out their inner conflict, especially Zoya's. If that came through, my work is done (: Glad you liked it Anu!

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Awesome update Big smile
Update soon please Hug

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 2:01am | IP Logged
3 dayys n no updateee...
plzz plzz plzz updatee...


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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by goingreen

Originally posted by anushreemishra

Another centuryLOLLOLLOL
Now since I am upto date with all my comments i can finally ask for an updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Green update pleaseEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hahaha you know mera dhyan kahan hai aaj kal :p Need to find time to write it... without distractions :p
Haha don't I know ki aj kal aapka dhyaan kahan haiWinkWinkWink
if you need a time without any distractions you will find it very hard seeing how flustered you are even in your thoughtsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Maybe you can just imagine the comparisons and it will be easier to write

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 3:02am | IP Logged
and i know you well enough to know that this suhagraat won't be like those typical suhagraat! for all we know Zoya might go to sleep or maybe Asad enters to see her eating a pizza... uff a major turn off ROFL

do update soon. Haaye why don't I get a boyfriend resembling hritik roshan OuchLOL

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushreemishra

Originally posted by goingreen

Originally posted by anushreemishra

Another centuryLOLLOLLOL
Now since I am upto date with all my comments i can finally ask for an updateEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Green update pleaseEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hahaha you know mera dhyan kahan hai aaj kal :p Need to find time to write it... without distractions :p
Haha don't I know ki aj kal aapka dhyaan kahan haiWinkWinkWink
if you need a time without any distractions you will find it very hard seeing how flustered you are even in your thoughtsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Maybe you can just imagine the comparisons and it will be easier to write


Hahahaha now please don't come up with new conclusions after you read my next update... I was solely imagining Asad and Zoya in my head k!!

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